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发表于 2007-4-4 22:28:12 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
Issue130  14 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧!
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作者:寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间:626     522 words
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How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.
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I strongly agree with the speaker' assertion that how children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. However, I do not agree with another part of his assertion for my opposite opinion.

I concede that the speaker is on the right side of philosophy of this issue. Admittedly, to certain extent, the destiny of society is determined by how children are socialized. The human society is a socialized group. We people in the society are connected with each other by all kinds of relationship-affection, interest, technology, minds and so on. Such connection may be called socialization, accurately part of socialization. So what is socialization? In my opinion, the goal of society is to make human race live and develop in the world, and so socialization is that person learn all kinds of information from the world which comes from our anther for living in the earth. Now, may we ensure that if children are not socialized today the society would not gain its goal and may we human are in trouble or even danger.

However, the speaker should not be so afraid that we have not yet learned how to raise children. On the contrary, such things are done well. If we have a look at the history of human, could we find the evidence. From the record with a string, with some stones, with a book to now with a computer, it is clear that we society do well in succeed the knowledge of our anther with such carriers. Through learning such knowledge, the children in certain time are socialized, and the progress of society is also coming.  Especially nowadays, when the international network comes, the speed of socialization becomes more and more quick. With the international network, the information is transmitted timely, and children can learn such information more portable and corrective for its fast transmission speed and its more strict inspection all over the world. It is clear that when some information appears, first it can be transmitted to all parts of the world, and people in the different place will give some survey and their opinion about such information, with such process, some deep cognation will be gained, and then we may absorb it or enjoy the inspection in step.

By the way, there may be some problem in the process of raising children, but we society is replacing such err from time to time. For example, in 1990s, in our country, the education is prone to education for examination, which makes children only know the knowledge in the textbooks, and take no care of anything else. Even the children only can have a account of “1+1=2", but not tie his shoes. Such education causes the children have little capability to live the life. Fortunately, now our society has recognized such problem and now the education is to develop the diathesis of children. With such change, the children now are better apt to the world.

In sun, the speaker' assertion that how children are socialized today determines the destiny of society is greatly correct. However, in aspect of raising children, we society als
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