Nowadays the world is involving in overabundant scandals-some of which are really ones while some are fabricated just for certain goals-individual or political and so forth. Candidly speaking, scandals, to certain extent, works well in focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could, however, sometimes scandals especially fabricated ones bring about negative influence-no matter to people involving in scandals but also to the society with its people. Thus, when face one scandal, rational thinking should go before emotional behavior.（看了你的开头还以为这thus后面是你的观点呢，太误导人了，删了吧，这一句。）
记得你曾经给我建议：however是侧重与后者，怎么你的文章中对however后面的展开也蛮少哈？
Admittedly, revealed political scandals expose the negative aspect of a leader or a group of people, and thus give the following people a lesson that not to do that illegal or stupid thing again. Concerning Nixon, it is somewhat difficult for American people to memorize what contribution he had done to America with its people, however, the scandal he involved in seems to be the forever topic when people talk about politics, which leaves all politics a lesson not to play treat on masses. In addition, Kofi Annan, the former Secretary General, was somewhat innocent when he was involved in the oil-for-food scandals. Yet, it is this scandal that reveals the corruption concealed in Nation Union, which is just like an alarm to the present Secretary General Ban Ki-moon, who will learn much from this scandal and should know what he should do to resist the same or similar things happen again. Thus, when it comes to scandals, if they play an active role towards the society with its people, we should applaud to welcome them, since they play a role as an alarm alerting the followers.政治领域的scandal 好的影响—给后人教训Additionally, concerning the scandals revealed in the academia field, which more or less reflect the morbid system of academia, and also, to certain extent reflect the ill system of a society. Ever a professor of Tongji University when viewed by China Central Television (CCTV) to talk about this unwelcome phenomenon of academia scandal, he said (and I paraphrase):"academia scandals are no longer pure scandals. What they reflect is a morbid system of academia which loses its way and goes astray. Meanwhile, these scandals revealed before are just a little part, if we government do not adopt any measure, more serious ones will follow, out of question, which will do harm to our society." Accordingly, somewhat like the symptom of a "sick" academia system, scandals strand society with its people in a predicament.学术领域的scandal，reflect the morbid system of academia
However, overdue exposure of scandals, even if they are real one, may lead to unwelcome aftermath.（sometimes scandals especially fabricated ones bring about negative influence-no matter to people involving in scandals but also to the society with its people.这是你的短首观点句，你跟你这段的小论点比较下感觉有没有出入？）Take Clinton for example. When talking about the scandal Clinton involved in, many people would say it is a lost for America and its mass. The talent as a leader of Clinton cannot be denied, and his contribution to American economics should not be deleted. However, the scandal ended his career as America president and maybe will further bog him in political field. On concerning the scandal itself, at the same time, we should realize what scandals bring about has surpassed the scandals themselves, and leaves us somewhat unpleased end, which we do not want to happen. Thus, when a scandal happens, we should measure its cost against the benefits of the people involving in this scandal brings about. Maybe then we can know how to treat this scandal.另外小问下，你的观点是不是有点姑息养奸的意思哈？In conclusion, the important role played by scandals should not be overlooked, however we should not overemphasize them. Just like everything has its two sides-one good; one bad, scandals cannot escape this fate. Should not? 这个issue是回答是或不是的，而不应该说应该不应该。
文章有了例子就是充实多了，这么多例子，很不错哦
遣词造句方面和语法方面要向你学习，不多评价了。 |
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