ISSUE38 [Victors]小组第一次作业

jennetrjUID: 2275453

写ISSUE真是痛苦，虽然超时很多，好歹写完了，G友多指点！

38"In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books."

2007-4-13  60min    535 words

观点：电视与书本作为不同的载体各有优势，书为主，余为辅。
1.电视作为视觉媒体之一具有生动、形象的优点，提供了纸张媒体----书籍同样提供的
    信息。
1）  电视：不受时间、空间限制
2）  知识的形式多样，生动，impressive                              
2。电视节目的日益商业化和充斥暴力、色情对于缺乏分辨力的青少年存在危害的潜质
1）  电视暴力与青少年犯罪
2）  广告浪费时间
3）  沉迷于电视荒废学业
3．书籍的优点：提炼精华，传承千年
                            重复性，系统性
4. 知识的学习累积随着历史、社会的发展载体多元化，每种有其利弊，需结合多种扬长避短，最大程度扩大量质，无论何种时期，书本是不可替代的，其他媒介起到辅助作用，关键是个人学会思考、评判和创新。


Is reading as important as it was in this age of television, or could television replace books as the main medium for learning? The speaker claims so. However, I concede the merit of television as a supplemental resource for learning, books should still serve as the basic form for nurturing people with knowledge and thoughts.

Living in the age of television, any one has the impression that we can revise our way of pursuing knowledge in a more vivid and compelling way--watching television. Television, new apparatus appeared in last century changed our life styles: switching on American Morning while having breakfast which was supposed to be with The New York Times, less time reading after dinner with family members but sitting in front of the TV set enjoying exploring the world via Discovery, seldom showing up in community clubs since time occupied by talk shows on CNN. Staying at home with television plugged-in, we are connected with the world in every minute, able to keep up with any reform of knowledge.

While television program engenders us to get varieties of knowledge in first time, first place, more and more commercials, television violence and porn videos are easily to be approached by adolescents, which do a great harm to their characteristic growth and academical development. One nationwide study carried out last year by researchers from Ministry of Law China shows that crime rate of teenagers who are addicted to television violence is three times as much as that of the ones without such experience. Conscientious about such moral degeneration and potential social deterioration, our control in broadcasting and parent surveillance seems to be so feeble. Even under rigid censorship and effective surveillance, adolescents could hardly immune from television addiction, which occupies considerable time supposed to study. We all have the experience of failure in quiz simply because of watching too much television, falling in asleep in class for staying up before tv till sunset or being absentminded on class recalling last night's soap. Television not only provides us alternative way of purchasing knowledge, but entraps us into the missing world.

Returning back to our conservative media of knowledge, we could not overlook the value of books to providing human knowledge and transmitting thoughts. While reading, we could browse any abstract region or wander in any part of the history as we want. We could be one quantum adventuring the space trip from outer space to earth as what is predicted in Eistein's Theory of Relativity. Or might we be under the barrage of The Civil War back to the 18th century North America. No matter where we are, what kind of religion we hold or how well we earn our lives, we have the same access to knowledge and intelligence.

In the final analysis, in any time along the history we have quite a lot method to get ourselves educated, among which reading is the basic element for establishing personality and knowledge. Reading nurtures human mind from the every beginning of literacy, books are the treasure we get from our ancestors or peers. While television or any other form of media, Internet for instance, could serve as the supplementary resources to accomplish the goal of education.

wy9187UID: 2200959

看了好久,就是觉得写的比我自己的好,羡慕ing...
下面有一部分是我的疑问,也算是请教了!!!
后面几段感觉好,由于自己能力有限,所以看不出有哪里不妥的!!!
前面的问题,希望能够给些解释,因为我也不是很理解.谢谢!
Is reading as important as it was in this age of television, or could television replace books as the main medium for learning? The speaker claims so. However,[此处转折后内容为作者观点，但转折前是否应有表示“I”想法的内容呢?] I concede the merit of television as a supplemental resource for learning, [此处是否可以添加表转折的连词？However]books should still serve as the basic form for nurturing people with knowledge and thoughts.Living in the age of television, any one has the impression that we can revise our way [是否可以换一个词?同一句中出现两次way不知是否合适]of pursuing knowledge in a more vivid and compelling way--watching television. Television, new apparatus appeared in last century changed our life styles: switching on American Morning while having breakfast which was supposed to be with The New York Times, less time reading after dinner with family members but sitting in front of the TV set enjoying exploring the world via Discovery, seldom showing up in community clubs since time occupied by talk shows on CNN[好长的一句啊！开始没看懂，后来仔细看过感觉真是好！学习ing…]. Staying at home with television plugged-in, we are connected with the world in every minute, able to keep up with any reform of knowledge.While television program engenders us to get varieties of knowledge in first time, first place, more and more commercials, television violence and porn videos are easily to be approached by adolescents, which do a great harm to their characteristic growth and academical[是否?academic] development. One nationwide study carried out last year by researchers from Ministry of Law China shows that crime rate of teenagers who are addicted to television violence is three times as much as that of the ones without such experience. Conscientious about such moral degeneration and potential social deterioration, our control in broadcasting and parent surveillance seems to be so feeble. Even under rigid censorship and effective surveillance, adolescents could hardly immune from television addiction, which occupies considerable time supposed to study. We all have the experience of failure in quiz simply because of watching too much television, falling in asleep in class for staying up before tv till sunset or being absentminded on class recalling last night's soap. Television not only provides us alternative way of purchasing knowledge, but entraps us into the missing world.Returning back to our conservative media of knowledge, we could not overlook the value of books to providing human knowledge and transmitting thoughts. While reading, we could browse any abstract region or wander in any part of the history as we want. We could be one quantum adventuring the space trip from outer space to earth as what is predicted in Eistein's Theory of Relativity. Or might we be under the barrage of The Civil War back to the 18th century North America. No matter where we are, what kind of religion we hold or how well we earn our lives, we have the same access to knowledge and intelligence. In the final analysis, in any time along the history we have quite a lot method to get ourselves educated, among which reading is the basic element for establishing personality and knowledge. Reading nurtures human mind from the every beginning of literacy, books are the treasure we get from our ancestors or peers. While television or any other form of media, Internet for instance, could serve as the supplementary resources to accomplish the goal of education.

[ 本帖最后由 wy9187 于 2007-4-15 19:39 编辑 ]

15348664UID: 2269142

楼主把TV批的真很，简直让我声泪俱下。

however,依在下愚见，

以TV不好的方面和Book好的方面相提并论，而不将两者在同一层次上去比较，

虽然语言华丽优美，是否论证逻辑缺乏力度？