生如夏花小组-第三次作业

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作文:
What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

To be a good boss require many excellent qualities which beyond his subordinates, thus he could be sincerely convinced by them. In my opinion, those excellent qualities contains many but the most significant ones are knowledge, experience and good characters as I will state paticularly as follows.

First of all, profound professional knowledge should become the basic thing a good boss owns. For we all know that there is no born-boss, any boss at first was a jackeroo or an employee and gradually made effort to learn relative knowledges and other things, then step by step he was elevated to the boss position mainly because of his superb professional knowledge which is better than others. Thus mastering the subject that the boss is involved well is a foundment standard to measure whether he or she is a good boss.

Meanwhile as he accumulated such knowdge he also acquires another important quality of experience. Since he becomes a boss, what he would do is not only accomplishing assignments skillful but also conducting others, his underlines to do it well. If the boss is experienced in management, of course both he and his team would gain great achievement for he owns the ability and experience to lead them in the right direction and make success.

Moreover, another quality that is as indispensable as the two above is the kind characters such as patience, gentleness and so on. For whether employees would respect his boss depends not only on his capacity, but his personalities as well. Only a knowledgable and experienced boss also owns a good temper and makes his subodinates feel he is easy to go with, could the boss be regarded as a good boss by crowd.

All in all, anyone I consider is a good boss should has the three qualities as we have talked above at least. I suppose that nobody deny such a boss is good one, if the boss has the qualities of profound professional knowledge, plentiful experience and good characters of his own at the same time.

口语:do you prefer to live with roomates or you prefer to live by youself
Well, I think I would prefer to live with roomates rather them living alone. For having roomates means we will help each other and gain helps from each other, such as I would help one when she has trouble in study, and another may get inspired from my way of thinking. Furthermore, living with other people also predicates we could share our interests, feelings and so on, and that means our life will be plentiful and colorful, at least we never feel lonely.

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What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

To be a good boss require many excellent qualities which beyond his subordinates, thus he could be sincerely convinced by them(这句句子有点头重脚轻，意思到位，但读起来不太舒服）. In my opinion, those excellent qualities contains many but the most significant ones are knowledge, experience and good characters as I will state paticularly as follows.
标准化开头

First of all, profound professional knowledge should become the basic thing a good boss owns. For we all know that there is no born-boss, any boss at first was（begins to be as) a jackeroo or an employee and gradually made effort to learn relative knowledges and other things(句子写的好长，拆分下吧，读起来一般）, then step by step he was elevated to the boss position mainly because of his superb professional knowledge which is better than others. Thus mastering the subject that the boss is involved well is a foundment standard to measure whether he or she is a good boss.

这段你阐述的是BOSS是如何做到BOSS这个位子的。由于是他有知识的原因，但是如果这里你写点由于这些BOSS有知识所以，他们更出色的例子就更好了


Meanwhile as he accumulated such knowdge he also acquires another important quality of experience. Since he becomes a boss, what he would do is not only accomplishing assignments skillful but also conducting（名词？） others, his underlines to do it well. If the boss is experienced in management, of course both he and his team would gain great achievement for he owns the ability and experience to lead them in the right direction and make success.

写的不错，但知识和经验是不是有点重复？？


Moreover, another quality that is as indispensable as the two above is the kind characters such as patience, gentleness and so on. For whether employees would respect his boss depends not only on his capacity, but his personalities as well. Only a knowledgable and experienced boss also（读不顺） owns a good temper and makes his subodinates feel he is easy to go with（这句不错，赞一下）, could the boss be regarded as a good boss by crowd.

这段感觉都是在说道理，没有什么理由，但读起来还不错。


All in all, anyone I consider is a good boss should has the three qualities as we have talked above at least.（这个词提前吧） I suppose that nobody deny such a boss is good one, if the boss has the qualities of profound professional knowledge, plentiful experience and good characters of his own at the same time.

结尾可以。总体来讲1，2两层有点重复，句子长度写的太长，给人感觉不是很优美，但又可以反映出你的AW功底，加油。希望下次看到你的一点短句


口语:do you prefer to live with roomates or you prefer to live by youself
Well, I think I would prefer to live with roomates rather them living alone. For having roomates means we will help each other and gain helps from each other, such as I would help one when she has trouble in study, and another may get inspired from my way of thinking. Furthermore, living with other people also predicates we could share our interests, feelings and so on, and that means our life will be plentiful and colorful, at least we never feel lonely.

口语很不错，有细节。我评你满分，但同样注意竟然少用长句子，如果用也可以注意读的时候停顿。我口语烂，就不说了

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非常非常的感谢....我会注意的