生如夏花小组第四次作业

PapillonFoxUID: 2171945

Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Which of these two opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Should the government invest as much money as possible in exploration of outer space or spending them on basic needs of our earth? As more and more emphases are drawn on exploring new space in modern society, the application of novel technology does have merits in development of human being. However, the most appropriate choice here, in my opinion, should primarily focus on the deterioration of our earth.

As is known to all, the emergence of new technology for exploring outer space could unnecessarily achieve the original purpose of human. With the development of modern world, many people begin to invent novel technologies with a view of outer space. Star craft, rocket and space station have cost billions of dollars at least. Indeed, the mystery of universe always attracts human attention and propels them
to seek what will exist out of the earth. Since the Apollo entered into the real space, people became more enthusiastic in shaping so imaginable a process that often be shown in science film. Nevertheless, the advancement of science should be carried out step by step. Any disadvantageous wishes for quick success and instant benefit would result in numerous wastes, even the catastrophe without any preparation. The film of ‘The Alien’ would give us a vivid indication.

Next, there are many severe problems should be settled as soon as possible. Our earth has been suffering energetic crisis, environment pollution, climate warming and so on, which could lead directly to human life for poverty, starvation and death. While encounter a bagger in the street or watch a girl squats outside the classroom, couldn’t the government offer them more help by extra funds? The earth now, without any exaggeration, likes a big bomb under our feet. Once blow up, never regenerate again. So, the government should spend sufficient money in dealing with the basic problems of earth as a primary goal. It assures development and advancement of the natural atmosphere, as well as the well-being of people during hard time.

In sum, the government should spend more money for our earth but not the exploration of outer space. Facing at infinite pressure from the masses and the media, it would be better to take enough care of our home.


Do you agree that childhood is the happiest (or precious) time in life

Well, I totally agree that childhood is the happiest time in my life. At present, I always think of that beautiful time. First, I can do what is my favorite without any pressure. There is no need to consider tiny things. I can find happiness from playing games. Secondly, I think the most important is that I know some knowledge about biology. I often catch dragonfly, butterfly and so on with friends. And finally, it becomes my major field. Luckily, my parents make some VCR and photos about my childhood. Enjoying those records recalls my happiest childhood now.

cuiwenliUID: 2297488

Should the government invest as much money as possible in exploration of outer space or spending them on basic needs of our earth? As more and more emphases are drawn on exploring new space in modern society, the application of novel technology does have merits in development of human being. However, the most appropriate choice here, in my opinion, should primarily focus on the deterioration of our earth.

As is known to all, the emergence of new technology for exploring outer space could unnecessarily achieve the original purpose of human. With the development of modern world, many people begin to invent novel (重复，换个词)technologies with a view of outer space. Star craft, rocket and space station have cost billions of dollars at least. Indeed, the mystery of universe always attracts human attention and propels them to seek what will exist out of the earth. Since the Apollo entered into the real space, people became more enthusiastic in shaping so imaginable a process that often be shown in science film（in shaping an imaginable process which often be shown in…,这句读的好拗口）. Nevertheless, the advancement of science should be carried out step by step. Any disadvantageous （不恰当）wishes for quick success and instant benefit would result in numerous wastes, even the catastrophe without any preparation. The film of ‘The Alien’ would give us a vivid indication.（这个例子和你的观点相反呀）（前半部分写的笔墨太多了，重点不突出，老美看了搞不清，不知你到底要表达什么意思）

Next, there are many severe problems should be settled as soon as possible. Our earth has been suffering energetic crisis, environment pollution, climate warming and so on, which could（directly） lead to human life for poverty, starvation and death. While encounter a bagger in the street or watch a girl squats outside the classroom, couldn’t the government offer them more help by extra funds? The earth now, without any exaggeration, likes a big bomb under our feet. Once blow up, never regenerate again(比喻用的不错). So, the government should spend sufficient money in dealing with the basic problems of earth as a primary goal. It assures development and advancement of the natural atmosphere, as well as the well-being of people during hard time.

In sum, the government should spend more money for our earth but not the exploration of outer space. Facing at infinite pressure from the masses and the media（这点在前面没提过，最好和前文呼应）, it would be better to take enough care of our home.（写的很好，用词很到位，通篇布局合理，论述透彻，一看就有G的风格，如果没猜错的话，^_^；400多字足以拿高分了，如果是在规定时间内完成的；一个错词都没有，一定是用过WORD啦；觉得列出三点理由更充分，自斟…）

[ 本帖最后由 cuiwenli 于 2007-7-12 00:26 编辑 ]

cuiwenliUID: 2297488

Do you agree that childhood is the happiest (or precious) time in life
Well, I totally agree that childhood is the happiest time in my life. At present, I always think of that beautiful time. First, I can do what is my favorite without any pressure. There is no need to consider tiny things. I can find happiness from playing games. Secondly, I think the most important is that I know some knowledge about biology. I often catch dragonfly, butterfly and so on （with friends，删了，多余）. And finally, it becomes my major field. Luckily, my parents make some VCR and photos about my childhood. Enjoying those records recalls my happiest childhood now.
(在45S说完，时间有点紧，偶试了一下，除非阁下语速较快；开头，结尾，中间三点理由，经典模版,只可惜比起作文来略显逊色。)