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leadenskyUID: 2251888

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It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

We have a lot of facilities in our community, such as super market, library, and some small convenience stores, but there has no restaurant. If our community has the chance to build a new restaurant, I would have not doubt to support this plan, as it can facilitate our life greatly. In the following discussion, I will reason and provide evidence to support my view.
Firstly, after one day’s hard working, we may feel very tired can boring to cook after a busy day. If we eat at home, we have to spend at least an hour to shop for groceries, and even more for cooking; after the dinner, cleaning up the meal will also take up several minutes. By the time all is finished, we almost have no time for entertainment with friends and families. If there is a restaurant built in our neighborhood, eating out would save me a lot of time and would allow the people in the community to enjoy more time with their families.
Besides, a new restaurant in our community can support our local economy and supply more employment opportunities. The tax paid by the new restaurant can be used to improve our community environment; more local people will be hired and unemployment rate will be reduced. As people’s income increases, they will be able to spend more on improving their quality of life. Also, a new restaurant could potentially attract business from the surrounding neighborhood, bringing more investment into our community.
Admittedly, it is true that a new restaurant would make some pollution and noise to our neighborhood. No one would want to see drunken people wandering in front of our house and shouting loudly; also no one would want to see the dirty water that the restaurant emit to our rivers. Nonetheless, these problems do not constitute a sufficient oppose for this plan, since its advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. Also, the disadvantages can be avoided by some strict laws.
In sum, I concede that there would be some potential harm to our community when a new restaurant is built. But everything has it’s two sides, we just need to balence them. It is obviously that a new restaurant can bring so many benefits. So I strongly support to build a new restaurant in our neighborhood.

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[ 本帖最后由 leadensky 于 2007-7-21 18:15 编辑 ]

lizzy1986UID: 2281654

修改见附件:)

leadenskyUID: 2251888

多谢修改。。。