生如夏花小组--第11次作业

森林116UID: 2272614

独立写作: (个人成功)

The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

When it refers to a famous saying of “Never, never give up”, people’s opinions are divergent on such a controversial issue. The overwhelming majority would support the saying, others however, take the negative attitude as they perfer to versatility rather than insist. From the personal perspective, I agree with the former as my inclination for the following reasons.

Firstly, in learning aspect, we need the spirit called “Never. Never give up.” Since there is no born talent, nobody will deny the difficulties and depression they met at the beginning of learning something, at this time, those students who choose “never give up” finally harvest progress while others choosing “give up” will still accompany with thees difficulties and depression. It is common to see many students whose grades were very low at first exam then becomes brilliant ones in their classes, for they always believe in “never give up”.

Furthermore, in other aspects we also need this spirit. Taking working as an instance, many employees and rookies in every walk of life may fail to adapt to the new surroundings, the pressure and the competetions among colleages, however, only those people who never abadon their dreams finally become millionaires even billionaires. What’s more, in our daily life, this saying will also benefit us a lot. Such as one of my best friends who was originally very fat, since she decide to go on diet and take exersice every day, she finally get a slim figure after half od a year.

All in all, from what I have discussed about, we may safely come to the conclusion that we need “never never give up” in every side of life, only we keep on trying and never stop struggling for goals, could we finally gain what we want.

口语:

说说最喜欢的一个room，自己家的或者是其他地方的。

Well, my room is my favourite place of my home. It is not very large but I stiil enjoy it very much. Because I store many things which is precious to me in my room, such as some letters, cards, some old books I used in childhood and many lovely dolls.I have accompanied with it for many years and left too much joy and memories. My room is also my honest partner which will welcome me and look after me forever.（汗。。。现在居然说不到时间了///）

[ 本帖最后由 森林116 于 2007-7-20 23:44 编辑 ]

sljljUID: 2229927

独立写作: (个人成功)

The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

When it refers to a famous saying of “Never, never give up”, people’s opinions are divergent on such a controversial issue. The overwhelming majority would support the saying, others however, take the negative attitude as they perfer to versatility rather than insist. From the personal perspective, I agree with the former as my inclination for the following reasons.

标准的开头哈，无懈可击。感觉是有模板的吧

Firstly, in learning aspect 这个我不知道去哪里查证，感觉有点怪, we need the spirit called “Never. Never give up.” Since there is no born talent, nobody will deny the difficulties and depression they met at the beginning of learning something, at this time, those students who choose “never give up” finally harvest progress while others choosing “give up” will still accompany with these difficulties and depression. It is common to see many students whose grades were very low at first exam then becomes brilliant ones in their classes, for they always believe in “never give up”.

Furthermore, in other aspects we also need this spirit. Take working as an instance, many employees and rookies in every walk of life 这个短语很好，学习下may fail to adapt to the new surroundings, the pressure and the competetions among colleages, however, only those people who never abadon their dreams finally become millionaires even billionaires. What’s more, in our daily life, this saying will also benefit us a lot. Such as one of my best friends who was originally very fat, since she decide to go on diet and take exersice every day, she finally get a slim figure after half of a year.

这个减肥的例子很好哎

All in all, from what I have discussed about, we may safely come to the conclusion that we need “never never give up” in every side of life, only we keep on trying and never stop struggling for goals, could we finally gain what we want.

最后那个句子倒装很好，就是不知道only后面是不是可以接句子？

总的我觉得逻辑非常清晰，举例也到位，语言不错，有小个别的我用蓝色标记出来值得商榷

口语:

说说最喜欢的一个room，自己家的或者是其他地方的。

Well, my room is my favourite place of my home. It is not very large but I stiil enjoy it very much. Because I store many things which is precious to me in my room, such as some letters, cards, some old books I used in childhood and many lovely dolls.I have accompanied with it for many years and left too much joy and memories. My room is also my honest partner which will welcome me and look after me forever.（汗。。。现在居然说不到时间了///）

口语我觉得这个话题好像不怎么好说哈，我也没有几句说的，没到时间

anyway，一起+U