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What are some of the qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer.

People have divergent opinions toward the same thing, not to mention this controversial issue. When it comes to the issue that to be a good parent, what are the qualities people should have, distinctly response will be offered from people to this question. From my personal perspective, I think that honesty, fairness, responsibility as well as optimism are the basic qualities to be a good parent.

It is must be acknowledged that in modern developed society, honesty is the essence requirement for people to communicate to each other and make friends. If the parents who do not have this quality, the children may learn from their parents that liar is necessary to achieve their goals. When they grow up in the future, they will find that no one trusts them, let alone to make friends with them. In addition, when children are used to tell a lie, it is not easy for them to quit this bad behavior and which can lead them to crime when their age increase. Thus honesty is the vital foundation for people to be a good parent.

Moreover, fairness and responsibility are Indispensable parts of the qualities to be a good parent. With the improvement of society, people’s living level has greatly enhanced, but people take wealth as the most important thing in their lives and the spirit to help and assist others become low. Thus parents who have fairness and responsibility will great influence their children. When children grow up to adults, they will take their responsibility to themselves and others. People in this spirit will be benefit to society. Therefore, to be good parents, fairness and responsibility are crucial elements.

Finally, with the quick development of society, people have to suffer more pressure from their works and family. Optimism is pivotal part for them to adapt to intense competition in this society. Thus parents who have optimism will transmit it to their children, which can make the children more strength during the process of growing up and can overcome difficulty and hardship. More importantly, children who have optimism will be more positive and active in solving problems they confront in their lives.

In sum, honesty, fairness, responsibility as well as optimism are the basic qualities for people to be good parents. Of course, to be good parents, people have to posses other qualities, but in my opinion, these qualities I mentioned above are the vital parts.
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1.If your friends from other country are going to visit your country,  where do you suggest them to go? And state your reasons.
2. 有的人旅游时喜欢直奔目的地,有的人喜欢兼顾游览沿途景观,你prefer?


1,if my friends from other country are going to visit my country, the place I suggest them to go is Tibet. When at 19 years old, my parents had been to Tibet with me in summer vacation. Where you can find blue sky and inhale fresh air as well as quiet atmosphere. In addition, you will find that you are far away the noise and pressure of quick pace living in city. Of course, you can enjoy yourself with the simple living way of people in Tibet and their friendly passion to the strangers.

2,I prefer to visit the landscapes along the way to the destination. There are two major reasons for my opinion. Firstly, the goal to tour is enjoy myself, so if the landscapes along the way to the destination is well and can offer me pleasure, why do not for me to appreciate them.
Secondly, because of the crowd people in the destination, so when I arrive at there, it is possible for me to get a good mood to look around. And if the landscape along the way to destination can provide the same effect, I will enjoy myself with them.
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发表于 2007-7-23 12:03:23 |只看该作者
修改见文档,口语还是传录音吧,这个样子看不出来什么。

口语第一题,后面那个of course读起来不通顺,改成also或者what's more 比较好

口语第二题,why do not for me to appreciate them 这个一点也不口语化,直接why not appreciate them就可以了
                  because of the crowd people in the destination, so when I arrive at there,这个错误刚学英语的都可以找出来吧;)

Anyway, 赶紧把你的录音传上来,这样更容易发现你的不足

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