生如夏花第12次小组作业--sljlj

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独立写作: (生活习惯)

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

There are numerous kinds of definitions of happiness in the world. One of them is “doing things that you like". But can people always do things that they like and avoid that they dislike? To me, obviously the answer is not. There is also a word called "responsibility" in the world. Sometimes people do have to do things that they dislike or even hate.

To begin with, sometimes people do things they do not like for their own sake. Children always want to have some ice cream, even before dinner, while parents prohibit them doing so. Thus children have to stand the lure of delicious ice cream. Beautiful girls do not like to practice, but they have to do so to keep slim. Drug additioners like Heroin a lot, but, of course, they cannot abandon themselves if they try to be healthy. From what I mentioned above, it is safely to say people sometimes have to do things that they do not like for their own sake.

Further more, more than often, people have to do things that they do not enjoy doing for the sake of the society. Since people are social animals, it is the rule of the society that forces people to do something and not to do something. For example, drivers cannot drive on the freeway surpassing the speed limit; firefighters have to be ready for a mission anytime; policeman should try their best to maintain the security. If people just do what they like in spite of the society's rule, the world would become a mess.

All in all, I strongly deem that people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing, not only for their own sake, but the society's demand.  



口语:

  Paired-choice: part-time job/ summer employment是否对选择职业有帮助。
Well, for this question, I think summer employment is more helpful for career choose then part-time job. Since summer employment contains continuous time, people in summer employment are more likely to get to know the job exactly and precisely, which is of great significance to career choosing. What’s more, summer employment has less contradiction with the study, while part-time job may influence the normal study. For the reasons above, I deem that summer employment are more helpful for career choosing.


这次口语是没有说，直接想了打的。感觉还有点没有进入状态，希望在考试之前能够有自己的模板。
作文一如既往的不令人满意。首先句式的多样性考虑和行文的时间相冲突；其二，和语法正确有一定的冲突。如果用简单句时间就比较充足语法错误也可以少一点。本来想按issue的思维来，但是发现t的话题确实简单些，有时候也觉得不知道说什么。比如今天的这个，做自己不喜欢的事情，肯定是有的啊，怎么论证？想了半天分两方面，之前还想着要按学生工作的人和退休的写。不知所云了。就这样吧

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生如夏花第12次小组作业--sljlj

独立写作: (生活习惯)

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

There are numerous kinds of definitions of happiness in the world. One of them is “doing things that you like". But can people always do things that they like and avoid that they dislike? To me, obviously the answer is not. There is also a word called "responsibility" in the world. Sometimes people do have to do things that they dislike or even hate.[这句和后面的行文没多大关系吧。]

To begin with, sometimes people do things they do not like for their own sake. Children always want to have some ice cream, even before dinner, while parents prohibit them doing so. Thus children have to stand the lure of delicious ice cream. [此处+个connecting word吧，感觉转的挺快的"also/moreover...."]Beautiful girls do not like to practice, but they have to do so to keep slim. Drug additioners like Heroin a lot, but, of course, they cannot abandon themselves if they try to be healthy. From what I mentioned above, it is safely to say people sometimes have to do things that they do not like for their own sake.

Furthermore, more than often, people have to do things that they do not enjoy doing for the sake of the society. Since people are social animals, it is the rule of the society that forces people to do something and not to do something. For example, drivers cannot drive on the freeway surpassing the speed limit; firefighters have to be ready for a mission anytime; policeman should try their best to maintain the security.[嗯，这个写的不错！排比吧。] If people just do what they like in spite of the society's rule, the world would become a mess.

All in all, I strongly deem that people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing, not only for their own sake, but the society's demand.  



口语:

Paired-choice: part-time job/ summer employment是否对选择职业有帮助。
Well, for this question, I think summer employment is more helpful for career choose then part-time job. Since summer employment contains continuous time, people in summer employment are more likely to get to know the job exactly and precisely, which is of great significance to career choosing. What’s more, summer employment has less contradiction with the study, while part-time job may influence the normal study. For the reasons above, I deem that summer employment are more helpful for career choosing.写的挺好的啊。。。只是关于这个题目到底是比较的二选一，还是二题合一。。现在我有点confused....


这次口语是没有说，直接想了打的。感觉还有点没有进入状态，希望在考试之前能够有自己的模板。
作文一如既往的不令人满意。首先句式的多样性考虑[学习。。]和行文的时间相冲突；其二，和语法正确有一定的冲突。如果用简单句时间就比较充足语法错误也可以少一点。本来想按issue的思维来，但是发现t的话题确实简单些，有时候也觉得不知道说什么。比如今天的这个，做自己不喜欢的事情，肯定是有的啊，怎么论证？想了半天分两方面，之前还想着要按学生工作的人和退休的写。不知所云了。就这样吧
嗯，这个问题确实值得想想；是不是T的作文也非得给出一个论点，然后再论之。。我貌似就是写了两个方面，不知道算算跑题。。恐怖。。