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sigtemUID: 2169461

写作：
Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Different people may like eating food at different places. Someone likes to eat food at dinning halls or restaurants while some others do not like to. In my view, eating food at home is better.

First of all, compared with eating at home, hygiene is a problem when we eating at restaurants. I think hygiene conditions at some restaurants are not good. As the managers of restaurants are not responsible for your health, they may not try their best to provide clean dinning environment for guests. Some plates or bowls are not washed cleanly after used, while some vegetables are not washed well before cooked. Moreover, the mice and fly is found everywhere in some dirty restaurant. This situation may cause epidemic spreads. In this case, people may get ill if have dinners there. But as for eating at home, the situation is totally different. Forks and knives are used only for ourselves, and can be carefully washed after meals. We also try our best to clean meat and vegetables. So eating at home is good for our health.

Secondly, the price of some dishes of restaurants is not low. As the restaurants make profit from providing food, the price we have to pay for is much higher than the cost that we cook meals by ourselves. Meanwhile, the bosses of restaurants have to pay for taxes, which causes the price higher and higher. For example, in the Sampo Restaurant, which is nearest restaurant of my apartment, we have to pay 20 yuan RMB for a bowl of noodle only. That is unbelievable, as it is worth less than 1.2 yuan indeed. As I do not want to pay extra money for food, I do not like eating food in restaurants.

Besides the above reasons, there are some other factors that make me like eating food at home, such as flavor. I cannot get adapted to the flavor of foods cooked by others.

In sum, I prefer to eat at home rather than restaurants because of the poor hygiene conditions, high price, and some other factors, such as flavor of foods.

口语:
Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

I think water resource is disappearing rapidly, especially in China. We must have the sense to save water. In the west of China, people live in some areas have only 3 liters of water everyday for use. This is unbelievable. And the total amount of water has decreased 30 percent of it as ten years ago. So if we do not make great effort to save water, we will die of thirst definitely.

[ 本帖最后由 sigtem 于 2007-7-23 17:51 编辑 ]

四海为家06UID: 2295809

写作：
Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Different people may like eating food at different places. Someone likes to eat food at dinning halls or restaurants while some others do not like to. In my view, eating food at home is better.

First of all, compared with eating at home, hygiene is a problem when we eating at restaurants. I think hygiene conditions at some restaurants are not good. As the managers of restaurants are not responsible for your health（觉得这里有问题，其实你去吃饭，经理就是有责任对你的健康负责的）, they may not try their best to provide clean dinning environment for guests. Some plates or bowls are not washed cleanly after used, while some vegetables are not washed well before cooked. Moreover, the mice and fly （用复数） is found everywhere in some dirty restaurant. This situation may cause epidemic spreads. In this case, people may get ill if have dinners there. But as for eating at home, the situation is totally different. Forks and knives are used only for ourselves, and can be carefully washed after meals. We also try our best to clean meat and vegetables. So eating at home is good for our health. （这段的例子很好，但感觉句子的结构简单了点，润色一下吧）
Secondly, the price of some dishes of restaurants is not low. As the restaurants make profit from providing food,（饭馆挣钱并不是靠提供饮食，而是因为额外提供了饮食的环境以及一系列服务） the price we have to pay for is much higher than the cost that we cook meals by ourselves. Meanwhile, the bosses of restaurants have to pay for taxes, which causes the price higher and higher. For example, in the Sampo Restaurant, which is nearest restaurant of my apartment, we have to pay 20 yuan RMB for a bowl of noodle only. That is unbelievable, as it is worth less than 1.2 yuan indeed. As I do not want to pay extra money for food, I do not like eating food in restaurants.（例子里建议讲点TAX的东西，否则TAX那句没例子支撑）
Besides the above reasons, there are some other factors that make me like eating food at home, such as flavor. I cannot get adapted to the flavor of foods cooked by others.

In sum, I prefer to eat at home rather than restaurants because of the poor hygiene conditions, high price, and some other factors, such as flavor of foods.

（！！我们的观点出人意料的一致，分论点都一样。。。）口语:
Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

I think water resource is disappearing rapidly, especially in China. We must have the sense to save water. In the west of China, people live in some areas have only 3 liters of water everyday for use. This is unbelievable. And the total amount of water has decreased 30 percent of it as ten years ago. So if we do not make great effort to save water, we will die of thirst definitely. （太少了吧，30秒就读完了）

bakakatsingUID: 2383167

Every people have their own eating habits. Some of them prefer eating at dinning halls or resturants while some others prefer eating at home. Despite the popularity that people are ubiquitous to eat in restaurants, I , Personally, prefer eating at home to resturants.(立場)

First of all, compared with eating at home, hygiene is a serious problem eating at restaurants. I think that the hygienic conditions of some restaurants are not fine. As the managers of restaurants are not responsible for your health, they may not try their best to provide clean dinning environment for guests.(他們是有責任負責我們的健康, 我想要刪掉這) Plates or bowls may not be washed cleanly before used while some vegetables are not washed well before cooked. Moreover, the mice and flies are ubiquitous in some dirty restaurant. It may leads to epidemic spreads. Thus, people may get food-poisoning. As for eating at home, the situation is totally different. Forks and knives are used only for ourselves, and can be carefully washed after meals. We also try our best to clean meat and vegetables. Eating at home is good for our health.

What's more, the price of some dishes of restaurants is expensive. As the restaurants make profit from providing food, the price we have to pay for is much higher than that we cook meals by ourselves. Meanwhile, the bosses of restaurants have to pay taxes, which would higher the cost of dishes. For example, in the Sampo Restaurant, which is the nearest restaurant of my apartment, we have to pay 20 yuan RMB for a bowl of noodle only. That is unbelievable, as it is worth less than 1.2 yuan indeed. As I do not want to pay extra money for food, I do not like eating food in restaurants.

Besides, there are some other reasons for my preference of eating at home, such as flavor. I cannot adapt to the flavor of food which is cooked by others.

In sum, I prefer to eat at home rather than restaurants due to the hygienic conditions, price of dishes, and flavor of food.



您好像比較喜歡用"As", 但看上去比較累贅。有些字我刪了, 但我不知道怎樣告訴您, 所以您還是重新看一次吧。而且您要改善一下直接把中英轉做英文的習慣, 那樣文章會很怪, 因為英文的文法和中文的十分不同。

[ 本帖最后由 bakakatsing 于 2007-8-16 15:14 编辑 ]