生如夏花小组--第12次作业

森林116UID: 2272614

独立写作: (生活习惯)

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Nowadays there is a growing public concern about whether people should do things that they do not enjoy doing or not. People’s opinions are divergent on such issue. The overwhelming majority would support that people should refuse to do what they not enjoy doing, others, however, take the negative attitude. From the personal perspective, I prefer the latter as my inclination for the following reasons.

Firstly, while facing with the things or matters they not prefer to, people have the right and responsibility to go through it. We all know that no one will live only by itself and the whole society is consisted by enomerous people and human matters together, in this way, it is inevitable to meet with something you do not want to but you have to, just because of your social roles and their obligation, such as students have to finish their difficult homework because it belongs to their obligations, solders are forced to step to battlefront because their responsibility is to fence against enemies. Taking another example in 2003, China, during the the spread of severe acute respiratory syndrome (SARS), hundreds of patients infected with the SARS are lying in the hospital and suffering from the illness, however, there are thousands of doctors and nurses also accompanied with them and help them to struggle with the horrible disease. Would those medical staff like to close to the SARS? Of course not, they choose to stay in the front line just because they were fulfilling their responsibilities. Now four years past, people are still deeply moved by them and respect to them very much.

In other hand, sometimes people have no choice or other alternative way to avoid encountering with those things they dislike. Since no one will deny that there are always something bitter and troublesome filled in the long run in human life, nobody’s life will be always successful, thus you have nothing to do but face to these trouble, and manage to go through with them. For instance every pregant woman will experience the pain of childbearing, and every student who takes the GRE exam will conquer the mountain of huge vocabulary, one of these are fun things. Unfortunately, they're all part of earning a living, something the majority of people have to do.

Doing what we don't enjoy doesn't always have to be a bother, does it? It's just part of life.

口语:

Paired-choice: part-time job/ summer employment是否对选择职业有帮助。

Well, I suppose doing part-time job will bring advantages when you begin to choose vocations. Firstly major-relevant part time job has already made you know how to apply your knowledge into practice, which means you are superior to other competetiors. Secondly even your part-time job are not major-relevant, you also gain a lot in other aspects, such as you have experienced the working-life style and so forth.   

[ 本帖最后由 森林116 于 2007-7-23 20:12 编辑 ]

oriencyUID: 2174726

hehe People's opinions are divergent on such issue! The overwhelming majority.... 好熟悉的，新东方给的吧用的挺好啊

cuiwenliUID: 2297488

Nowadays there is a growing public concern about whether people should do things that they do not enjoy doing or not. People’s opinions are divergent on such issue. The overwhelming majority would support that people should refuse to do what they (do)not enjoy doing, others, however, take the negative attitude. From the personal perspective, I prefer the latter as my inclination for the following reasons.

Firstly(In one hand), while facing with (the,删除，以前纠正过的） things or matters they not prefer to, people have the right and responsibility to go through it. We all know that no one will live only by itself and the whole society is consisted by enomerous（enormous） people and human matters together, in this way（situation）, it is inevitable to meet with something you do not want to but you have to, just because of your social roles and their obligation, such as students have to finish their difficult homework because it belongs to their obligations, solders are forced to step to battlefront because their responsibility is to fence against enemies(说士兵是强迫的，这个例子不太好，斟酌). Taking another example in 2003, China, during the the spread of severe acute respiratory syndrome (SARS), hundreds of patients infected with the SARS are lying in the hospital and suffering from the illness, however, there are thousands of doctors and nurses also accompanied with them and help them to struggle with the horrible disease. Would those medical staff like to close to the SARS? (这个例子应该用过去时)Of course not, they choose to stay in the front line just because they were fulfilling their responsibilities. Now four years past, people are still deeply moved by them and respect to them very much.（这个不错呀，贴切，又可增加字数）

In (the) other hand, sometimes people have no choice or other alternative way to avoid encountering with those things they dislike. Since no one will deny that there are always something bitter and troublesome filled in the long run in human life, nobody’s life will be always successful, thus you have nothing to do but face to these trouble, and manage to go through with them. For instance every pregant woman will experience the pain of childbearing, and every student who takes the GRE exam will conquer the mountain of huge vocabulary, one of these are fun things. Unfortunately, they're all part of earning a living, something the majority of people have to do.

Doing what we don't enjoy doesn't always have to be a bother, does it? It's just part of life.

(字数足以保证拿高分了，模版使用的也不错，最好写三点理由比较充分； 第二点和第一点很相似的，可以说点别的，earn for live,study for degree...)

口语:

Paired-choice: part-time job/ summer employment是否对选择职业有帮助。

Well, I suppose doing part-time job will bring advantages when you begin to choose vocations. Firstly major-relevant part time job has already made you know how to apply your knowledge into practice, which means you are superior to other competetiors（competitors）. Secondly even your part-time job(jobs) are not major-relevant, you also gain a lot in other aspects, such as (for example)you have experienced the working-life style and so forth.   

(理由不错，还可以在说点，老美喜欢信息量大的speaker,加油)