[九月IBT第七次作业]by zhangyebb

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7.24：第七次作业（请于7.24晚22：30之前交,在7.25晚22:00前完成批改）
写作：
You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

When face the chance to choose a country for two weeks visiting, different people will select diverse locations for distinguished purposes. Some may anticipate flying to Egypt since the long-history and mystery pyramids, while others wish to see the beautiful scenery in Maldives. As far as I am concerted, if I have an opportunity to visit a foreign country, the United States must be my dream destination. The detailed reason is offered as following.

First and foremost, the main reason why I select the United States is that his high-technique and advanced scientific research appeal me. No one can deny the predominated position of America in the realm of innovated technology and creative conception always guides the direction of the science development. Furthermore, the majority of the most reputed universities are located there where hundreds of thousands of excellent scientist and engineers, who are in charge with the cardinal tasks not only in the research institution but also the larger-size company, are graduated year after year. Therefore, I have a dream if one day I had the opportunity to visit America, I would travel around these famous universities such as Harvard, Yale, and Princeton, chasing for the academic astrosphere and the fortitude sprite of the seeking for the truth.

Secondly, another more essential factor for me to make choice is that the United States special throughway moves me extraordinarily. In America, everyone struggles for the freedom and equity which urge the society configuration be formed, which provide people there the more chance, more choice and more confidence. It is this kind of throughway that brings people better progress of oneself which is indeed suitable. Under this consciousness, people do seek success not as others criterion, consider happy not depended on poor or rich, and envisage confidence not lying on others comments. If I have a chance, I anticipate feeling what the real democracy and freedom are.

All in all, if I have an opportunity to visit a foreign country, my choice must be my dream destination---the United States, only searching for the advanced science and freedom.

口语：
Plant can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. What is one kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

A cereal grass, which is cultivated extensively in warm climates and is a staple food throughout the world, is also an important plant to me and my country. As we all know, China is a large population and no one can deny the cardinal function of cereal grass. It can provide food which is its seed---rice for people to eat in the daily life. Cereal grass is a crop which is easily planted and cultivated. We can get the harvest reaching to 3 times a year, so that the problem of eating in china can be solved. That’s why you can see hundreds of thousands cereal grass in the expanse of land in china.


[ 本帖最后由 zhangyebb 于 2007-7-24 21:15 编辑 ]

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7.24：第七次作业（请于7.24晚22：30之前交,在7.25晚22:00前完成批改）
写作：
You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

When face the chance to choose a country for two weeks visiting, different people will select diverse locations for distinguished purposes. Some may anticipate flying to Egypt since the long-history and mystery pyramids, while others wish to see the beautiful scenery in Maldives. As far as I am concerted, if I have an opportunity to visit a foreign country, the United States must be my dream destination. The detailed reason is offered as following.

First and foremost, the main reason why I select the United States is that his high-technique and advanced scientific research appeal(to) me. No one can deny the predominated position of America in the realm of innovated technology and creative conception always guides the direction of the science development. Furthermore, the majority of the most reputed universities are located there where hundreds of thousands of excellent scientist and engineers, who are in charge with the cardinal tasks not only in the research institution but also the larger-size company, are graduated year after year. Therefore, I have a dream if one day I had the opportunity to visit America, I would travel around these famous universities such as Harvard, Yale, and Princeton, chasing for the academic astrosphere(atmosphere?) and the fortitude sprite of the seeking for the truth.

Secondly, another more essential factor for me to make choice is that the United States special throughway moves me extraordinarily. In America, everyone struggles for the freedom and equity which urge the society configuration be formed, which provide people there the more chance, more choice and more confidence. It is this kind of throughway that brings people better progress of oneself which is indeed suitable. Under this consciousness, people do seek success not as others criterion, consider happy not depended on poor or rich, and envisage confidence not lying on others comments. If I have a chance, I anticipate feeling what the real democracy and freedom are.

All in all, if I have an opportunity to visit a foreign country, my choice must be my dream destination---the United States, only searching for the advanced science and freedom.

(整篇文章写的很有思想性，结构也很清楚，特别是词汇运用复杂多样，可见你有深厚的词汇基础，是我看到的最好文章之一，超赞~~）
口语：
Plant can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. What is one kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

A cereal grass, which is cultivated extensively in warm climates and is a staple food throughout the world, is also an important plant to me and my country. As we all know, China is( has)a large population and no one can deny the cardinal function of cereal grass. It can provide food which is its seed---rice for people to eat in the daily life. Cereal grass is a crop which is easily planted and cultivated. We can get the harvest reaching to 3 times a year, so that the problem of eating in china can be solved. That’s why you can see hundreds of thousands cereal grass in the expanse of land in china.
(个人认为口语部分的答案最好更口语化一点，而且理由应说的更明显一些）