issue103 [0710G +U小组]第二次作业 by totalsm45518

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用了一个小时，终于算是找到点感觉了，这个题目感觉不好抓论点阿，大家给点意见吧
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The whole human society is a progress full of changing and developing, which is noted and recorded by history. Though every period has its own new problems and situations, there are always something in common among different times, which also can be reflected clearly in history. The speaker asserts that history appears to be valuable only when it has relevance to people’s daily lives. I commits that learning history really does help us solving present troubles in everyday’s life, however, I also insist on the point of view that much value can be made beyond benefiting our daily lives by learning history.

Admittedly, history can provided much valuable advice and indication to people when they dealing with the trivial matters in daily lives. It is commonly accepted that there are some permanent principles and rules, which were created or summarized by our precedents, always being applicable in modern time. There are so many good manners and behaviors made by greats in history that conducting our actions. It is the old saying “Teaching students according to their own talents” by Confucius that indicating our modern educators to propose the issue of cultivating students’ versatility instead of the sole ability to study and pursue higher scores. It is the numerous trials made by Edison-The father of invention in the world-that encourage every person to be persistent on the way of exploring success. It is also the thoughts and behaviors hold by magnates that imbue us with the principle of integrity, honesty, forbearance, sincerity and so forth. Moreover, learning history is also a good method for us to avoid the same mistakes made by ancients, which ensure the progress and development of the whole society. Therefore, history is a light made by forerunners that also enlighten the way of modern society.

However, the significance of learning history is not only limited to the extent when it is relevant to our daily lives, there are also many other aspects in which the study of history plays an indispensable role. History has a direction. It is governed by economic realities, by the way in which people produce and use wealth. Consequently, historical strategies and artifices is a good and valuable source of precedent and prediction to many areas of the society, like politics, business and science. By learning the history of World War, countries’ leaders know the rules of winners and losers, which directs their strategies in the modern world when there are international conflicts. Some methods and stratagems created in history also give inspire to merchants in dealing with others in the business area which full of fierce rivalries. Additionally, in the fields of medicine and science, getting much known of the history of a subjects or disease is the key step in making new breakthrough in exploring the secret of nature. As a result, learning history is also an important thing in many areas rather than daily lives.

We have to commits the fact that some history has no relevance to the modern society, which appears to be nonsense at first glance. However, learning history has some other potential effects, such as educating citizens’ thoughts and values, aggregating the nation. Knowing the whole country’s history and succession during the past hundreds and thousands of years, people can imagine the difficulties of our forerunners who sacrifice themselves to made the creature of the country, which let us consider the present situation more cherished. On the other hand, knowing the humiliate history of one country can remind its public to keep strong forever, which ensure a country’s prosperity.

Admittedly, the whole world is changing everyday, which grants people very different situation and conditions from history. There are certainly many problems existing which cannot be found the answer in history. However, too much attendance on the pragmatism of history is not a scientific way to use it. Besides the utility in our daily lives, people should also excavate the significance of learning history in many other fields.

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