CRACK 9T小组第七次作业---leadensky

leadenskyUID: 2251888

Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern building? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Thanks to the population explosion and the increasing demand of living space, more and more historic buildings that are no longer suitable for living are pulling down everyday. At the same, as more and more glass towers are standing on the earth everyday, historic buildings have never being as precious as before. Currently, whether protecting historic buildings has been a conundrum for the decision makers of the government authorities. As for me, I admit that develop more places for residents is a matter of urgency. However, I still insist on preserving the historic buildings.

First of all, historic buildings are the symbol of a country; they are essential parts of a country’s culture. For instance, as the mere mention of Great Wall, China and its long history immediately come across in our mind; Also, people associate the statue of liberty with political freedom and democracy of the United States, and know the innovative artistry of France form the Eiffel Tower. The impression of a country in our mind is mainly due to its culture, whose ingredient was mostly made up of the historic buildings. Understandably, try to preserve the historic building is an crucial way of protecting the culture of a country.

Moreover, historic buildings serve as an important resource for historical education. For example, the Forbidden City is one of the most visited historic buildings in China. Not only are people impressed by its traditional architecture, but they also gain rich knowledge about the lifestyles of ancient Chinese emperors in the Ming and Tsing Dynasties.

What is more, historic buildings can benefit the tourism industry. Lushan, one of the mountains in China, attracts millions of visitor every year. Not only its natural scenic beauty, but also its abundant historical relics, such as Jiang Jieshi’s (the first president of Chinese Kuomintang) villa, make this mountain a remarkable heritage. Hence, these historic buildings continually attract visitors.

In conclusion, historic building indeed plays a vital role in symbolic significance representation, historical education and as a tourism resource of a country. Preserving these buildings is definitely necessary.

cyyc0311UID: 2187097

Thanks to the population explosion and the increasing demand of living space, more and more historic buildings that are no longer suitable for living are pulling(pulled) down everyday. At the same, as more and more glass towers are standing on the earth everyday(前面有一个了，就用nowadays), historic buildings have never being as precious as before. Currently, whether protecting historic buildings has been a conundrum for the decision makers of the government authorities. As for me, I admit that develop more places for residents is a matter of urgency. However, I still insist on preserving the historic buildings.

First of all, historic buildings are the symbol of a country; they are essential parts of a country’s culture. For instance, as the mere mention of Great Wall, China and its long history immediately come across in our mind; Also, people associate the statue of liberty with political freedom and democracy of the United States, and know the innovative artistry of France form the Eiffel Tower. The impression of a country in our mind is mainly due to its culture, whose ingredient was mostly made up of the historic buildings. Understandably, try to preserve the historic building is an crucial way of protecting the culture of a country.

Moreover, historic buildings serve as an important resource for historical education. For example, the Forbidden City is one of the most visited historic buildings(这个最高级貌似有点问题) in China. Not only are people impressed by its traditional architecture, but they also gain rich knowledge about the lifestyles of ancient Chinese emperors in the Ming and Tsing Dynasties.

What is more, historic buildings can benefit the tourism industry. Lushan, one of the mountains in China, attracts millions of visitor every year. Not only its natural scenic beauty, but also its abundant historical relics, such as Jiang Jieshi’s (the first president of Chinese Kuomintang) villa, make this mountain a remarkable heritage. Hence, these historic buildings continually attract visitors.

In conclusion, historic building indeed plays a vital role in symbolic significance representation, historical education and as a tourism resource of a country. Preserving these buildings is definitely necessary.

赞！看完之后的第一感觉，呵呵。
逐段说。第一段8错。我每次写作文的时候就愁第一段的background不知道该怎么写，什么时候教教我吧^_^
后三段例子比较多。PS：你用庐山举例，莫非是江西人？~
结尾段如果再稍带说点destroy 会显得你考虑周全o(∩_∩)o
That's all.