CRACK 9T 小组第11次作业 by冬子

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The development of technology brings the whole society plenty of benefits, not only for widen people’s eyesight but also for providing more methods to gain knowledge. Some people forecast that new kinds of schools based on internet and televisions might replace the traditional ones some day. But I do not agree with such a point. Comparing with these new styles of schools, I prefer to study in the traditional ones.

To begin with, we must admit that educations by using new communicated equipments are convenient for those who cannot attend to the normal schools. For example, it is hard for a student who lost his legs to go to school and move himself from one classroom to another. The internet based school fits him so much, he could learn every kind of skills he wanted while just sitting at home. In addition, for the person who must work in the daytime, they can also follow the teachers to study in the virtual classrooms at night.

Nevertheless, although internet or television based schools give people more choices to study, the traditional schools are still the first choice for most students. The most significant difference between the two kinds of schools is the interactive between teachers and students. Courses in the internet or television are always the videos recorded before the class, so the teachers cannot get the reflections from the students in time to modulate the speed of talking or the content. While in the traditional class, the students can tell the teachers their feelings immediately that is helpful for their comprehension what the teachers taught.

Moreover, learning in the real class we will meet our classmates and could discuss together, exchange our ideas, and so forth. It is not only good for our study but also improving our interpersonal ability which could go a long way for out future life and work. While in the virtual school, we can only face to the screen and lose the precious chance for communication.

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CRACK 9T 小组第11次作业 by冬子
The development of technology brings the whole society plenty of benefits, not only for widen (widening?) people’s eyesight but also for providing more methods to gain knowledge. Some people forecast that new kinds of schools based on internet and televisions might replace the traditional ones some day. But I do not agree with such a point. Comparing with these new styles of schools, I prefer to study in the traditional ones.

To begin with, we must admit that educations by using new communicated equipments are convenient for those who cannot attend to (attend 做“参加”讲时是及物动词，做“关心”讲时才是部及物动词，所以去掉to) the normal schools. For example, it is hard for a student who lost his legs to go to school and move himself from one classroom to another. The internet based school fits him so much, he could learn every kind of skills he wanted while just sitting at home. In addition, for the person who must work in the daytime, they can also follow the teachers to study in the virtual classrooms at night.

Nevertheless, although internet or television based schools give people more choices to study, the traditional schools are still the first choice for most students. The most significant difference between the two kinds of schools is the interactive between teachers and students. Courses in the internet or television are always the videos recorded before the class, so the teachers cannot get the reflections from the students in time to modulate the speed of talking or the content. While in the traditional class, the students can tell the teachers their feelings immediately that is helpful for their comprehension what the teachers taught.

Moreover, learning in the real class we will meet our classmates and could discuss together, exchange our ideas, and so forth. It is not only good for our study but also improving our interpersonal ability which could go a long way for out future life and work. While in the virtual school, we can only face to the screen and lose the precious chance for communication.
其他地方没有什么问题，语言结构都很好