生如夏花小组第15次作业---sljlj

sljljUID: 2229927

agree or disagree: 20 years from now,students are no longer using the printed books.

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disagree
1, printed books are more convenient; they are available anytime once you get it.
2, In no way can be the feeling of reading a magzine achieved by watching the computer screen (do bad to the skin).

With the advent and development of the computer, increasing people use the electric books on computer instead of reading printed book. Thus will printed books disappear due to the appearance of electric books? From my point of view, the answer is defenitely no. Although electric books have plenty of advantages compared to the traditional printed books, in no way can electric books take place of the printed ones.

To begin with, as is known to all, it is the printed books that are easier available then electric books. Individuals can read the printed books at any time and any place if they want, only when there is light. However, when it comes to the electric book, it calls for a computer, charges or electricity. What is more, if certain bugs infect the computer, all the sources will be gone, let alone the electric books. In this level, we can see printed books are more convenient to use.

In addition, in no way can the feeling of browsing a fiction book be achieved by watching the computer screen. Just imagine that you read poems in the banch of a river, with beautiful scenery around you. How relax you can be! However, when facing the computer screen, you will worry that it may do bad to your skin; also you have to use your eyes with much higher intensity! From this aspect, printed books would never disappear.

Finally, with printed books, students can take notes and write or even draw what they like in the books. This cannot happen to electric books at all. Simply put, if they are learning a text about the structure of a city, they can raw the structure on the book themselves. So printed books are more helpful to their studies some certain times.

All in all, even though advanced technology makes the printed books less and less significant nowadays, we can safely come to the conclusion that printed books will still exist in the seen future!

这篇感觉确实不好写，而且题目应该不是很完整吧？提纲就只写了两条，后来还有时间就凑字数写了finally那个body段。
anyway，这次总算有300了。
还有，这个是draft version了，估计有些低级错误，恳请校正，我考试好注意。多谢^_^

bluecathyUID: 2231215

With the advent and development of the computer, increasing people use the electric books on computer instead of reading printed book. Thus will printed books disappear due to the appearance of electric books? From my point of view, the answer is defenitely no. Although electric books have plenty of advantages compared to the traditional printed books, in no way can electric books take place of the printed ones.（第一段很好，简洁有力！）

To begin with, as is known to all, it is the printed books that are easier available then electric books. Individuals can read the printed books at any time and any place if they want, only when there is light. However, when it comes to the electric book, it calls for a computer, charges or electricity. What is more, if certain bugs infect the computer, all the sources will be gone, let alone the electric books. In this level, we can see printed books are more convenient to use.
（比较很好！）

In addition, in no way can the feeling of browsing a fiction book be achieved by watching the computer screen. Just imagine that you read poems in the banch of a river, with beautiful scenery around you. How relax you can be! However, when facing the computer screen, you will worry that it may do bad to your skin; also you have to use your eyes with much higher intensity! From this aspect, printed books would never disappear.（结尾句有点突然，我觉得应该是贴合上你这段的主题句）

Finally, with printed books, students can take notes and write or even draw what they like in the books. This cannot happen to electric books at all. Simply put, if they are learning a text about the structure of a city, they can raw the structure on the book themselves. So printed books are more helpful to their studies some certain times.（这段有点牵强，我觉得）

All in all, even though advanced technology makes the printed books less and less significant nowadays, we can safely come to the conclusion that printed books will still exist in the seen future!没看见你说的低级错误啊，我反倒觉得这篇语言很流畅的！加油！