生如夏花小组-第15次作业

bluecathyUID: 2231215

There is a general discussion among my colleagues whether printed books will disappear 20 year later, when Google declares that they will build a free library based internet. As a group of reporters served for a magazine, we do care much about the survival of printed medium such as books, newspaper and magazines. Some of them have a pessimistic attitude, and some them think that printed books will not be given up by public. Well, as for me, I prefer the latter group of people.

First of all, just like one of my colleagues says, the printed book is so convenient a choice at any time and any place. We could read printed books without the confinement. For example, I often read printed books on the bus on my way from work place to home, and for me, it is a way to relax. It is hard to acknowledge that it is also a kind of relaxation when I read an e-book on a laptop or a PDA on the bus. The laptop is too heavy and the letter on PDA is too small. Most important, it will be so frustrated when notebook or PDA is out of energy.

Secondly, as another colleagues says, e-book which should be read on computer is so harmful to our eyes, skins and bodies that we are tired of reading it. Here is an example of Catherine, a editor of our magazine. Her former job is an editor of Yahoo China. One day in the third year she served this website, she found that her right eye couldn't see things clearly. She asks for an eye doctor, and the doctor says that her symptom is because of her using her eyes too much at the front of computer. So, after the treatment, she find a job in our magazine which is a paper media.

Moreover, the atmosphere of reading printed books gives me a real feel whenever I am studying or reading for relaxation. Maybe due to the reason of my job, when I touch the paper and read printed books, I often have a strong feeling that every printed word could convey the hard work and elaborate conceiving of the author, and that is also why I think printed book could represent the civilization of human beings throughout thousands of years.

Consequently, indeed, I cherish printed book and deeply believe that printed book will still exert positive effects on our society.

[ 本帖最后由 bluecathy 于 2007-8-12 10:28 编辑 ]

cuiwenliUID: 2297488

555....我刚编辑好，怎么一发表就没了，555。。。

cuiwenliUID: 2297488

There is a general discussion among my colleagues whether printed books will disappear 20 year later, when Google declares that they will build a free library based internet. As a group of reporters served for a magazine, we do care much about the survival of printed medium such as books, newspaper and magazines. Some of them have a pessimistic attitude, and some (of)them think that printed books will not be given up by public. Well, as for me, I prefer the latter group of people.（ 你用的是引入式的开头，这样可避免雷同；最好把理由简单说一下，。。for conventient to read, easier to carry, less damaging to health of body...）

First of all, just like one of my colleagues says, the printed book is so convenient a choice at any time and any place. We could read printed books without the confinement. For example, I often read printed books on the bus on my way from work place to home, and for me, it is a way to relax. It is hard to acknowledge that it is also a kind of relaxation when I read an e-book on a laptop or a PDA on the bus. The laptop is too heavy and the letter on PDA is too small. Most important, it will be so frustrated when notebook or PDA is out of energy.

Secondly, as another colleagues says, e-book which should be read on computer is so harmful to our eyes, skins and bodies that we are tired of reading it. (However, computer provide so many conventient and fast work mehtods, it goes with a plenty of occupation diseases.)Here is an example of Catherine, a editor of our magazine. Her former job is an editor of Yahoo China. One day in the third year she served this website, she found that her right eye couldn't see things clearly. She asks for an eye doctor, and the doctor says that her symptom is because of her using her eyes too much at the front of computer. So, after the treatment, she find a job in our magazine which is a paper media.(例子不少呀，可以增加字数，不错；最好在加点论证，文章会更有逻辑性，更严密)

Moreover, the atmosphere of reading printed books gives me a real feel whenever I am studying or reading for relaxation. Maybe due to the reason of my job, when I touch the paper and read printed books, I often have a strong feeling that every printed word could convey the hard work and elaborate conceiving of the author（赞！！）, and that is also why I think printed book could represent the civilization of human beings throughout thousands of years.

Consequently, indeed, I cherish printed book and deeply believe that printed book will still exert positive effects on our society.

总的来说不错的，结构清晰，论证有条例；个人认为，例子以个人经历为主，其中一个可以改用经典案例；加油，blue!