Issue43 spring第4次

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issue43 "To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards."
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Many factors influenced whether a leader to be an effective one. One of the most important is that one should possess the highest ethical and moral standards, while the others may be the leadership, component and so forth. Insofar as economical and society developing, cooperate between various people become remarkably, it make many person take it for granted that leader highest moral standards is vital. However, father reflection indicates that other factor also playing distinctive role.

First of all, no one can blind to the fact that moral standards is the primary step success for not only politics but business-man. In economical realm, with the development of communication, more and more leaders learn that moral standard is so significant when doing business with foreign companies, when cooperating with other group, that decide your behavior is recognized even decide your business is success or not. Even if a bit of cheat may lead to seriously result. What is more, the example of wal-mart, the biggest seller around the world, promise that the prices of its goods are the lowest, besides buyers could return goods to mart without any excuse in a month. From which we can realize that due to their frankly, wal-mart become the biggest and most profitable company. Briefly speaking, several standards are the essential factor.

Then, there had to be another cause why I agree that moral standards is the vital factors and there was even if a bit of cheat one leader do may bring about dreadfully result, moreover it is harmful to the group as well as oneself. In the political realm an official without high ethnical and moral standards is doomed to fail to lead the public effectively, Watergate come into my mind immediately, the president of Nixon lost his opponent and be affront with impeach. Would a leader lacking moral standard will be efficient. No doubt that if leaders ignore the problem there is every chance may induce them bog down.

Understanding that moral standard is the primary step to obtain advancement in the effort to achieve, on no account should we overlook other factors which may lead to success. In the first place, the ability one leader maintained is another decisive factor when inducting a group to success, particularly in the nascent. When Washington lead American to struggle for independence, the remarkable leadership and exceedingly conduct bring the soldiers a set of success, therefore established American and he was horned as the first president. Another fact is that, personal charm can be a catalyst. I do believe that when employees following a leader who is fraught with enthusiasm they can exploit 120% efforts, when they fronting a human leader their life may full of happiness. On the contrast the situation may be drastically different: employees without enthusiasm, lives are boring which is harmful for leader. Thereby, an efficient leader should possess ability and charm.

In conclusion, the role of moral standards is fundamental, yetleaders may also possess their own ability, furthermore, they may get more and more important factors which can benefit...

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Many factors influenced whether a leader to be an effective one. One of the most important is that one should possess the highest ethical and moral standards, while the others may be the leadership, component and so forth. Insofar as economical and society developing, cooperate between various people become remarkably, it make many person take it for granted that leader highest moral standards is vital. However, father reflection indicates that other factor also playing distinctive role.表达立场不太明确。

First of all, no one can blind to the fact that moral standards is the primary step success 表达不对 for not only politics but business-man.buinessman. In economical realm, with the development of communication, more and more leaders learn that moral standard is so significant when doing business with foreign companies, when cooperating with other group, that decide your behavior is recognized even decide your business is success or not. 句子结构有点乱。尤其是蓝色部分。黄色的部分可以这样加吗？Even if a bit of cheat may lead to seriously result. What is more, the example of wal-mart, the biggest seller around the world, promise that the prices of its goods are the lowest, besides buyers could return goods to mart without any excuse in a month. From which we can realize that due to their frankly, wal-mart become the biggest and most profitable company. 论据似乎有些偏离。Briefly speaking, several standards are the essential factor.最后一句很唐突。

Then, there had to be another cause 有这样的句式吗？why I agree that moral standards is the vital factors and there was even if a bit of cheat one leader do may bring about dreadfully result, moreover it is harmful to the group as well as oneself. 在赘述前段。In the political realm an official without high ethnical and moral standards is doomed to fail to lead the public effectively, Watergate come into my mind immediately, the president of Nixon lost his opponent and be affront with impeach. Would a leader lacking moral standard will be efficient. No doubt that if leaders ignore the problem there is every chance may induce them bog down.这个词组用的好。

Understanding that moral standard is the primary step to obtain advancement in the effort to achieve, on no account 好should we overlook other factors which may lead to success. In the first place, the ability one leader maintained 个人觉得用的不是很恰当is another decisive factor when inducting a group to success, particularly in the nascent 形容词. When Washington lead American to struggle for independence, the remarkable leadership and exceedingly conduct bring the soldiers a set of success, therefore established American and he was horned as the first president. Another fact is that, personal charm can be a catalyst. I do believe that when employees following a leader who is fraught with enthusiasm they can exploit 120% efforts, when they fronting a human leader their life may full of happiness. On the contrast the situation may be drastically different: employees without enthusiasm, lives are boring which is harmful for leader. Thereby, an efficient leader should possess ability and charm.

In conclusion, the role of moral standards is fundamental, yetleaders may also possess their own ability, furthermore, they may get more and more important factors which can benefit

我读了文章后，总结出的提纲是1。商业--集体 2。政治--个人 3。其他领导素质
感觉有点跑题。前面论点没有展开讨论，部分3有点多。词汇积累很不错，很多单词我都不认识，现查的，哈哈 。不过句子读起来总觉得有点别扭，我语法也不好，说不出来，也怕说错。
加油~！相互鞭策，共同进步。