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[作文] 大作文之集思广益(进谏者加分) [复制链接]

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发表于 2008-2-13 15:07:59 |只看该作者
词汇用得还是不错的,过谦了
思路也有一定的深度
涉及了教育
如果再谈谈家长教育的欠缺
就完美了
Reaching soul
As time pass
Hearing voice
On the magic cross
Creating interface
Through finger touch
Searching peace
In cyber space
Hunch is stylish
Above superficies
Life is synchronous
In between balance
It is for you …

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发表于 2008-2-17 12:19:16 |只看该作者
昨天在这个帖子的留言好像因为网络问题没有回富上阿
我想问问还有没有新的题目啦

我准备在考试之前再写3篇哪:loveliness:
坚持到胜利

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Reaching soul
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Hearing voice
On the magic cross
Creating interface
Through finger touch
Searching peace
In cyber space
Hunch is stylish
Above superficies
Life is synchronous
In between balance
It is for you …

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发表于 2008-9-12 09:11:14 |只看该作者
你的文章总体来说还可以,因为从正反两个层面来谈,比较客观,估计6分没有什么大问题
Reaching soul
As time pass
Hearing voice
On the magic cross
Creating interface
Through finger touch
Searching peace
In cyber space
Hunch is stylish
Above superficies
Life is synchronous
In between balance
It is for you …

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