issue17【jet】第八次作业

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Issue 17
“There are two type of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws.”

Time 16.27 word 499
No law in our society is perfect, some of which may unjust to certain individual but most of it is just. Law is something complex involving both individual, our whole society and government, which means we should analyze the problem in different perspective.
Law, obviously, is playing a vital role in our society and necessary to everybody keeping them from loss of wealthy and healthy. But there are always some flaws in them and amending them is our responsibility, which may result from development of society or different areas of this world. Take a example of a change in China for instance. Long years ago, old Chinese law permitted to sentence somebody to death if he was a serious criminal. However, current law is amended to take it as inhuman, and it is not permitted any longer. What's more, a just law may turn to unjust law because of different areas. Such as that it is illegal to take a falchion on the street in most areas of China but legal in the minority areas, own to their customs. So, every law can not avoid being unjust, but we should view that most of them are just to most civilizations and areas.
Because of above-mentioned just majority of laws base on statistic, so we should obey the law even it is not just to us. A democratic society is depend on it law system, violating the laws is ruining our society. When the unjust things happen to us, we should take the action by a peaceful way, such as reporting to the government and even holding a match to show our opinion, but disobeying the society, which may lead to instability our even war. There is a typical instance. Iraq did experiment on unclear without considering international objection and disobeying the laws which is made by them, and so result in America's invasion. This indicates us how serious inobservance of laws may be, so we would better to be behavior legally even it is unjust to us.
On the other hand, to someone who made the laws, it is not appropriate to ignore the unjust laws, which is easy to a mass of our society. If a law was taken as unjust to certain people, leading to loss of their right or possession, they must feel sadly or even do stupid things to show their anger. Moreover, this may inspire our civilization feel distrustful to the authority. So, when there is a clue of unjust laws, we should recognize this and to amend it, which is the only way to keep our nation developing stably and quickly.
In sum, to a unjust law, on the one hand, as a qualitied civilization, we should persist it and show our discontent in a peaceful way. On the other hand, our government should recognize this problem and discuss about it to perfect it, because law is the fundament of a nation. Both aspects above being done well can keep our society stable.              

benjamin07UID: 2310909

No law in our society is perfect, some of which may be unjust to certain individual,  but most of it is just. Law is something complex involving  individual, our whole society and government, which means we should analyze the problem in different perspectives.

Law, obviously, is playing a vital role in our society and necessary to everybody keeping them from loss of wealth and health. But there are always some flaws in them and amending them is our responsibility, which may result from the development of society. Take an example of a change in China . Long years ago, old Chinese law permitted to sentence somebody to death if he was a serious criminal. However, current law is amended to take it as inhuman, and it is not permitted any longer(这是真的马？现在还有死刑阿？？） What's more, a just law may turn to an unjust one because of different reasons produced by our society. For example,  it is illegal to take a falchion on the street in most areas of China, however, it is legal in the minority areas, own to their customs. Therefore, every law can not avoid being unjust, but we should view that most of them are just to most civilizations and areas.

Because of above-mentioned just majority of laws base on statistic, so we should obey the law even it is not just to us. A democratic society depends on it law system, violating the laws is ruining our society. When the unjust things happen to us, we should take the action by a peaceful way, such as reporting to the government and even holding a match to show our opinion, but disobeying the society, which may lead to instability or even war. There is a typical instance. Iraq did experiment on unclear without considering international objection and obeying the laws which is made by them, and so result in America's invasion. This indicates how serious inobservance of laws may be, so we would make it legal even it is unjust to us.(句子不通顺）

On the other hand, to someone who made the laws, it is not appropriate to ignore the unjust laws, which is easy to a mass of ( 是指大量的 majority of ）our society. If a law was taken as unjust to certain people, leading to loss of their right or possession, they would feel sad or even do stupid things(太口语化，act stupidly) to show their anger. Moreover, this may inspire our civilization feel distrustful to the authority( stir up the anger or disatisfaction of people who may be highly distrust the autthority) . So(口语化  Hence), when there is a clue of unjust laws, we should recognize this and to amend it, which is the only way to keep our nation developing stably and quickly.

In sum, to an unjust law, on the one hand, as a qualitied civilization, we should persist it and show our discontent in a peaceful way. On the other hand, our government should recognize this problem and discuss about it to perfect it, because law is the fundament of a nation. Both aspects above being done well can keep our society stable.  

结构方面： 开头对题目的回应不是那么有力，应该重新组织一下。结尾段也是。

语言方面：你写的很多都是口语化的东西。So 你用了很多便  therefore  hence 这些都可以替代  也比较书面  建议多用用书面语  。   在句式变化上也要加强。