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题目：For successful development of a country, should a government focus its budget more on very young children education rather than on universities?

As the development of the society, the education has become one of the most important factor of the success of a country. But there is a growing debate about whether the government should focus its budget more on children education or on universities. This essay will explore the importance of the education in university.

Admittedly, the elementary education plays an important role in children's life as it teaches the basic knowledge and skills of learning. If one intends to study easier in university, he must have a good habit of learning, or he can't handle the heavy workload and won't get a good grade. Also it teaches young children the moral standards which help them build a complete personality that can decide their attitude towards things they meet in daily life.

However it doesn't mean that the young children education is more important than the university education. As we all know, the knowledge we learn in universities decide our future. What kind of job will we do, how much salaries will we get and which people will we get along with are all based on universities education. For instance, my brother was good at math when he was young, but he learned music in the university and so, now he is a music producer, who write songs for singers, working in a music company.

The most important is, the cost of universities is higher than elementary education. Many instruments used in experiments cost a lot and they need a great amount of money to pay out before they can get a result. And they may invite famous professor to teach experiences or succssful business men to give speeches. In order for the students to get  a good education in the university, it's evidently more expensive than the young children education.

The education is an important part in the progress of the development of society, and how to use the resources well has become a hot topic among people. As fore me, though elementary education is important, the universities education needs more focus by governments.