issue136 today is the day 第三次作业BY tingting jenny

tingtingjennyUID: 2431377

TOPIC: ISSUE136 - "The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."

The absence of choice are not rarely happened situations, it happened when people are restrict by many elements and causes, and under these circumstance, people are forced to evaluate their possible choice and are compel to follow the left ways.

The conditions of absence of choice took place when people lost. Take an example in scientific area, when scientists failed in their research program, they have to afford for lost in times and money, more importantly; they have to suspend the confirmation process toward imagined fact. Those who choice to attain the results by some vague method including false process or data would finally lose its reputations as the expense. Critics of this might also argue many great individuals attain their achievement after they lost for several times, since they keep persistence. However, people have to admitted that their success were based on comply with no other choice. invent bumb after thousand times of failure because continually experiments is the only way to achieve his goal to find available material.  

In society level, any individuals are restricting by certain social moral and ethics, as well as culture and traditions. People in Indian for instance, young adult have to follow parent’s instruction in their marital problems, and also they have to obey their religion rules. Christians have to marry with Christians and Romanist must marry with Romanist, if unfortunately, the young adult fall in loved with people do not share the same religion believes or the ideal spouse is not in the parent’s list of marital partner, then it seems the people have no choice but to give up. Critics of this phenomenon would argue that the people are actually free of choice as soon as they could follow their individual's idea. However, this kind of free choice must not be the most wonderful ones, the following ethical and moral problems would deprived the imagined happy lives: not only the new family lose their relatives, both of the mates would be regard as betrayers of their religions respectively, but also the coming baby would far away from grandparents care, and facing social critics and hard to be recognized by the society. The absence of choice is a circumstance recall people to check their behaviors and to caution people the sever results they have to afford were they make choice outside certain restriction.

Further, the absent of choice also took place as it is need to help construct social justice. Many relatives and friends of criminals believe no other choice to rehabilitate suffers and to protect future casualty, they prosecute criminals and help cracking illegal affairs.

To sum up, the absent of choice is not a rarely happened situation at least. they took place as people are failure in living process, and its existence recall people to evaluated their proposed decisions its also contribute to justice constructions.

FreePeterUID: 2402482

The absence of choice are not rarely happened situations, it happenedwhen people are restrict by many elements and causes, and under thesecircumstance(s), people are forced to evaluate their possible choice and are compel(compelled) to follow the (加个only是不是比较好) left ways.

The conditions of absence of choice took place when people lost. Takean example in scientific area, when scientists failed in their researchprogram, they have to afford for lost in times and money, moreimportantly; they have to suspend the confirmation process towardimagined fact. Those who choice(choose)to attain the results by some vague method including false process ordata would finally lose its reputations as the expense. Critics of thismight also argue many great individuals attain their achievement afterthey lost for several times, since they keep persistence. However,people have to admitted that their success were based on complying with no other choice. invent bumb(bomb)after thousand times of failure because continually experiments is theonly way to achieve his goal to find available material.  
(抱歉不是特别清楚这段的逻辑，能不能解释下？)

In society level, any(all individiuals可能比较好) individuals are restricting by certain social moral and ethics, as well as culture and traditions. For People in Indian for instance, young adults have to follow parent’s instruction in their marital problems, and also they have to obey their religion rules.(解释一下他们具体要obey什么？) Christians have to marry with Christians and Romanist must marry with Romanist, if unfortunately, the young adult falling in loved with people(with each other肯能比较好) do not share the same religion believes or the ideal spouse is not in the parent’s list of marital partner(这句是不是表达的有点问题？没看懂:(), then it seems the people have no choice but to give up.(seems不太好吧，怎么感觉作者自己都让步了。。)Critics of this phenomenon would argue that the people are actuallyfree of choice as soon as they could follow their individual's idea.However, this kind of free choice must not (cannot比较好)be the most wonderful ones, the following ethical and moral problemswould deprived the imagined happy lives: not only the new family losetheir relatives, both of the mates would be regard as betrayers oftheir religions respectively, but also the coming baby would far awayfrom grandparents care(改成the comming babay would be far away from grandparents' care?), and facing social critics and hard to be recognized by the society(拆成两句吧）. The absence of choice is a circumstance recall people to check their behaviors and to caution people the sever(?) results they have to afford were they make choice outside certain restriction.
（最好能够补充一下虽然确实有牛人可以无视世俗观点，但是绝大多数人毕竟是受到这个制约的，这样逻辑上比较严密～)

Further, the absent(absence) of choice also took place as it is needed to help construct social justice. Many relatives and friends of criminals believe no other choice to rehabilitate(?) suffers and to protect future casualty, they prosecute criminals and help cracking illegal affairs. (help cracking illegal affairs是指？)
(这段好像只来得及提观点，是不是时间来不及了)

To sum up, the absent(absence) ofchoice is not a rarely happened situation at least. they took place aspeople are failure in living process, and its existence recall peopleto evaluated their proposed decisions its also contribute to justiceconstructions. (最后一句不是很明白)

思路似乎是单一论点逐步递进，作为这种抽象题目这么写也确实不错。
另外一下子可以注意的语言错误还是尽量避免下，比如说单双数之类的，（当然我也常犯T_T)。据说会影响阅卷人对你的作文的感觉的。
感觉没论证开，同学有空再改改吧～