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你认为接下来20 年汽车的使用会不会减少（周一作业）
The rapid development of technology is benefiting the public whose life is more and more convenient. some new technologies, however, bringing comfort to people pollute the environment, including automobiles. As far as I am concerned, the number of automobile will not decrease in the twenty years because of the dependence of people to automobiles, and the research on technologies.

To begin with, although the number of automobile in my country is huge, only a part of people own cars and the number of automobile will increase with the society development. There is a large amount of population in my country and the huge domain, since it is hard to average the treasure among all people. Some remote areas still live in the needy life where density of cars is rare. Thus, with the technology advanced, the merit of automobile will drop and can be afford by those poor area's people. Furthermore, we all know that the value standard has been changing gradually. The new generation has tended to spend more money on the materials rather than save. According to the research on the young people, the car and house are the majority people's consumptions. Even more and more parents prepare the car and the house for marrying sons/daughters

Secondly, because of the pollution of cars, people fierce denounce automobiles, but this issue has been solved. The nation has enacted the standard of waste smoke, the automobile producers have reached this standard. Meanwhile, the new resource represented the gasoline has been researched and increased greatly. Once the new resource being applied, there will not be any pollution and the high expenditure gasoline. For example, the hydrogen which produces water after burning and the solar energy are the environment protecting energy. Eventually, the new technology must stimulate more people to buy automobiles.

Last but not the least, driving has became an essential capability gradually. It is true that more and more universities students learn driving and get licenses. One of the significant reason is the driving ability could make them excel peers sometimes. Thus the sale account of automobile will increase with more and more people grip on driving.

In sum, although currently the cars bring many troubles to the public, these problem will be figured out with the help of new technology. In the future, the number of cars must over now.

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The rapid development of technology is benefiting the public whose life is more and more convenient. some new technologies, however, bringing comfort to people pollute the environment, including automobiles. As far as I am concerned, the number of automobile will not decrease in the twenty years because of the dependence of people to automobiles, and the research on technologies.bbs.gter.net
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To begin with, although the number of automobile in my country is huge, only a part of people own cars and the number of automobile will increase with the society development. There is a large amount of population in my country and the huge domain, since it is hard to average the treasure among all people. Some remote areas still live in the needy life where density of cars is rare. Thus, with the technology advanced, the merit of automobile will drop and can be afford by those poor area's people. Furthermore, we all know that the value standard has been changing gradually. The new generation has tended to spend more money on the materials rather than save. According to the research on the young people, the car and house are the majority people's consumptions. Even more and more parents prepare the car and the house for marrying sons/daughters

Secondly, because of the pollution of cars, people fierce denounce automobiles, but this issue has been solved. The nation has enacted the standard of waste smoke, the automobile producers have reached this standard. Meanwhile, the new resource represented the gasoline has been researched and increased greatly. Once the new resource being applied, there will not be any pollution and the high expenditure gasoline. For example, the hydrogen which produces water after burning and the solar energy are the environment protecting energy. Eventually, the new technology must stimulate more people to buy automobiles.|留学|签证|TOEFL|GRE2^ U [ MmQ N

Last but not the least, driving has became an essential capability gradually. It is true that more and more universities students learn driving and get licenses. One of the significant reason is the driving ability could make them excel peers sometimes. Thus the sale account of automobile will increase with more and more people grip on driving.寄托家园2`;ln1_(G/J~+oD"[

In sum, although currently the cars bring many troubles to the public, these problem will be figured out with the help of new technology. In the future, the number of cars must over now.留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA0q.?1YI.\&g O'yW

虽然是新手，但是习作不赖阿。比我刚来的时候牛鼻很多。
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The rapid development of technology is benefiting the public whose life is more and more convenient. some new technologies, however, bringing comfort to people pollute the environment, including automobiles. [感觉应该还有一句承接下比较好，因为你这里转了，但后面观点又是支持]As far as I am concerned, the number of automobile will not decrease in the twenty years because of the dependence of people to automobiles, and the research on technologies.


To begin with, although the number of automobile in my country is huge, only a part of people own cars and the number of automobile will increase with the society development. [currently most private car owners are in big and middle cities.] There is a large amount of population in my country and the huge domain, since it is hard to average the treasure among all people. Some remote areas still live in the needy life where density of cars is rare. Thus, with the technology advanced, the merit of automobile will drop and can be afford by those poor area's people. Furthermore, we all know that the value standard has been changing gradually. The new generation has tended to spend more money on the materials rather than save. According to the research on the young people, the car and house are the majority people's consumptions. Even more and more parents prepare the car and the house for marrying sons/daughters

Secondly, because of the pollution of cars, people fierce denounce automobiles, but this issue has been solved. The nation has enacted the standard of waste smoke [emission], the automobile producers have reached this standard. Meanwhile, the new resource represented the gasoline has been researched and increased greatly. [这句比较奇怪。researched和increased 指什么意思？ ] Once the new resource being applied, there will not be any pollution and the high expenditure gasoline. For example, the hydrogen which produces water after burning and the solar energy are the environment protecting energy. Eventually, the new technology must stimulate more people to buy automobiles.

Last but not the least, driving has became [become] an essential capability gradually. It is true that more and more universities students learn driving and get licenses. One of the significant reason is the driving ability could make them excel peers sometimes. Thus the sale account [account去掉] of automobile will increase with more and more people grip on driving.

In sum, although currently the cars bring many troubles to the public, these problem will be figured out with the help of new technology. In the future, the number of cars must over now.

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The rapid development of technology is benefiting the public whose life is more and more convenient. some new technologies, however, bringing comfort to people, pollute the environment, including automobiles. As far as I am concerned, the number of automobile will not decrease in the twenty years because of the dependence of people to automobiles, and the research on technologies.寄托家园
To begin with, although the number of automobile in my country is huge, only a part of people own cars and the number of automobile will increase with the society development. There is a large amount of population in my country and the huge domain, since it is hard to average the treasure among all people. Some remote areas still live in the needy life where density of cars is rare. Thus, with the technology advanced, the merit price(merit is different from price) of automobile will drop and can be afforded by those poor area's people. Furthermore, we all know that the value standard has been changing gradually. The new generation has tended tends to spend more money on the materials rather than to save. According to the research on the young people, the car and house are the majority people's consumptions. Even more and more parents prepare the car and the house for marrying sons/daughtersE&r#I `B­r([6dy``z+C:eBrKSecondly, because of the pollution of cars, people fierce denounce automobiles, but this issue has been solved. The nation has enacted the standard of waste smoke, the automobile producers have reached this standard. Meanwhile, the new resource represented alternatives of the gasoline have been researched and increased developed greatly. Once the new resource being applied, there will not be any pollution and the high expenditure gasoline. For example, the hydrogen which produces water after burning and the solar energy are the environment protecting energy. Eventually, the new technology must stimulate more people to buy automobiles.GREE3^8|8h|Last but not the least, driving has became an essential capability gradually. It is true that more and more universities students learn driving and get licenses. One of the significant reason is the driving ability could make them excel peers sometimes. Thus the sale account of automobile will increase with when more and more people grip on driving.

In sum, although currently the cars bring many troubles to the public, these problems will be figured out with the help of new technology. In the future, the number of cars must over now.
突然有事了，不好意思，只看了一半。

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