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iissue69【today is the day小组】第12次作业
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Government should place few ,if any ,restrictions on scientific research and development

One coin has two sides

How much restrictions government placed on scientific research and development should be always item-by-item. I think government should place a positive restrictions on scientific research and development just because it brings us the most effects in our daily life

As we all know that the fund of scientific research and development mostly comes from government .Without the support of government’s fund, science and technology may hold up and at least can’t make great and rapid progress ,of course, n contrast too much restrictions of the fund applied in scientific research and development will delay its progress., we all know  that the development of science and technology under the freedom sky .can make the greatest progress ,no one could control the result of research .second under the government restrictions the group of scientists could get the best adjustment to make the best work, to create the wonderful fruit and importantly solve the most urgent problems that concern society

In the second place ,government should refrain from interfering with the freedom of scientific enguiry ,there is no distinguish on the results of discovery and invention of science and technology by the standard that which one is good pr which one is bad

The reason why some inventions or discoveries are called bad is that the invention used in the daily life threaten people’s security on passions and life foe instance ,in the second world war two Atomics set by America to prestige Japan army doing back to their island made the building on duangdao and changqi down to earth, and people in that war ,America use the bomb just for the world peace and for the finish of Chinese people’s war disaster. However ,in that time If there is no restriction from union nations ,maybe another bomb, no one knows ,will be set on which region

I admit society today develop healthful and rapidly but there is doubt that some bad phenomenons exist .one of them called high—technology guilt is based on computer ,some people called haker used virus to attack other’s important material even the nation’s sentiment ,as a result it bring masses of loss to the country and people especially in the rapidly development time computer is the foundation on business and scientific research .some people use Internet to thrift the sentiment. undoubtly, Internet and computer are both the invention of scientific research .At this time , There must be restrictions on invention of scientific research

In  sum up ,there is no question about the restrictions on scientific research and development placed by government It is necessary for the government to put a positive restriction on discoveries and inventions of scientific research and development
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iissue69【today is the day小组】第12次作业
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Government should place few ,if any ,restrictions on scientific research and development

One coin has two sides

How much restrictions government placed on scientific research and development should be always item-by-item. I think government should place a positive restrictions on scientific research and development just because it brings us the most effects in our daily life

As we all know that the fund of scientific research and development mostly comes from government .Without the support of government’s fund, science and technology may hold up(suspend?) and at least can’t make great and rapid progress ,of course, in contrast, too much restrictions of the fund applied in scientific research and development will delay its progress., we all know  that the development of science and technology under the freedom sky .can make the greatest progress ,no one could control the result of research .second under the government restrictions the group of scientists could get the best adjustment to make the best work, to create the wonderful fruit and importantly?solve the most urgent problems that concern society

In the second place ,government should refrain from interfering with the freedom of scientific enguiry?,there is no distinguish on the results of discovery and invention of science and technology by the standard that which one is good pr which one is bad

The reason why some inventions or discoveries are called bad is that the invention used in the daily life threaten people’s security on passions and life foe instance ,in the second world war two Atomics set by America to prestige Japan army doing back to their island made the building on duangdao and changqi down to earth, and people in that war ,America use the bomb just for the world peace and for the finish of Chinese people’s war disaster. However ,in that time If there is no restriction from union nations ,maybe another bomb, no one knows ,will be set on which region 这个例子要体现TS还要再修改下

I admit society today develop healthful? and rapidly but there is doubt that some bad phenomenons exist .one of them called high—technology guilt is based on computer ,some people called haker used virus to attack other’s important material even the nation’s sentiment? ,as a result it bring masses of loss to the country and people especially in the rapidly development time computer is the foundation on business and scientific research .some people use Internet to thrift the sentiment. undoubtly, Internet and computer are both the invention of scientific research .At this time , There must be restrictions on invention of scientific research 不知是排版问题还是别的, 语法要修改

In  sum up/ to sum up/ in sum ,there is no question about the restrictions on scientific research and development placed by government It is necessary for the government to put a positive restriction on discoveries and inventions of scientific research and development

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