IMPULSE作文小组——周五作业 雪羽酒

雪羽酒UID: 2515193

因为今天周一，不知道IMPULSE同人们应该写那一篇题目，就拿周五没写的来练习了。。。
没有限时，结果写太多了。。。

With Bill Gates' dream of everybody having a personal computer progressively comes true, reading without referring to papers, or using electronic books, becomes popular day by day. However, I disagree with the viewpoint that published books will totally disappear in twenty years.

Just look at the office life, although almost every desk has a computer, and the materials of a meeting will be send to each member ahead of time, but quite a number of people attending the meeting would like to print them out on papers. Why? It's easy for them to take with. That's the same with a paper-based book, you can read wherever you are just with a simple action of opening it. On the contrary, if you want to read books through a laptop, except for its heavy weight causing a big burden especially for girls, you should also take its electric requirement into account: what if the there isn't a electrical outlet? What if the system suddenly breaks up? Besides, it also takes you quite amount of time waiting for its opening.

Some may argue that people may be more likely to read by mobile phones in the future, which can act as a portable media(前面用冠词a 对吗?). I admit that it's even more evitable and lighter than books, but don't forget it's just a media, users can't write any notes or draw a graph beside the lines, which is a important method to help you learn the key point by heart. Obviously, this portable method is not convenient.

Moreover, reading with the paper-based books is a specific sign that reflects you taste. YiZhongtian, a famous doctor as a lecturer in a forum of China, said that reading books gives him a feeling of quietness. When smelled the fragment of printing ink from the book, feeling the tactility of each paper sheet (纸张是这么讲吗?), he got into a state of addiction and even forgot himself existence. As he said this, his rubbed his hands imagining the feeling of book paper. This action impressed me deeply, and makes me believe that most people who have a profound knowledge love to read books with the genuine published one.

According to all the reasons above, I oppose the opinion that published books will totally disappear in 20 years. Adversely, I hold the standpoint that the colorful history of published books will never end.

meaninghanUID: 2512532

With Bill Gates' dream of everybody having a personal computer progressively（用的好，学习了） comes true, reading without referring to papers, or using electronic books, becomes popular day by day. However, I disagree with the viewpoint that published books will totally disappear in twenty years.

Just look at the office life（environment）, although almost every desk has a computer, and the materials of a meeting will be send to each member ahead of time via emails, but quite a number of people attending the meeting would like to print them out on papers. Why? It's easy for them to take with. That's the same with a paper-based book, you can read wherever you are just with a simple action of opening it. On the contrary, if you want to read books through (in) a laptop, except for its heavy weight causing a big burden especially for girls, you should also take its electric requirement into account: what if the there isn't a electrical outlet? What if the system suddenly breaks up(down）? Besides, it also takes you quite amount of time waiting for its opening.

Some may argue that people may be more likely to read by mobile phones in the future, which can act as a portable media(前面用冠词a 对吗?应该可以吧，media是有复数形式的). I admit that it's even more evitable and lighter than books, but don't forget it's just a media, users can't write any notes or draw a graph beside the lines, which is a important method to help you learn the key point by heart. Obviously, this portable method is not convenient.

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Moreover, reading with the paper-based books is a specific sign that reflects you taste. YiZhongtian, a famous doctor（这里的doctor用着感觉很奇怪） as a lecturer in a forum of China, said that reading books gives him a feeling of quietness. When smelled the fragment of printing ink from the book, feeling the tactility of each paper sheet (纸张是这么讲吗?), he got into a state of addiction and even forgot himself existence. As he said this, his rubbed his hands imagining the feeling of book paper. This action impressed me deeply, and makes me believe that most people who have a profound knowledge love to read books with the genuine published one（love the genuine touch of published books).

According to all the reasons above, I oppose the opinion that published books will totally disappear in 20 years. Adversely, I hold the standpoint that the colorful history of published books will never end.

kturyUID: 2274868

With Bill Gates' dream of everybody having a personal computer progressively[gradually 好点?] comes true, reading without referring to papers, or using electronic books, becomes popular day by day. However, I disagree with the viewpoint that published books will totally disappear in twenty years.

Just look at the office life, although almost every desk has a computer, and the materials of a meeting will be send to each member ahead of time, but[可以不用,前面有although] quite a number of people attending the meeting would like to print them out on papers[DEL]. Why? It's easy for them to take with. That's the same with a paper-based book, you can read wherever you are just with a simple action of opening it. On the contrary, if you want to read books through a laptop, except for its heavy weight causing a big burden especially for girls, you should also take its electric requirement into account: what if the[DEL] there isn't a electrical outlet? What if the system suddenly breaks up? Besides, it also takes you quite amount of time waiting for its opening.

Some may argue that people may be more likely to read[+books] by mobile phones in the future, which can act as a portable media(前面用冠词a 对吗?对!). I admit that it's even more evitable[再考虑一下 protable?] and lighter than books, but don't forget it's just a media, users can't write any notes or draw a graph beside the lines, which is a important method to help you learn the key point by heart. Obviously, this portable method is not convenient.

Moreover, reading with the paper-based books is a specific sign that reflects you taste. YiZhongtian, a famous doctor as a lecturer in a forum of China, said that reading books gives him a feeling of quietness. When smelled[与后面的feeling一致] the fragment of printing ink from the book, feeling the tactility of each paper sheet[DEL] (纸张是这么讲吗?), he got into a state of addiction and even forgot himself existence. As he said this, his rubbed his hands imagining the feeling of book paper[啥意思?]. This action impressed me deeply, and makes me believe that most people who have a profound knowledge love to read books with the genuine published one.[再修改一下]

According to all the reasons above, I oppose the opinion that published books will totally disappear in 20 years. Adversely, I hold the standpoint that the colorful history of published books will never end.

请教一下what if 的用法?
第一段: 在on the contray以后,你使用了一个生活中的例子,如果还是谈在office 的反面论证会不会好点呢? 就说拿着笔记本去开会 会有种种的麻烦.
第三段: 写的很传神啊,呵呵
写的很棒,学习了!
水平有限,望海涵-ktury

雪羽酒UID: 2515193

With Bill Gates' dream of everybody having a personal computer progressively[gradually 好点?我想表示一步步累进的过程, 曾见到过有人用progressively的~] comes true, reading without referring to papers, or using electronic books, becomes popular day by day. However, I disagree with the viewpoint that published books will totally disappear in twenty years.


Just look at the office life, although almost every desk has a computer, and the materials of a meeting will be send to each member ahead of time, but[可以不用,前面有although] quite a number of people attending the meeting would like to print them out on papers[DEL]. Why? It's easy for them to take with. That's the same with a paper-based book, you can read wherever you are just with a simple action of opening it. On the contrary, if you want to read books through a laptop, except for its heavy weight causing a big burden especially for girls, you should also take its electric requirement into account: what if the[DEL] there isn't a electrical outlet? What if the system suddenly breaks up? Besides, it also takes you quite amount of time waiting for its opening.


Some may argue that people may be more likely to read[+books] by mobile phones in the future, which can act as a portable media(前面用冠词a 对吗?对!). I admit that it's even more evitable[再考虑一下 protable? 对的:handshake 是portable] and lighter than books, but don't forget it's just a media, users can't write any notes or draw a graph beside the lines, which is a important method to help you learn the key point by heart. Obviously, this portable method is not convenient.

Moreover, reading with the paper-based books is a specific sign that reflects you taste. YiZhongtian, a famous doctor as a lecturer in a forum of China, said that reading books gives him a feeling of quietness. When smelling the fragment of printing ink from the book, feeling the tactility of each piece of paper(改成这样~？), he got into a state of addiction and even forgot himself existence. As he said this, his rubbed his hands imagining the feeling of book paper[啥意思? 想表示:the tactility of each leaf of paper--这样改行不~]. This action impressed me deeply, and makes me believe that most people who have a profound knowledge love to read books with a genuine touch.  


According to all the reasons above, I oppose the opinion that published books will totally disappear in 20 years. Adversely, I hold the standpoint that the colorful history of published books will never end.


答~：what if 后面可以加从句；
　　我原本是像你说的一样，on the contrary 后面用office里的反例：On the contrary, if you want to read the materials through a laptop, except for its heavy weight causing a big burden especially for girls, you should also take its electric requirement into account: what if there isn't enough electrical outlets for every member? What if the system suddenly breaks up and you have to imagining the data graph that the manager is referring to?  后来一看题目，发觉是印刷“书”，就硬邦邦改成这样了。。。不知materials能不能往书上靠？。。。