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发表于 2008-9-2 13:26:10 |显示全部楼层

Cooperation is more important than the past. A or D

Cooperation is the behavior when individuals encounter difficulties tough to handle. Look back to our hominid ancestor from several thousand years ago, they congregate together to go hunting in groups. While when it comes to the present society, we also gather power from amount of people in the development of the whole society. As far as I am concerned, Cooperation at now deepens into various domains and is more crucial than past.

To begin with, in business era, competition enables cooperation to play a continuous important role in industrialization and urbanization. Cooperation becomes remarkable because in order to climb up to the top of the economy. Your brand must have the superiority and advantage to survive in the furious competitive market. However, if the skill of technological department or educational level of the manager does not catch up with the advanced developing trend, it is essential and necessary for the company to build a cooperation bridge to stand steadily among the numerous competitors. Take car-processing factory as an example, generally speaking, each worker is responsible to deal with every part to fix vehicles. On the contrary, at present, almost every company is employing automatic assembly-line to process and product their commodities. As a result, cooperating well is really a fundamental element to a high-efficient production. Thus, if one company wants to be operating successful today, it needs to be better cooperated.

As to the social problems, due to the complexity of the present situation, they can not be solved by single Asian, Latino, African or American, which indicates that we have to cooperate with each other because we are living in one world. For example, terrorism, epidemic crisis, a potentially devastating climate change and so on. Without cooperation of various nations, we can not solve them comprehensively. Take global warming as an example, if more and more carbon dioxide from each country swarm into the aerosphere, we can not enjoy the blue sky any more. Furthermore, our connected continent and ocean will also be threatened. However, if all the countries on earth limited the release of automobile and the burning of coal, our earth will as beautiful as ancient times.

To sum up, cooperation is important for each individual and even every country. It makes our technology keep growing simultaneously and evenly.

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发表于 2008-9-2 14:18:36 |显示全部楼层
写的太好了,我只能说是拜读了。把抽象题目具体化成两个点的写法很值得学习。
只有两个疑问:
1,our earth will as beautiful as ancient times.有点绝对了吧。
2,最后提到It makes our technology keep growing simultaneously and evenly.好像和前面关系不大哎。

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发表于 2008-9-2 23:31:48 |显示全部楼层

哇,看起来不错嘛,等下再仔细读读

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发表于 2008-9-4 23:35:51 |显示全部楼层
错误不少

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