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     9月3日
agree/disagree：university students should be required to take basic science classes even they are not part of the field of the study. 2007年7月7日教育类

The purpose of attending university is to gain academic knowledge and practical skills. Is it necessary for all the students majoring in various subjects to take basic science classes? In my point of view, the ultimate aim of studying in university is not solely focuses on the specific knowledge in the field of study but to cultivate them as a knowledgeable person instead.

Admittedly, deep study will be beneficial to the comprehensive understanding in his major. However, equally important is the fact that the execution of multiple-step tasks is accomplished in a series-parallel sequence. Each subject is a science, and the relationship among a variety of sciences can not be evaluated and judged upon specific or general identities. The famous "Game Theory" was founded in the thinking of communication which can be considered as the science of society, although its founder Nash was majoring in mathematics. Furthermore, this theory have been used in economy around the world. This could prove that the treasure of other subjects can not be separated just beyond the character or apparent difference among those of others. The inner connection of subjects will stand out sometimes and bring you miracle out of your imagine. It is the strake of the basic science realizes the pick of the basket in profession.

Furthermore, by learning different basic science class, student could broaden the horizon both in academic and communication as well. Our furiously competitive world requires us both the ability in specific field but also knowledge in wild range which may make you advanced in searching a job. Because the ability of communicate plays a simultaneous important role in the future life. Hence, a broad scale of information may help. Correspondently, student who pays all his attention on his specific subject will be fallen behind as the information he conserved is too narrow. Accompanied with you may probably becomes one boring and tedious thing. Moreover, if you are sentenced to be aunenlightened person, that will be difficult to cooperate with other members or deserve respect from them.

In conclusion, it is necessary for university to require student to learn basic science classes though these are not included in the field of their major. Learning other subject is meaningful and useful for their education as well as the future life.

[ 本帖最后由 qawsed 于 2008-9-3 23:47 编辑 ]

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The purpose of attending university is to gain academic knowledge and practical skills. Is it necessary for all the students majoring in various subjects to take basic science classes? In my point of view, the ultimate aim of studying in university is not solely focuses on the specific knowledge in the field of study but to cultivate them as a knowledgeable person instead.开头就点出教育的目的，深刻，同时与学习要专还是要博联系在一起，学习了！X{&@&];S
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Admittedly, deep(感觉deep有点别扭，further) study will be beneficial to the comprehensive understanding in his major. However, equally important is the fact that the execution of multiple-step tasks is accomplished in a series-parallel sequence. Each subject is a science, and the relationship among a variety of sciences can not be evaluated and judged upon specific or general identities. The famous "Game Theory" was founded in the thinking of communication which can be considered as the science of society, although its founder Nash was majoring in mathematics. Furthermore, this theory have been used in economy around the world. This could prove that the treasure of other subjects can not be separated just beyond the character or apparent difference among those of others. The inner connection of subjects will stand out sometimes and bring you miracle out of your imagine. It is the strake of the basic science realizes the pick of the basket in profession. l8t#B0W5uB
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Furthermore, by learning different basic science classes, student could broaden the horizon both in academic and communication as well. Our furiously competitive world requires us both the ability in specific field but also knowledge in wild range which may make you advanced in searching a job. Because the ability of communicate plays a simultaneous important role in the future life. Hence, a broad scale of information may help. Correspondently, student who pays all his attention on his specific subject will be fallen behind as the information he conserved is too narrow. Accompanied with you may probably becomes one boring and tedious thing. Moreover, if you are sentenced to be aunenlightened person, that will be difficult to cooperate with other members or deserve respect from them.|留学|签证|TOEFL|GRE6|9E$Y}(^Z.r~        C
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In conclusion, it is necessary for university to require student to learn basic science classes though these are not included in the field of their major. Learning other subject is meaningful and useful for their education as well as the future life.

总体分析得很深入，例子也很切合题目，要向楼主学习分析问题的能力啊！

PS:我的文章中As I see it 是原来在备考四六级时用到的，也是我想，我认为的意思，不过可能偏口语化些，作文里应用可能欠妥当。

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The purpose of attending university is to gain academic knowledge and practical skills. Is it necessary for all the students majoring in various subjects to take basic science classes? In my point of view, the ultimate aim of studying in university is not solely focuses on the specific knowledge in the field of study but to cultivate them as a knowledgeable person instead.

Admittedly, deep study will be beneficial to the comprehensive understanding in his major. However, equally important is the fact that the execution of multiple-step tasks is accomplished in a series-parallel sequence. Each subject is a science, and the relationship among a variety of sciences can not be evaluated and judged upon specific or general identities. The famous "Game Theory" was founded in the thinking of communication which can be considered as the science of society, although its founder Nash was majoring in mathematics. Furthermore, this theory have has been used in economy around the world. This could prove that the treasure of other subjects can not be separated just beyond the character or apparent difference among those of others.(对不起没太懂) The inner connection of subjects will stand out sometimes and bring you miracle out of your imagine. It is the strake of the basic science realizes the pick of the basket in profession.

Furthermore, by learning different basic science class, student could broaden the horizon both in academic and communication as well(as well用的很好，感觉很地道). Our furiously competitive world requires us both the ability in specific field but also knowledge in wild range which may make you advanced in searching a job. Because the ability of communicate plays a simultaneous（应该用个副词吧） important role in the future life. Hence, a broad scale of information may help. Correspondently, student who pays all his attention on his specific subject will be fallen behind as the information he conserved is too narrow. Accompanied with you may probably becomes one boring and tedious thing. Moreover, if you are sentenced to be aunenlightened （拼写错误）person, that will be difficult to cooperate with other members or deserve respect from them.

In conclusion, it is necessary for university to require student to learn basic science classes though these are not included in the field of their major. Learning other subject is meaningful （这个词感觉不太合适carry great weight?）and useful for their education as well as the future life
总之，楼主行文流畅，开头明义，还有闪光句型，两个基本点选的也不错，而且按时完成，赞一个