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layfolkUID: 2418021

    I consider pepole's car's using will be decreased for about several reasons as below:
    Firstly,at the present time ,the oil resource have a high price,which is always increasing as so far.As we all know the the car's consummers cannot afford the high price of the oil or
petrol-the byproduct of the oil-for the long time,.And we cannot see a bright future in next
twenty years that there will be the proper substites for the oil consuming.So,as a reasonable person, most pepole will choose the other substitue traffic tools for their out going,such as the bicycle for the work,trains for the travel abroad or going to another city,or in some
other situations.
      Secondly,I think the car's using will be decreased for the atomosphere reason:it is known
to us that the car's consuming is one of the factor of the Global Warming for its air
pollution.And most people know the fact through the media such as the newspaper,TV,internet or the education that we should protect our environment and they accept the idea we should do
something for the environment protection idea,and one of the necessary step is that we can
decrease our car's using.And in some coutries,the goverments call for people going out for job by bicycle, walking or by bus.I consider most of the educated people will do their best for the contribution for the enviroment protection,which is not only beneficial for one's own but
also good for the descent!
   Thirdly, as the traffic becomes more and more heavier,it is not reasonable to waste the time on the road to work,and it will be proper to choose the other substitues such as by bus,by
bicycle,even the walking,if it is not very long from the working place.And as the enviorment
problem becomes more and more serious,I consider the governments will encourage the traffic
substitues using by giving people policy convinients.
   Finally,I will give my conclusion that I am very self-confidence of the idea that the car's using will be decreaed!

[ 本帖最后由 layfolk 于 2008-9-5 11:41 编辑 ]

macross_36UID: 2306285

I consider pepole's car's using will be decreased for about several reasons as below:



Firstly, at the present time ,the oil resource have a high price, which is always increasing as so far(?). As we all know the thecar's consumers （这个用法不对吧） cannot afford the high price of the oil or petrol-the byproduct of the oil-for the long time. And we cannot see a bright future in next twenty years that there will be the proper substites for the oil consuming. So, as a reasonable person, most pepole will choose the other substitue traffic tools for their out going, such as the bicycle for the work, trains for the travel abroad or going to another city, or in some
other situations.

Secondly, I think (口语化)the car's using will be decreased for the atomosphere reason(直接说air pollution是不是更好？):it is known to us that the car's consuming is one of the factor of the Global Warming for its air pollution. And most people know the fact through the media such as the newspaper, TV, internet or the education（？） that we should protect our environment and they accept the idea we should do something for the environment protection idea(/), and one of the necessary step is that we can decrease our car's using. And in some coutries, the goverments call for people going out for job by bicycle, walking or by bus. I consider most of the educated people will do their best for the contribution for the enviroment protection, which is not only beneficial for one's own but also good for the descent!



Thirdly, as the traffic becomes more and more heavier, it is not reasonable to waste the time on the road to work, and it will be proper to choose the other substitues such as by bus, by bicycle, even the walking（on foot）, if it is not very long from the working place. And as the enviorment problem becomes more and more serious, I consider the governments will encourage the traffic substitues using by giving people policy convinients.

Finally, I will give my conclusion that I am very self-confidence of the idea that the car's using will be decreaed.

总结：论点和我一模一样，呵呵。缺点是，单词拼写错误有点多，句子使用也稍有问题。加油！


[ 本帖最后由 macross_36 于 2008-9-5 13:21 编辑 ]

david.lUID: 2503791

哇,那么小的字体
看不清楚啊

layfolkUID: 2418021

谢谢1楼的修改;
    回2楼,我下次就有经验了,把字体写大了的说.

layfolkUID: 2418021

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   Secondly,I deem the car's using will be decreased for the air problem:it is known
to us that the cars consuming is one of the main factors of the Global Warming for its air
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