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9月7日
agree or disagree ：advertisements is a waste of a company's money and time because consumers have known what they want to buy（07.12.8传媒类）
Advertising is a form of communication that typically attempts to persuade potential customers to purchase or to consume more of a particular brand of product or service. Potential customers involve people who do not know what they really want and people who know what they want. No matter what type of customer people belong to, advertisement is always a good way to introduce them new products, or to attract and persuade them to purchase a particular brand of product and discard competitors' products. Consequently, more customers will lead to higher profits for companies who have implemented successful commercial strategies.
On the one hand, for people who do not know what they really want, advertisement will help companies to exhibit products to those potential consumers. Such commercial activities can lead people to know properties of certain brand of product, and then attract and stimulate part of those potential customers to buy what they originally would not be interested in. For example, a restaurant is going to introduce a new recipe. It is necessary to let the customers know whether they will like it. Now, the management of the restaurant need to advertise what the new recipe tastes like, spicy or sweet, and what the new recipe looks like, black or blue. These information will reflect the properties of the new recipe to customers and help customers to decide whether to consume it.
On the other hand, for people who already know what they want, there are usually more than one brand of production or service to purchase. To attract potential customers to choose a particular brand, companies need to advertise their products' advantages and merits over those of other competitors' products. Also, to keep customers' brand loyalty and to prevent current customers from being attracted by competitors, companies must make a long-term advertisement strategy. In other words, advertisement helps companies to built their customer bases--the survival condition for companies. Coca and Pepsi, for example, always put lots of money in advertisement to fight each other for soft drinks market. They are not wasting their money and time. On the contrary, if one of them save these costs, it would be beaten and be replaced by the other one.
In conclusion, advertisement is not only a way to attract new customers but also a way to protect current customer bases for companies. By the repetition of commercial messages, advertisement will bring great profits to companies. In general, more advertisements a company runs, the more profits it makes. Therefore, I disagree with that advertisements is a waste of a company's money and time because consumers have known what they want to buy.

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改的不好请见凉!一起学习!

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QCpOn the one hand, for people who do not know what they really want, advertisement will help companies to exhibit products to those potential consumers. Such commercial activities can lead people to know properties of certain brand of product, and then attract and stimulate part of those potential customers to buy what they originally would not be interested in. For example, a restaurant is going to introduce a new recipe. It is necessary to let the customers know whether they will like it. Now, the management of the restaurant need to advertise what the new recipe tastes like, spicy or sweet, and what the new recipe looks like, black or blue. These information information 是单数will reflect the properties of the new recipe to customers and help customers to decide whether to consume it.

_*U8H7c3n!Gg|留学|签证|TOEFL|GREOn the other hand, for people who already know what they want, there are usually more than one brand of production or service to purchase. To attract potential customers to choose a particular brand, companies need to advertise their products' advantages and merits over those of other competitors' products. Also, to keep customers' brand loyalty and to prevent current customers from being attracted by competitors, companies must make a long-term advertisement strategy. In other words, advertisement helps companies to built 时态 their customer bases--the survival condition for companies. Coca and Pepsi, for example, always put lots of money in advertisement to fight each other for soft drinks market. They are not wasting their money and time. On the contrary, if one of them save 单三形式these costs, it would be beaten and be replaced by the other one.In conclusion, advertisement is not only a way to attract new customers but also a way to protect current customer bases 不晓得在这里是怎么讲? 不过观点值得学习! for companies. By the repetition of commercial messages, advertisement will bring great profits to companies. In general, more advertisements a company runs, the more profits it makes. Therefore, I disagree with that advertisements is 主谓一致a waste of a company's money and time 因为这句与前半句的逻辑好象不符合吧, 不同意广告是一种浪费,因为消费者已经知道要买什么了? because consumers have known what they want to buy.u mY6@^8h\^

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ourtransUID: 2241441

非常感谢！！
最后一句that后是一整个从句，其实是我偷懒直接copy题目啦。