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9月9日

那个更好，serious movie 还是 amusing movie？（2007.3.23 ）

Considering movies' largest function is to bring entertainment to movie goers, I like amusing movies better than serious movies. Amusing movies bring laugh, postive outlook as well as moral lessons occasionally to movies goers.

The most important reason that I prefer amusing movies is that they are entertaining, bringing laugh to life. Modern society has put so much pressure on individuals, so we need to escape from tedious daily agenda by watching funny movies. As a part of entertainment industry, movies are supposed to relieve people from excessive anxieties and worries. After watching movies, we expect a refreshing mind and a good mood, so that we can go back to work or study with a positive mood, which leads to high efficiency. A example of my brother suffices to illustrate the creational function of amusing movies. My brother is pursuing PHD degree now. Two months ago, he found it so boring and distressful to spend all his time in lab making experiments that he wanted to quit the PHD program. One of his friends recomanded him to take a rest and watch some amusing movies before making such serious decision. The effect of this advice was quite telling. My brother has come back to lab after getting relaxation from watching amusing movies. In comparison to amusing movies, serious movies more often than not make people feel low. Serious movies expose the dark side of human nature and society, yet provide no answer to solve problems. It is very likely to give an bad impact to already gloomy viewers.

Another factor that makes amusing movies more appealing is that we can learn some moral lessons in amusing movies. In China, Zhou Xingchi is considered counterpart of Kim Carrey of America. Most of young people of my age have watched amusing movies stared by Zhou. There is often a deeply rooted theme in these movies that no matter how humble we are at present, we have to keep faith and believe that one day we'll finally succeed. For example, in one movie, Zhou played the part of an actor. He wanted to be noticed and become famous. However, no matter how hard he had tried, there is no way for him to make dream come true. He didn't give up. Instead, he turned to open a school to train actors and actresses. Besides having fun in watching this movie, I also learn the lesson that we should keep trying and helping others.

In sum, since amusing movies have at least two advantages over serious movies, as discussed above, I'd like to conclude that watching amusing movies is more beneficial for those who need a better mood.

candiceheUID: 2543359

14点前就传上来了，太早了，等我自己的写完再给你改把。
等我一些时间把。

candiceheUID: 2543359

Considering movies' largest function is to bring entertainment to movie goers, I like amusing movies better than serious movies. Amusing movies bring laugh, postive (positive) outlook as well as moral lessons occasionally to movies goers. (直接写入正题，不错)

The most important reason that I prefer amusing movies is that they are entertaining, bringing laugh (humor,不知道可不可以说bring laugh) to life. Modern society has put so much pressure on individuals, so we need to escape from tedious daily agenda by watching funny movies. As a part of entertainment industry, movies are supposed to relieve people from excessive anxieties and worries. After watching movies, we expect a refreshing mind and a good mood, so that we can go back to work or study with a positive mood, which leads to high efficiency. A(an) example of my brother suffices to illustrate the creational function of amusing movies. My brother is pursuing PHD degree now. Two months ago, he found it so boring and distressful to spend all his time in lab making experiments that he wanted to quit the PHD program. One of his friends recomanded (recomended) him to take a rest and watch some amusing movies before making such serious decision. The effect of this advice was quite telling. My brother has come back to lab after getting relaxation from watching amusing movies. In comparison to amusing movies, serious movies more often than not make people feel low. Serious movies expose the dark side of human nature and society, yet provide no answer to solve problems. It is very likely to give an bad impact to already gloomy viewers.(作了对比，值得学习)

Another factor that makes amusing movies more appealing is that we can learn some moral lessons in amusing movies. In China, Zhou Xingchi is considered counterpart of Kim Carrey of America. Most of young people of my age have watched amusing movies stared by Zhou. There is often a deeply rooted theme in these movies that no matter how humble we are at present, we have to keep faith and believe that one day we'll finally succeed. For example, in one movie, Zhou played the part of an actor. He wanted to be noticed and become famous. However, no matter how hard he had tried, there is no way for him to make dream come true. He didn't give up. Instead, he turned to open a school to train actors and actresses. Besides having fun in watching this movie, I also learn the lesson that we should keep trying and helping others.

In sum, since amusing movies have at least two advantages over serious movies, as discussed above, I'd （学术文章可以使用缩写么？）like to conclude that watching amusing movies is more beneficial for those who need a better mood.

1．感觉lz的文章已经很好了，语言很好，用词方面很多地方我没见过相关用法，可能是我太孤陋寡闻了。如果限时能写成这样，就等着作文拿满分吧 。
2．我是一个很挑剔的人，都已经挑不出问题了。感觉lz是不是刚考完GRE, 风格很像。
3．希望有机会lz可以改到我的作文。