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发表于 2008-9-9 22:54:12 |显示全部楼层

Do you agree or disagree: It's better to watch the serious movie that help people thinking than to watch movies that could amuse and entertain people?

Movies have become one of the most popular entertainments in our lives. As the pick of the basket, movie tells extensive stories originated from life. It also then evolves to a variety of styles, in order to cater for different tastes, such as comedy, tragedy, action, romance, Sci-Fi, you can capture whichever you want. Among those, some are serious, others are entertaining. Actually, in my opinion, it is better for the people to watch serious movies.

Admittedly, no matter which kind of movie we watch, we could enjoy it for relaxation because watching movie helps us escape from the real world and step into role player’s world. It is true that watching comedian Stephen Chow’s action movie amuses us a lot. Whenever we saw he acted in a curious way and speak in a discontinuous tone, we kept laughing freely and loudly.


However, I want to discuss that serious movie inspires people most and also urges critical thinking of them. Watching this kind of movies is a good way to learn the serious events of history and present society, because the images showed in movie are visual and thoughtful. By watching movie about the Second World War, we are aware of the destruction toward society and disaster to citizens among the world wide human being. Take the well-known movie “The Schindler’s List” as an example. I learnt a lot from the miserable life of Jewish in the Second World War, as well as how they sustained their volition and struggled to survive, and how they protected the proud of their nation. I was struck by their spirit of perseverance.

Moreover, movies are mirrors of our lives. It seems that when you feel disappointed, watching a serious movie could strengthen your broken heart and make you inspired. When I watched movie <The Shawshank Redemption>, I was totally moved and can not calm down for a long time. The part impressed me most is when Andy got out of the jail--a hell in the world. He extended his arms in front of him in the heavy rain as if he were welcoming the fresh air and the freedom. At that moment, I saw the faith win the darkness, and light illumined his eyes in the dark blue sky. Under the light, I could feel my recreant innermost being shivered as his voice said: “Remember, Hope is a good thing, maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies!” He was innocent. The jail can not close birds like him because his feathers are too bright.

In conclusion, serious movie could inspired us a lot. It is more memorable for us after watching a serious movie and the influence can extend for a long time far beyond our estimation.

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发表于 2008-9-9 23:35:46 |显示全部楼层
Movies have become one of the most popular entertainments in our lives. As the pick of the basket, (这句短语好啊,但具体什么意思还有怎么用,还请LZ明示,学习学习)movie tells extensive stories originated from life. It also then evolves to a variety of styles, in order to cater for different tastes, such as comedy, tragedy, action, romance, Sci-Fi, you can capture whichever you want. Among those, some are serious, others are entertaining. Actually, in my opinion, it is better for the people to watch serious movies.
Admittedly, no matter which kind of movie we watch, we could enjoy it for relaxation because watching movie helps us escape from the real world and step into role player’s world(world和前面重了protagonist’s role). It is true that watching comedian Stephen Chow’s action movie amuses us a lot. Whenever we saw he acted in a curious way and speak in a discontinuous tone, we kept laughing freely and loudly.这段和上面的观点句不太搭,有点突然,个人觉得可以并到观点句前)
However, I want to discuss that serious movie inspires people most and also urges critical thinking of them. Watching this kind of movies is a good way to learn the serious events of history and present society, because the images showed in movie are visual and thoughtful. By watching movie about the Second World War, we are aware of the destruction toward society and disaster to citizens among the world wide human being. Take the well-known movie “The Schindler’s List” as an example. I learnt a lot from the miserable life of Jewish in the Second World War, as well as how they sustained their volition and struggled to survive, and how they protected the proud of their nation. I was struck by their spirit of perseverance.
Moreover, movies are mirrors of our lives. It seems that when you feel disappointed, watching a serious movie could strengthen your broken heart and make you inspired(inspired you这样形式和前面的并列). When I watched movie <The Shawshank Redemption>, I was totally moved and can not calm down for a long time. The part impressed me most is when Andy got out of the jail--a hell in the world. He extended his arms in front of him(可不要) in the heavy rain as if he were welcoming the fresh air and the freedom. At that moment, I saw the faith win the darkness, and light illumined his eyes in the dark blue sky. Under the light, I could feel my recreant innermost being shivered as his voice said: “Remember, Hope is a good thing, maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies!” He was innocent. The jail can not close birds like him because his feathers are too bright. 觉得这两句和主题不太相关。
In conclusion, serious movie could inspired us a lot. It is more memorable for us after watching a serious movie and the influence can extend for a long time far beyond our estimation.

LZ的语言功底挺强的,结构组织的挺好,例子也详细。
其它的个人意见如有不妥请指出!
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发表于 2008-9-10 10:30:17 |显示全部楼层
同ls问。。。as the pick of the basket 是啥意思。。。:confused:

lz这篇文章很impressive呀~~ GOOD JOB~~

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发表于 2008-9-11 06:45:33 |显示全部楼层
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=876855&extra=page%3D1%26amp%3Bfilter%3Dtype%26amp%3Btypeid%3D280 组长好!各位成员好!你有时间是否可以帮忙看看作业,9.8的。因为那天刚刚收到6G的成绩就没有心思写了。是和9.9日一起交的,谢谢!!

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