COMEON作文小组------macross 9月13日作业

macross_36UID: 2306285

With the fast development of the modern society, the pace of life is becoming more and more quick(rapid). As a result, how to relax the pressure from work and study is a crucial problem. It has long been put into qualm in deciding whether to spend time alone or with some other people could serve to truly relax. The statement asserts that to spend time alone carries more weight. Personally, I disagree with the statement, I advocate enjoying time with other people and I would like to explore several reasons as follow.

The first reason is that to spend time with friends brings many benefits. On one hand, friends, especially the peers, are always the first to come up and give the shirt off their backs when we are in trouble. They are willing to help us at anytime we encounter difficulties. On the other hand, the peers could easily understand our feeling for the reason that they often meet the samiliar(similar) problems. Thus, when we spend time with friends, we are truly sharing our pressure with them. In a word, to share time with friends could relieve our pressure.

Another essential reason is that spending time with family members has many advantanges(advantages). Our family members, especially our parents could leave us reasonable suggestions when we spend time telling them our difficulities(difficulties). Here is an example that can aptly demonstrate this viewpoint, once I fail to pass the middle examination and I told my father about this terrible fact. He encouraged me with an old saying that "failure(defeat) is the mother of success" and suggested me never to give up and pay more attention to the questions that I did not work out. At last, I passed the final examination with an ideal score.

In addition, contray(contrary) to share time with other people, being alone has several undeniable drawbacks. According a recent survey, being along will strengthen the felling of fear, nerver(never) and frustration. All these factors may contribute to pressure. Poll after poll shows that many people who have few friends lead an unhappy life. Thus, spending time alone is not a proper way to reduce pressure.

To sum up, it goes without saying that spending time with other people obviously outweighs spending time alone.

candiceheUID: 2543359

With the fast development of the modern society, the pace of life is becoming more and more quick(rapid). As a result, how to relax the pressure from work and study is a crucial problem. It has long been put into qualm in deciding whether to spend time alone or with some other people could serve to truly relax. The statement (some people, statement能assert么？) asserts that to spend time alone carries more weight. Personally, I disagree with the statement, I advocate enjoying time with other people and I would like to explore several reasons as follow.


The first reason is that to spend time with friends brings many benefits. On one hand(on the one hand), friends, especially the peers, are always the first to come up and give the shirt off their backs when we are in trouble. They are willing to help us at anytime we encounter difficulties. On the other hand, the peers could easily understand our feeling for the reason that they often meet the samiliar(similar) problems. Thus, when we spend time with friends, we are truly sharing our pressure with them. In a word, to share time(spend time可以有share time这种用法么？) with friends could relieve our pressure.


Another essential reason is that spending time with family members has many advantanges(advantages). Our family members, especially our parents could leave(give) us reasonable suggestions when we spend time telling them our difficulities(difficulties). Here is an example that can aptly demonstrate this viewpoint, once I fail to pass the middle examination and I told my father about this terrible fact. He encouraged me with an old saying that "failure(defeat) is the mother of success" and suggested me never to give up and pay more attention to the questions that I did not work out. At last, I passed the final examination with an ideal score.


In addition, contray(contrary) to (这后面应该放名词，不能放动词短语)share(sharing) time with other people, being alone has several undeniable drawbacks. According a recent survey, being along will strengthen the felling of fear, nerver(never)(是nerve吧) and frustration. All these factors may contribute to pressure. Poll after poll shows that many people who have few friends lead an unhappy life. Thus, spending time alone is not a proper way to reduce pressure.
总体来看还不错，注意用词。ibt评分好像挺在乎这个的。

macross_36UID: 2306285

我记得是on one hand......on the other hand吧？
仁兄确定是on the one hand, on the other hand吗？

vanessa20UID: 2479494

原帖由 macross_36 于 2008-9-15 08:55 发表
我记得是on one hand......on the other hand吧？
仁兄确定是on the one hand, on the other hand吗？

on one hand， one the other hand

阿泰UID: 209473

on one hand， one the other hand

vanessa20UID: 2479494

经查证后发现两个都可以，第一个的the可省可不省;d: ;d: ;d:
对于这个idiom的用法网上众说纷纭，但是参考了一些老外的词典他们多数是  on THE one hand， on the other hand
on the one hand
the first thing to consider is. On the one hand, I'd like more money, but I don't want to work extra hours.
Usage notes: often followed by but on the other (hand) as a second consideration different from the first (even when on the one hand has not been used): I like classical music, but on the other hand, my husband loves jazz.

on the one hand...on the other hand
something that you say when you are speaking about two different facts or two opposite ways of thinking about a situation. On the one hand, I'd like more money, but on the other hand, I'm not prepared to work the extra hours in order to get it. On the one hand, you complain that you're lonely, and on the other hand you won't come to parties with me.
详情请见
http://idioms.thefreedictionary. ... ..on+the+other+hand
http://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/on+the+one+hand
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macross_36UID: 2306285

哇，好权威，太感动了，向vanessa20致敬！！！