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Agree or disagree: The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.(2007.9.25)

To spend time alone is indeed a good way to relax and release stress, but it is not the best way. As far as I am concerned, the best refreshing way should be a combination of staying in a private room and joining group activities. How we switch between these two aspects depends on the practical situation.

On the one hand, staying in a private space is a good way for us to avoid being disturbed when we already have too much social activities. In the modern society, we inevitably need to join many social activities: to cooperate with coworkers, to participate conferences, to negotiate with clients, and so on. Too much these activities may cause diverse negative emotions, such as hate, fear, anger and weariness. Sometimes we need a private space to stay far away other people--to escape from social activities. In other words, to spend time alone will give us a peaceful mind to relax us.

On the other hand, we also have spent much time to stay alone in order to handle documents or to study in a library or a study room. During these hard mental works, our brain would endure heavy burdens. Some scientific researches have indicated that the depression may result from long time individual works. In this case, to join parties or to play physical games with other people would be a better way to release these burdens than to keep staying alone. For example, after hard studying, I prefer to play basketball or just to hang out with friends once or twice a week. These group activities stimulate other parts of my brain different from those tired parts, helping me get rid of the heavy burden from metal works.

All in all, the combination of staying in a private room and joining group activities is the best way to diminish our pressure and to refresh our mind. When we already have too much social activities, we need to stay alone. On the contrary, when we have spent too much time working alone, group activities are better choices for us. How well this method would work depends on how we balance the two aspects of it.

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To spend time alone is indeed a good way to relax and release stress, but it is not the best way. As far as I am concerned, the best refreshing way should be a combination of staying in a private room and joining group activities.我会用it depends on practical situation that how we switch…否则主语有点长How we switch between these two aspects depends on the practical situation.;}r%Jc我
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HU@)X        ^ _5ZXbbs.gter.net 留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA‑Y~5G&eRAll in all, the combination of staying in a private room and joining group activities is the best way to diminish our pressure and to refresh our mind. When we already have too much 改many social activities, we need to stay alone. On the contrary, when we have spent too much time working alone, group activities are better choices for us. How well this method would work depends on how we balance the two aspects of it. LZ的结构和语言很好值得学习,写的也很清晰.但是我不晓得你的观点很中和是不是可以,是不是同意或不同意更好?!

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指出的几个地方都很好,记下了.
倒数第二个地方,因为which 在正式书面语中不能指导前面的正句话，所以我用了分词独立结构。

我也不确定这样提炼出一个第三方观点是不是可以。反正是反驳题目的观点，应该也还可以吧？