COMEON作文小组------macross 9月17日作业

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It has long been put into qualm in deciding whether it is better to work for a large company or a small one. Advocating working in the small company are those people who hold the belief that small company brings more opportunities to go to an upper position. However, in my point of view, people should choose the large company, when considering the chance to learn more and the notable honor it brings.

The first reason for my propensity to the large company is that we are likely to learn more in a large firm. On one hand, there are more employees in a large company, thus it is easy to get a lot of information from those people we will meet every day. On the other hand, big company has more qualified and knowledgeable people than the small one. From those people we could learn a lot. Generally speaking, a big company is like a large school with plenty of high qualified teachers. We are like the school’s new students, and the old staff are all our teachers. If we encounter a problem that is hard for us to solve, there are many “teachers” for us to reaching for help and learn from them. When knowledge plays the key role in determining future success, this advantage is strikingly important.

Another essential reason is that to work in a large company is a great honor for many people. Large companies such as Coca-cola, Nike and Sony have a great effluence among people yet it is extraordinarily difficult to enter such companies. Thus, a large number of people try to enter these corporations but less can achieve. Consequently, being a number of these companies becomes the proof of a person’s capability and a mark of gaining esteem of other people.

Admittedly, the advantage of working in the small company cannot be denied and neglected. Because there are less number of people in a small firm, the competition there is certainly much less than working in a large firm. Consequently, we may have more chance to get a high position with less effort. As an upper position is a common goal for everyone, this merit of a small company is undeniable.

To sum up, it is true that small company brings undeniable advantages, however the opportunities to learn more and the honor a big company could provide obviously carry more weight than the small one.

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It has long been put into qualm in deciding whether it is better to work for a large company or a small one. Advocating working in the small company are those people (Advocating working are those people 不对等)who hold the belief that small company brings more opportunities to go to an upper position. However, in my point of view, people should choose the (a) large company, when considering the chance to learn more and the notable honor it brings.
The first reason for my propensity to the large company is that we are likely to learn more in a large firm. On one hand, there are more employees in a large company, thus it is easy to get a lot of information from those people we will（不需要） meet every day. On the other hand, big company has more qualified and knowledgeable people than the small one. From those people we could learn a lot. Generally speaking, a big company is like a large school with plenty of high qualified teachers. We are like the school’s new students, and the old staff are all our teachers. If we encounter a problem that is hard for us to solve, there are many “teachers” for us to reaching for help and learning（和reaching对称） from them. When knowledge plays the key role in determining future success, this advantage is strikingly important.（这点写得和我的很像）

Another essential reason is that to work in a large company is a great honor for many people. Large companies such as Coca-cola, Nike and Sony have a great effluence（influence） among people yet it is extraordinarily difficult to enter such companies. Thus, a large number of people try to enter these corporations but less can achieve. Consequently, being a number （member）of these companies becomes the proof of a person’s capability and a mark of gaining esteem of other people.
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Admittedly, the advantage of working in the small company cannot be denied and neglected. Because there are less number of people in a small firm, the competition there is certainly much less than working in a large firm. Consequently, we may have more chance to get a high position with less effort. As an upper position is a common goal for everyone, this merit of a small company is undeniable.

To sum up, it is true that small company brings undeniable advantages, however the opportunities to learn more and the honor a big company could provide obviously carry more weight than the small one.


Nice job. Just a few minor errors.

macross_36UID: 2306285

Advocating... are those people who=those people are advocating...好像没问题啊？仁兄再看看？

ourtransUID: 2241441

:confused: 现在进行时的倒装？？
sorry，我从来没看到过这样的用法。能提供一些例子吗？

macross_36UID: 2306285

我直接抄的模板，呵呵。