COMEON作文小组------jackallen07149月19日作业

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首次参加，很生疏……花了很多时间，参考了许多资料……:L

We can simply divide decisions in to big decisions and small ones.Whether a decision is important or not ,however, is determined by the consequence.Therefore when making decisions , we consider result heavier than other factors . As I am concerned , I prefer to classify the decisions and choose corresponding method.

Trivial and routine decision such as choosing clothes and food material disturbs people's everyday life .A life full of exhausting choice may cause serious health problem -- especially psycho disease.  Having others solve these kinds of matter is a wise choice . And that's exactly why many rich people hire housekeeper to manage their daily life . Similarly , a boss hires assistant to make decision for him , such as arrange daily schedule . Some people insist on deciding everything by themselves which seems energy wasting and less efficiency when it comes to the daily affairs and unimportant matter.You'd better let others to tackle thus you can stay energetic and  concentrate on the really important decisions.

A decision especially an important one will have significant or lasting impact on a person's life . Often such a decision is difficult to make because the consequences are considerable or the decision's circumstances and implications are complex. So it's unbelievable and ridiculous if one having others make such decisions . I can guarantee that you would never merry a man/woman that is chosen by your parents whom you have never met before. And you will definitely not buy a house only  by the judgement of the house agent . You should decide by yourself because ultimately, it is the person who has to live with the decision  take complete responsibility. However,makeing decision by yourself do not equal with completely avoid opinions from others . At the consideration of avoid failure or preclude carelessness , consulting friends or experts for their opinions will help you get better understanding of the situation and guarantee the safety of your choices.

Actually , modern life no longer allow us to make decision only by the judgement of ourselves, since people now have to get along with others everyday . In big companys, staff of a certain department always sit around a table and give their opinions publicly,  then they vote for candidate plans and make decisions together. By this means self choice and others choices are organically combined. It's a excellent performance of today's social system which put cooperate the first place in team work.

Anyway, decision making is a tough job and need us to treat it proper.It is rather dangerous and superficial if you always count on others , or vice versa.There's no definite good way to make decision, specify the problem and judge the importance before you decide is always necessary.

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We can simply divide decisions in to big decisions and small ones.Whether a decision is important or not ,however, is determined by the/its consequence.Therefore when making decisions , we consider result heavier than other factors . As I am concerned , I prefer to classify the decisions and choose corresponding method. 这个开头不太明白，你到底是prefer哪种呢?

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Trivial and routine decision such as choosing clothes and food material disturbs people's everyday life .A life full of exhausting choice may cause serious health problem -- especially psycho disease.  Having others solve these kinds of matter is a wise choice . And that's exactly why many rich people hire housekeeper to manage their daily life . Similarly , a boss hires assistant to make decision for him , such as arrange daily schedule . Some people insist on deciding everything by themselves which seems energy wasting and less efficiency when it comes to the daily affairs and unimportant matter.You'd better let others to tackle thus you can stay energetic and  concentrate on the really important decisions.|留学|签证|TOEFL|GRE%`e_2Zb,{].z-{
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A decision especially an important one will have significant or lasting impact on a person's/ his or her life . Often such a decision is difficult to make because the consequences are considerable or the decision's circumstances and implications are complex. So it's unbelievable and ridiculous if one having others to make such decisions . I can guarantee that you would never merry/marry a man/woman that is chosen by your parents whom you have never met before/- -!旧社会不是很多么。感觉这个表达方法有点问题，你可以说suppose how ridiculous to marry a person one never meet before but just the decision made by parents大概这样的，后面那个例子也是. And you will definitely not buy a house only  by the judgement of the house agent . You should decide by yourself because ultimately, it is the person who has to live with the decision  take complete responsibility. However,makeing decision by yourself do not equal with/to completely avoid opinions from others . At the consideration of avoid failure or preclude carelessness , consulting friends or experts for their opinions will help you get better understanding of the situation and guarantee the safety of your choices.感觉这些可以独立一段讲|留学|签证|TOEFL|GRE?_%Exa,t|-O

Actually , modern life no longer allow us to make decision only by the judgement of ourselves, since people now have to get along with others everyday . In big companys, staff of a certain department always sit around a table and give their opinions publicly,  then they vote for candidate plans and make decisions together. By this means self choice and others choices are organically combined. It's a excellent performance of today's social system which put cooperate the first place in team work.C;L3s!h%N
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Anyway, decision making is a tough job and need us to treat it proper.It is rather dangerous and superficial if you always count on others , or vice versa.There's no definite good way to make decision, specify the problem and judge the importance before you decide is always necessary.


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jackallen0714UID: 2510951

自己回顾了一下……
有些例子是不恰当
中间那段可以再精简

prefer类的我可以两者都不prefer而是发表第三种看法吗？
这篇我的本意就是两种都不prefer