COMEON作文小组9.22号作业－sosjune

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There are times when people are always on the arduous journey in seeking for the answer of such a problem, whether enjoyments, on which people are spending more and more time, have taken over too much time which is used for people to do things that they should do. My answer is no, simple yet candid. And a number of reasons give rise to my angle.
First and foremost, the miracles of technology that many breakthrough discoveries over the decades are now simply taken for granted. The artificial intelligence, solar power system and so forth, successfully take the place of people in the producing line. In other word, we have more spare time to enjoy our life without worrying about whether work will be handled 100 percent success. We are able to share more time in the sunshine beach, or have a long date with our true love, and life our life in a relatively cozy and hilarious way.
  Subsequently, obviously the high paced daily life and illegible social associations, on the other way constantly make us corporeally exhausted and emotionally battered, we are no longer stay vigorous, that is to say we are in the endless marathon of torment and fatigue. We need some self-entertainment to rehabilitate our power and stamina so that we can obtain enough energy to be efficient in doing things that we should do. This can be demonstrated by the undeniable fact that when I faced up to a intricate dilemma without any idea, I would stop and have a rest or just try a cigarette, a cup of coffee or read some newspapers. I think this can not only make me feel placid in the miserable case but also give me the time to ruminate the complex case in a simple and direct way. So enjoyments play an exceedingly essential role in restoring our power which is of great significance for us to face to the things we should do.  
Last but not least, having enjoyment, to some extent can also build up our body and give us a good health. As we all know, health is essential and invaluable to anyone of us. Everything is just artificial illusions, which can only come into being in the daydream, if we do not have a stable, stout and strong body. Fortunately, by doing things we like such as enjoyment provides us a correct, chromatic and concerted approach to release the stress of arduous and troublesome daily life, such as climbing, hiking, travel and so on. No wonder that no one will refuse to have these light sports after tedious working, yet hardly can anyone decline the exciting games which are full of fun and good for health.


[ 本帖最后由 sosjune 于 2008-9-24 13:06 编辑 ]

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There are times when people are always on the arduous journey in seeking for the answer of such a problem, whether enjoyments, on which people are spending more and more time, have taken over too much time which is used for people to do things that they should do. My answer is no, simple yet candid. And a number of reasons give rise to my angle.
F(cZ:I5vqFirst and foremost, the miracles of technology that many breakthrough discoveries over the decades are now simply taken for granted. The artificial intelligence, solar power system and so forth, successfully take the place of people in the producing line. In other word, we have more spare time to enjoy our life without worrying about whether work will be handled 100 percent success. We are able to share more time in the sunshine beach, or have a long date with our true love, and life our life in a relatively cozy and hilarious way.
Subsequently, obviously the high paced daily life and illegible social associations, on the other way constantly make us corporeally exhausted and emotionally battered, we are no longer stay vigorous, that is to say we are in the endless marathon of torment and fatigue. We need some self-entertainment to rehabilitate our power and stamina so that we can obtain enough energy to be efficient in doing things that we should do. This can be demonstrated by the undeniable fact that when I faced up to a intricate dilemma without any idea, I would stop and have a rest or just try a cigarette, a cup of coffee or read some newspapers. I think this can not only make me feel placid in the miserable case but also give me the time to ruminate the complex case in a simple and direct way. So enjoyments play an exceedingly essential role in restoring our power which is of great significance for us to face to the things we should do.  留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA{s/g-|(^;X d
Last but not least, having enjoyment, to some extent can also build up our body and give us a good health. As we all know, health is essential and invaluable to anyone of us. Everything is just artificial illusions, which can only come into being in the daydream, if we do not have a stable, stout and strong body. Fortunately, by doing things we like such as enjoyment provides us a correct, chromatic and concerted approach to release the stress of arduous and troublesome daily life, such as climbing, hiking, travel and so on. No wonder that no one will refuse to have these light sports after tedious working, yet hardly can anyone decline the exciting games which are full of fun and good for health. zm S­^+j­s‑a

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