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macross_36UID: 2306285

Do you agree or disagree: The best way to travel is in a group led by a guide(2006.11.18)

With the fast development of the living standard, more and more people could afford travelling. The question is: whether to travel in a group led by a guide is the best way? Some people prefer travelling alone because they hold the belief that it is much free to manage one's own time and energy. However, in my perspective, people should follow a group with a guide, when considering the convenience it brings and the friends we could made in a group.

The first reason for my propensity to travelling in a group is that group travelling brings plenty of conveniences. On the one hand, the guide of the group is familiar with the place where the group will visit, he could tell the group members about the history, custom and the culture of the very region. As a result, the whole group could not only visit the places but also learn a lot. On the other hand, if met some trouble, one could search for help from other group members as soon as possible. With the efficient help from the team, people are able to travel in an much easier way than being alone.

Another essential reason for my assertion is that we can make friends with other team member. When travelling happily in a team, we may frequently contact with other group member, sometimes we may make friends with those who share the same love for the same interests. Friends play an important role in our life, the more friends we have, the more help and opportunities we may gain. Thus, travelling in a group could be benefitial.  

Admittedly, the advantages of travelling alone cannot be denied and neglected. If travelling alone, the time and cost are completely in our disposal, we can choose the places we are interests in to visit and take a rest whenever we want. However, when travelling in a group, we must follow the order of the guide.   

To sum up, it is true that travelling alone holds several advantages, however, in my opinion, to travel in a group with a guide carries more weight not only because of the conveniences it brings, but also because we can make many new friends with other group members.

yangkeli22UID: 2360405

With the fast development of the living standard, more and more people could afford travelling. The question is: whether to travel in a group led by a guide is the best way? Some people prefer travelling alone because they hold the belief that it is much free to manage one's own time and energy. However, in my perspective, people should follow a group with a guide, when considering the convenience it brings and the friends we could made in a group.
The first reason for my propensity to travelling in a group is that group travelling brings plenty of conveniences. On the one hand, the guide of the group is familiar with the place where the group will visit, he could tell the group members about the history, custom and the culture of the very region. As a result, the whole group could not only visit the places but also learn a lot. On the other hand, if met some trouble, one could search for help from other group members as soon as possible. With the efficient help from the team, people are able to travel in an(a) much easier way than being alone.
Another essential reason for my assertion is that we can make friends with other team member. When travelling happily in a team, we may frequently contact with other group member, sometimes we may make friends with those who share the same love for the same interests. Friends play an important role in our life, the more friends we have, the more help and opportunities we may gain. Thus, travelling in a group could be benefitial.(beneficial)
Admittedly, the advantages of travelling alone cannot be denied and neglected. If travelling alone, the time and cost are completely in our disposal, we can choose the places we are interests in to visit and take a rest whenever we want. However, when travelling in a group, we must follow the order of the guide.   
To sum up, it is true that travelling alone holds several advantages, however, in my opinion, to travel in a group with a guide carries more weight not only because of the conveniences it brings, but also because we can make many new friends with other group members.

LZ的文章已经有自己的一套了，结构挺清晰，没大问题了。有些词句用的挺好的，在此我就学去啦，呵呵！
对LZ的第二个理由个人存在疑问，因为当时自己也考虑到写交朋友的观点，但又觉得主要应当阐述有导游的好处，故没写成自己的理由，不知道这个理由说服力够不够，因为没有导游自己也可以组团出去玩也能交到不少朋友。
也还请楼主多多指点！http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-880274-1-1.html

stephenhauUID: 2407950

非常典型的教科书式的文章，lz不错，挺好！语法错误也少，值得学习

macross_36UID: 2306285

谢谢，28号加油！

yangkeli22UID: 2360405

Thank you so much!:) :handshake
You are the same, wish you success!!!

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