COMEON作文小组------jackallen0714 10月4日作业1

jackallen0714UID: 2510951

10月4日
题目1.事情越来越多，结果什么都干不好，你同意不同意. (2007.3.3,生活与个人成功类)
题目2. agree or disagree 同时做多件事情时，一次做完一个，再做下一个的方法比较好（2007年6月24日）与2007.3.3神似。

In some sense, ancient people lack of everything but leisure time while modern life supply us almost everything but time. Time is eagerly needed because there's so many things to be done in our increasingly hectic time schedule. We have meetings to attend, reports to write, emails to reply, books to read ... Although we exert our utmost to handle various tasks simultaneously, small errors or even total disasters are still inevitable. In my point of view, maybe you are ill equipped with some brilliant methods in accomplish tasks.  

Assignments come together, if they come at all. Examination comes at the same time, if they come at all. People claim no time to prepare and naturally complain the extremely little probability event happens rather too frequently. However, it is more like your early effort fail to perform well enough or lack of a rational schedule that lead to the current chaotic situation.Let us get down to the fundamental and agree there are still people doing well. If you take steps to prepare the assignments at the very beginning or review the courses periodically, such haste would be avoid.

Another cause lead to full schedule may lies in the low efficiency. Just review what you actually done in a simple homework. Chatting with others, eating snacks, mind wandering before calculating... Maybe that's where the rub is, you waste too many time in meaningless activities and thus can't concentrate on solving certain problems.You should utilize time to the full. For instance,you can read some English materials while waiting someone. Remind the important point of a lecture on the bus way back home. There are plenty of small fracture time to be discovered and utilized.Just as the saying goes:Several few becomes a lot.

Task comes one by one will be a ideal situation because people can be more concentrate. However, this exits only in our unrealistic dream. Usually things do not happen the way you want. Thus waiting is a solution that we cannot and should not count on.

[ 本帖最后由 jackallen0714 于 2008-10-5 18:35 编辑 ]

marie8524UID: 2551394

In some sense, ancient people lack of everything but leisure time while modern life supply us almost everything but time. 总觉得这句话while两边的主语应该是类似的，ancient people 应对应现代人。Time is eagerly needed because there's are so many things to be done in our increasingly hectic time schedule. We have meetings to attend, reports to write, emails to reply, books to read ... Although we exert our utmost to handle various tasks simultaneously, small errors or even total disasters are still inevitable. In my point of view, maybe you are ill equipped with some brilliant methods in accomplish tasks.  

qianqianloveUID: 2551515

看完以后感觉有些偏题了
观点其实很不鲜明