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santongUID: 2195564

Movies and televisions have more positive or negative effects on young people’s behaviors. (2007.4.21,技术进步类)


I have to admit that I like watching movies and televisions and I always sit in my sofa to be a TV addict. However, I also have to say that comparing to all positive effects movies and televisions bring to us, like the entertaining episode of movies, the attraction of the superstars, there are more negative effects on our youths.

Firstly, most movies and TV programs distort the reality of the real live although maybe they are arising from reality. Movie makers always add more episodes that wouldn’t happen in the real world. Young people have not enough this kind of ability in discrimination, so that they would believe in what they have seen in the programs. I don't think that all of the New York women need and want to have sex things as frequently as I have seen in the "Sex and the city" even when they have no boyfriend. A friend of mine in New York told me that there were many young girls who were restrained and never indulge themselves.

Secondly, only watch movies and televisions would depress your imagination. I like Jane Eyre very much when I am a little girl, I read the book for three times and every time I read it I always have the new finds and surprise from the same story. But when I have watched the movie of Jane Eyre, I was disappointed to be honest. Jane was not as beautiful as I imagined, and some romantic scenes were not as perfect as I thought.

Lastly and maybe the most importantly, too addict to watching TV and movies is harm to youths' health. Many students in China have put on thick glasses "as soon as possible” because they watch TV for too long time, such as 3 or 4 hours without rest, when they are at home. The thing which always happens is that parents realize that they should limit their children's TV time when their children have been put on glasses.

In all, although movies and televisions entertain us and tell us many interesting stories we have not known, there are more harmful aspects of them. The right way is: play with it, and do not rely on it.

jackallen0714UID: 2510951

I have to admit/Granting that I like watching movies and televisions .And I always sit in my sofa to be a TV addict. However/转折关系？, I also have to say that 感觉去掉更流畅 comparing to all positive effects movies and televisions bring to us, like the entertaining episode of movies, the attraction of the superstars, there are more negative effects on our youths/the drawbacks seems overweigh its benefits.

Firstly, most movies and TV programs distort the reality of the real live/are unrealistic portrayal of life. although maybe they are arising from reality. Movie makers always add more episodes that wouldn’t happen in the real world . Young people have not enough this kind of/lack of  ability in discrimination, so that they would believe in whatever they have seen in the programs. I don't think that all of the New York women need and want to have sex things as frequently as I have seen in the "Sex and the city" even when they have no boyfriend. A friend of mine in New York told me that there were many young girls who were restrained/这个词这么用感觉有些怪 and never indulge themselves.

Secondly,  watch too many movies and televisions would only depress your imagination. I like Jane Eyre very much when I am/was a little girl, I read the book for three times and every time I read it I always have the new finds/understanding and /get another surprise from the same story. But when/after I have watched the movie of Jane Eyre, I was disappointed to be honest. Jane was not as beautiful as I imagined, and some romantic scenes were not as perfect as I thought/far from perfect to my expectation.

Lastly and maybe the most importantly, too addict to watching TV and movies is harm to youths' health. Many students in China have put on/wear 如果我没记错的话应该是这个搭配，当然put on也可以 thick glasses "as soon as possible” because they watch TV for too long time, such as 3 or 4 hours without rest, when they are at home/用些连词重新组织下，稍显零散. The thing which always happens is that parents realize that they should limit their children's TV time when their children have been put on glasses.

In all, although movies and televisions entertain us and tell us many interesting stories we have not known, there are more harmful aspects of them. The right way is: play with it, and do not rely on it.