COMEON作文小组------macross 10月8日作业

macross_36UID: 2306285

It has long been put into qualm in deciding whether it is essential for the young people to have ability to plan and organize in such a complex society. I strongly agree with this issue for the reason that the capacity of planning would not only save our time and energy, but also help us achieve our goals and realize our personal value in the future.

To begin with, the ability of organizing and planning is crucial if we want to achieve academic successes. According to our aims in the accadimic field, we have to make a careful plan in order to improve the possibility to achievements. Take, for example, a student who is interested in architecture and wants to devote his life to this sphere. He must clearly know which subjects and lessons that are closely related to architecture he has to focus on. Also, he should hold the capacity to recognize what kind of books and materials he must read. With such ability, he could study effectively and efficiently.

In addition, a powerful ability in planning would lead a person to his success when he confronts the society. Let's look back into the previous instance about the student interested in architecture. If he would like to own his company in the future, he must have an accurate as well as thorough plan. He has to choose a proper architecture design firm to earn his living, but most importantly, the company should be able to give him the very knowledge he eagers and the opportunities to meet with some significant people that will help him to his success. In a words, the ability of planning and organizing would benefit us when we face the society.

Furthermore, people without such ability might live in an awful way. In such a complex and modern society, there exist so many wonderful entertainments separating our attention. Without a plan to urge us to work and study, we might waste considerable time in listening to CDs, watching movies and playing computer games. Consequently, we will not achieve our goals because we spend the time of chasing the dreams in somewhere else.

To sum up, it goes without saying that people with great ability of planning as well as organizing would be more likely to success.

这个题目好难写...

[ 本帖最后由 macross_36 于 2008-10-9 13:23 编辑 ]

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

结构上比较规整
用词上建议再细琢磨下
例子举得不错
建议：
To sum up, it goes without saying that people with great ability of planning as well as organizing would be more likely to success.中的it goes without saying that people with great ability of planning as well as organizing would be more likely to success.是否可以拿到倒数第二段中比较合适

hyacinthUID: 2184492

the ability to do sth
the capability of doing sth...;)

我记得暑假的一个活动里我用过这个题目 有不少人写过  lz可以借鉴一下

你的文章语句很通顺 反应了良好的英语写作基础 思路也比较清楚 有个别语法错误不过不会太影响总成绩

加油~~

macross_36UID: 2306285

Thanks!
我9.28考过了，在等成绩，怕考不好所以继续练着，呵呵。