COMEON作文小组------jackallen0714 10月11日作业

jackallen0714UID: 2510951

10月11日
新能源（sun, wind, water）will be soon replace 旧能源fossil fuels (oil, gas)， agree or disagree? 2006 年

As the earth becoming more and more crowded, energy resources are consuming at a speed beyond our expectation. Since the pollution had arouse people's attention and fossil fuels are unsustainable resources, I believe people will take steps to replace them with advanced clean ones.

Gas, oil and coal have engaged in the work on our behalf for centuries. Essential and useful such energy might be, they indeed lead to great problems of the nature. Such as air pollution, species extinction, acid rains... They greatly distort the relationship between human race and the nature. After decades of ignoring the warning of the nature, we finally suffered its revenge. Now we have to paid even more money to fix the mistake than what we get from the nature --- if they can be measured by money. People already realized the urgency of stopping pollution and suggest government find long term solutions, that is replace them with clean ones.

Scientist predict that under current consuming rate, there is only a few decades before we run out of energy resources. Since we virtually can't create fossil fuels in the factory, the ultimate solution and solitary choice is to find substitute. Sun, wind ,water and other similar substance which could provide us clean energy obviously become our first choice. They are reproducible energy resources remain unexplored which deserve better utilization. Their potential have brought to the notice of many scientist and was regarded a promising future. Moreover, these energy hardly produce pollution and never do the least harm to animals and human being.

Admittedly , new things need time and effort to get acceptance. Now scientists had invented some relevant technologies to cooperate with the new energy. Most of them are easily adapted by factory or company which obviously sweep off the block in front of wide scale transformation. The irreversible trend of the energy revolution determined that fossil fuels will be soon replace by the new type.

[ 本帖最后由 jackallen0714 于 2008-10-12 13:07 编辑 ]

hans0612UID: 2462190

COMEON作文小组------jackallen0714 10月11日作业

10月11日
新能源（sun, wind, water）will be soon replace 旧能源fossil fuels (oil, gas)， agree or disagree?

As the earth becoming more and more crowded, energy resources are consuming at a speed beyond our expectation. Since the pollution had arouse people's attention and fossil fuels are unsustainable resources, I believe people will take steps to replace them with advanced clean ones.

Gas, oil and coal have engaged in the work on our behalf for centuries. Essential and useful such energy might be, they indeed lead to great problems of the nature. Such as air pollution, species extinction, acid rains...（可以这么写吗，汗一个）They greatly distort the relationship between human race（mankind） and the nature. After decades of ignoring the warning of the nature, we finally suffered its revenge. Now we have to paid even more money to fix the mistake than what we get from the nature --- if they（删掉） can be measured by money. People already realized（that） the urgency of stopping pollution and suggest government find long term solutions, that is replace（such aas replacing） them with clean ones.

Scientist predict that under current consuming rate（状语放后面）, there is only a few decades before we run out of energy resources. Since we virtually can't create（make） fossil fuels in the factory, the ultimate solution and solitary choice is to find substitute. Sun, wind ,water and other similar substance which could provide us clean energy obviously become our first choice. They are reproducible energy resources remain unexplored which deserve better utilization. Their potential have brought to the notice of many scientist and was regarded a promising future. Moreover, these energy hardly produce pollution and never do the least harm to animals and human being.

Admittedly , new things need time and effort to get acceptance. Now scientists had invented some relevant technologies to cooperate with the new energy. Most of them are easily adapted by factory or company which obviously sweep off the block in front of wide scale transformation. The irreversible trend of the energy revolution determined that fossil fuels will be soon replace（replaced） by the new type（types）.

蛮工整的了，找高人再看看吧，我觉得可能内容还可以丰富一点

hans0612UID: 2462190

COMEON作文小组------jackallen0714 10月11日作业

10月11日
新能源（sun, wind, water）will be soon replace 旧能源fossil fuels (oil, gas)， agree or disagree?

As the earth becoming more and more crowded, energy resources are consuming at a speed beyond our expectation. Since the pollution had arouse people's attention and fossil fuels are unsustainable resources, I believe people will take steps to replace them with advanced clean ones.

Gas, oil and coal have engaged in the work on our behalf for centuries. Essential and useful such energy might be, they indeed lead to great problems of the nature. Such as air pollution, species extinction, acid rains...（可以这么写吗，汗一个）They greatly distort the relationship between human race（mankind） and the nature. After decades of ignoring the warning of the nature, we finally suffered its revenge. Now we have to paid even more money to fix the mistake than what we get from the nature --- if they（删掉） can be measured by money. People already realized（that） the urgency of stopping pollution and suggest government find long term solutions, that is replace（such aas replacing） them with clean ones.

Scientist predict that under current consuming rate（状语放后面）, there is only a few decades before we run out of energy resources. Since we virtually can't create（make） fossil fuels in the factory, the ultimate solution and solitary choice is to find substitute. Sun, wind ,water and other similar substance which could provide us clean energy obviously become our first choice. They are reproducible energy resources remain unexplored which deserve better utilization. Their potential have brought to the notice of many scientist and was regarded a promising future. Moreover, these energy hardly produce pollution and never do the least harm to animals and human being.

Admittedly , new things need time and effort to get acceptance. Now scientists had invented some relevant technologies to cooperate with the new energy. Most of them are easily adapted by factory or company which obviously sweep off the block in front of wide scale transformation. The irreversible trend of the energy revolution determined that fossil fuels will be soon replace（replaced） by the new type（types）.

蛮工整的了，找高人再看看吧，我觉得可能内容还可以丰富一点

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