COMEON作文小组------jackallen0714 10月18日作业

jackallen0714UID: 2510951

10月18日
68)Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.
高等教育是否应该给所有的学生？ 还是给优秀的学生？(185,学习和教育)

怎么感觉这个题目前阵子做过了？

Entering university may be the utmost dream of many people. If only the door of the high level education could be opened to everyone, we may imagine. However, in realistic world, only the elites are supposed to be accepted by the university. And I believe there are rational reasons why university only embrace certain students.

Not each and every individual suit the university education pattern. Take artist for example. Their work is to create fantastic art which usually need burst of inspiration. When it comes, they may work in front of the canvas for hours or even days. Apparently, school timetable will greatly disturb their creative working process. They need a more flexiable time schedule which cannot be provided by normal university. Moreover ,the grading system of the university won't work in their particular studying region. In conclusion, it means studing in an inappropriate environment will lead to an ending far from initial expectation.

Divergent learning ability frequently result in low efficiency in teaching. It sounds pretty ridiculous that letting people sit together to learn the same courses regardless of their backgound. It is similar to allow a student in primary school to learn high school courses, or to force a farmer to learn Mathematics only because there is no school entering restrictions. All in all, education can only continue under same learning level and similar background.

Moreover, limited education resource can't afford excessive students. Obviously, students entering the university will soar to a considerable number if there is no restriction. School can't provide enough classroom for students to study. Other problems including in short of teachers and dormitories, which will also bring great trouble in the management of the school. In short, resources should be spend appropriately to ensure a qualified education.

Although it is sensible that education be shared by every individual of the society. It does not mean accept students without any consideration involved. In fact, selection take place almost everyday and everywhere no matter how uncomfortable it seems.

aaimmortalUID: 2297730

Entering university may be the utmost dream of many people. If only the door of the high level education could be opened to everyone, we may imagine（imagine what？难懂）. However, in realistic world, only the elites are supposed to be accepted by the university. And I believe there are rational reasons why university only embrace certain students.

Not each and every individual suits the university education pattern. Take artists for example. Their work is to create fantastic art which usually need burst of inspiration. When it comes, they may work in front of the canvas for hours or even days. Apparently, school timetable will greatly disturb their creative working process. They need a more flexiable time schedule which cannot be provided by normal university（感觉这个例子有问题，像是再谈艺术家的工作，而不是说他们的受教育与否，不管怎么说，大多数艺术家都需要经过colloge之类的教育才能具备基础知识吧）. Moreover ,the grading system of the university won't work in their particular studying region. In conclusion, it means studing in an inappropriate environment will lead to an ending far from initial expectation.

Divergent learning abilitiesy frequently result in low efficiency in teaching. It sounds pretty ridiculous that letting people sit together to learn the same courses regardless of their backgound. It is similar to allow a student in primary school to learn high school courses, or to force a farmer to learn Mathematics only because there is no school entering restrictions. All in all, education can only continue under same learning level and similar background.

Moreover, limited education resource can't afford excessive students. Obviously, students entering the university will soar to a considerable number if there is no restriction. School can't provide enough classrooms for students to study. Other problems including in short of teachers and dormitories, which will also bring great trouble in the management of the school. In short, resources should be spend appropriately to ensure a qualified education.6l*YE-_$ST1oL‑mZ

Although it is sensible that education should be shared by every individual of the society. It does not mean accept students（could be accepted） without any consideration involved. In fact, selection takes place almost everyday and everywhere no matter how uncomfortable it seems（最后一句话写得很好哦）.

就是第一段写的有点偏，其他挺好