issue51[ff小组]第一次作业——by槲寄生（v.2）

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51. "Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student."

提纲：

1.       满足每个个体的教育是一个目标，但是无法实现。

2.       由于教育资源的匮乏，满足每个个体的需要代价太大。

3.       学生们往往太年轻而无法认识到自已真正需要的是什么，学习不喜欢的课程是教育的一部分。

4.       过于uniform的教育会是学生变得平庸，应有条件的支持学生发展自己的兴趣。

5. 总结。



Specifically designed education is a goal educators and teachers pursuing, but people who have more than a passing thought will realize that education is hardly to meet individual needs and interests of each students.

First of all, it is impossible to specifically designed education program could lead financial burden. Since education become a powerful and economic force because a great number of people enrolled in school. Although the investment from government and charity is yearly increased, it is far more behind demand of specialized design. Because of different background and experience, students' interests and needs are different from one to another, if we advocate specialized education program, it is likely that a students at least needs 4-5 professional teachers to serve. Obviously this is a big squandering to precious social resource especially to education resource. Plus, decades before, students only need pens, papers, books and some simple devices to support, but contemporary, with the development of the society and technologies students’ needs high-tech and complex devices to fulfill their experiments. Those equipments apparently more expensive than before so that government and school can not satisfy every single student.

Furthermore, students often to young to realize what they really need. Some what they consider significantly may become worthless when they grow up, therefore they needs some professional educators design a systemic and completely learning plan, which in all likelihood could not meet very student’s need and satisfy his or her interests. Because the study is a dull and boring process which is especially suitable to general, fundamental courses, students can not give up merely because of this. The fact is, study the disciplines which we do not like is an integration of education, at least it can develop students’ patient and willpower, which are very crucial for students entire life. Moreover, if students only learn which they like and needs, they will abandon a myriad of knowledge which certainly will undermine their academic basis, further undermine their further study. Even worse, if what the student abandons is the moral part, he or she will become lacking personality. Therefore, in order every student have fully personality as well as stably academic fundament, we can not let students choose what to learn casually.

Nevertheless, excessive uniform education makes students stay in mediocre level, they are lake of imagination and creative, they reconcile to mediocrity. They never have sense to become distinguished. Only people who have unique skills or abilities could obtain achievement in such fierce competitive society like today. Therefore to this level we should meet students according to their needs and interests. As we all know that interests is the best teacher, when students finished mandatory course, teachers and parents should support and help them to develop their interests, improve their talent. Maybe the tiny interests could become an occupation; maybe the interests will facilitate a scientist, an artist or a writer.

To sum up, specifically designed education is not realized for limited social recourse and will bring about obstacle in further study. Whereas without specifically designed education will ignore students potential talent, which will leave them in negative position in the competition. Thus we should to maximum meet students’ needs and interests under the restrict circumstance, at the same time to guarantee students acquire general fundamental knowledge.  

（547 words）
issue处女作，很久没写过英语作文了，写的很痛苦，也很没边
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多谢

[ 本帖最后由 槲寄生 于 2008-11-3 23:51 编辑 ]

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Specifically designed education is a goal educators and teachers pursuing, but people who have more than a passing thought will realize that education is hardly to meet individual needs and interests of each students.（开头简洁，但是只列了下面论述中的一条）
First of all, it is impossible to specifically designed education program could lead financial burden. （这句话不太理解是不是下面的意思it is possible that specifically designed education program would lead to financial burden.）Since education become a powerful and economic force because a great number of people enrolled in school.（since 和because其中一个不对吧，可以把because改为，）Although the investment from government and charity is yearly increased, it is far more behind demand of specialized design. Because of different background and experience, students' interests and needs are different from one to another,(.) if we advocate specialized education program, it is likely that a students(单数) at least needs 4-5 professional teachers to serve. Obviously this is a big squandering to precious social resource especially to education resource. Plus, decades before, students only need pens, papers, books and some simple devices to support, but contemporary, with the development of the society and technologies students’ needs high-tech and complex devices to fulfill their experiments. Those equipments 补上became apparently more expensive than before so that government and school can not satisfy every single student.(论证挺清楚，出现一些小错误)
Furthermore, students often too young to realize what they really need. Some what they consider significantly may become worthless when they grow up, therefore they needs some professional educators design a systemic and completely learning plan, which in all likelihood could not meet every student’s need and satisfy his or her interests. Because the study is a dull and boring process which is especially suitable to general, fundamental courses, students can not give up merely because of this. (没看懂)The fact is, study the disciplines which we do not like is an integration of education, at least it can develop students’ patient and willpower, which are very crucial for students entire life. Moreover, if students only learn which（what） they like and needs, they will abandon a myriad of knowledge which certainly will undermine their academic basis, further undermine their further study. Even worse, if what the student abandons is the moral part, he or she will become lacking personality. Therefore, in order every student have fully personality as well as stably academic fundament, we can not let students choose what to learn casually.

Nevertheless, excessive uniform education makes students stay in mediocre level, they are lack of imagination and creative, they reconcile to mediocrity. They never have sense to become distinguished. Only people who have unique skills or abilities could obtain achievement in such fierce competitive society like today. Therefore to this level we should meet students according to their needs and interests. As we all know that interests is the best teacher, when students finished mandatory course, teachers and parents should support and help them to develop their interests, improve their talent. Maybe the tiny interests could become an occupation; maybe the interests will facilitate a scientist, an artist or a writer.(这段写的不错)

To sum up, specifically designed education is not realized for（可否改为fails to consider） limited social recourse and will（thus） bring about obstacle in further study. Whereas without specifically designed education will ignore students potential talent, which will leave them in negative position in the competition. Thus we should (to删掉) maximum meet students’ needs and interests under the restrict circumstance, at the same time to guarantee students acquire general fundamental knowledge.  
总体上思路清晰，一些小错误需要注意。我自己写的论证不足，需要向你学习。

槲寄生UID: 2429308

Specifically designed education is a goal educators and teachers pursuing, but people who have more than a passing thought will realize that education is hardly（是否可以换个高级词汇？） to meet individual needs and interests of each students.（开头简洁，但是只列了下面论述中的一条）
(果然是万事开头难，想了半天，改了又改，还是都撤销了)

First of all,（这句话不太理解是不是下面的意思it is possible that specifically designed education program would lead to financial burden. 就用这句了）Since education become a powerful and economic force ，a great number of people enrolled in school.（since 和because其中一个不对吧，可以把because改为，）Although the investment from government and charity is yearly increased, it is far more behind demand of specialized design. Because of different background and experience, students' interests and needs are different from one to another. if we advocate specialized education program, it is likely that a student(单数) at least needs 4-5 professional teachers to serve（换个啥好呢？）. Obviously this is a big squandering to precious social resource especially to education resource. Plus, decades before, students only need pens, papers, books and some simple devices to support them to delve in academic activity, however, contemporary, with the development of the society and technologies students’ needs high-tech and complex devices to fulfill their experiments. Those equipments became apparently more expensive than before so that government and school can not satisfy every single student.
(论证挺清楚，出现一些小错误)

Furthermore, students often too young to be aware of what is they really need. Some what they consider significantly may become worthless when they grow up, therefore they needs some professional educators design a systemic and completely learning plan, which in all likelihood could not meet every student’s need and satisfy his or her interests. Because the study is a dull and boring process, especially to general, fundamental courses. students can not give up those courses which they dislike merely because of preference or antipathy . (没看懂.不知道改得通不通？)The fact is, study the disciplines which we have no aptitude is an integration of education; at least it can develop students’ patient and willpower, which are very crucial for students’ entire life. Moreover, if students only learn which（what） they like and needs, they will abandon a myriad of knowledge which certainly will undermine their academic basis, further undermine their further study. Even worse, if what the student abandons is the moral part, he or she will become lacking personality. Therefore, in order every student have fully personality as well as stably academic fundament, we can not let students choose what to learn casually.

Nevertheless, excessive uniform education makes students stay in mediocre level, they are lack of imagination and creative, they reconcile to mediocrity. They never have sense to become distinguished. Only people who have unique skills or abilities could obtain achievement in such fierce competitive society like today. Therefore, to this level, we should meet students according to their needs and interests. As we all know that interests is the best teacher, when students finished mandatory course, teachers and parents should encourage and support them to develop their interests, improve their talent. Maybe the tiny interests could become an occupation; maybe the interests will facilitate a scientist, an artist or a writer.(这段写的不错)

感觉这段转得太急了，缺个过度，呵呵~~但不知道改怎么加

To sum up, specifically designed education is fails to consider limited social recourse and thus bring about obstacle in further study. Whereas without specifically designed education will ignore students potential talent, which will leave them in negative position in the competition. Thus we should maximum meet students’ needs and interests under the restrict circumstance, at the same time to guarantee students acquire general fundamental knowledge.

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