COMEON作文小组——Mer.11月1日作业

Mer.UID: 2532485

In this bustling world filled with various activities, it is common for a human being to take some time for relaxation. Relaxation helps us to alleviate the tiredness and rejevernate our spirits. One way of relaxation is watching movies. Ubiquitous movie theatres in each city can witness the fact that watching movies has now become one of the most popular forms of entertainment. However, how do people make choices on the movies, entertainment movies or serious ones? As far as I am concerned, i vote for the former one.

First of all, movies with amusement can effectively quell out our heavy pressure of work or studies.Most people visit cinema halls for relaxation and natrually they tend to choose a light subject. Considering a person returning home from work the entire day, he must be exhausted and may start feeling that he leads a hectic life. At this situation, if he has the access to a movie repleted with lively pranks and jokes, he will be revitalized immediately just like a battery which is being recharged. This is what everyone wants, especially when they are fatiue and dejected.

Moreover, a message or a subject, when it goes hand in hand with amusement, it is well received invariably by people.Sometimes a movie expressing a profound idea in an entertaining way may be more acceptable than in a serious way. When children watch a movie, they are prone to imitate the behaviour of their favourate character. Entertainment movies can be made to convey a good moral and thus incucate a deep emotion in children in a right way. On the contary, when a serious movie is played to children, they are left confused and soporific. The noble moral borne by the characters in the movie is ignored.

To sum up, I hold the contention that entertainment movies are preferable to see since they reinvigorate people and lead an easy way for people to contemplate.

gjwUID: 2512308

In this bustling world filled with various activities, it is common for a human being to take some time for relaxation. Relaxation helps us to alleviate the tiredness and rejevernate our spirits. One way of relaxation is watching movies. Ubiquitous movie theatres in each city can witness the fact that watching movies has now become one of the most popular forms of entertainment. However, how do people make choices on the movies（这个修辞疑问可以改一下，用how可能更侧重选的方式和依据 不如用下面这个比较自然：which kind of movie are people willing choose）, entertainment movies or serious ones? As far as I am concerned, i vote for the former one.寄托家
First of all, movies with amusement can effectively quell out(out可以去掉) our heavy pressure(quell our tese emotion) of work or studies.Most people visit cinema halls for relaxation and natrually they tend to choose a light subject. Considering a person returning home from work the entire day(entire day's work), he must be exhausted and may start feeling that he leads a hectic life. At(In) this situation, if he has the access to a movie repleted（改replete） with lively pranks and jokes, he will be revitalized immediately just like a battery which is being recharged. This is what everyone wants, especially when they are fatiue（fatigue是名词，这里可以改depressed 压头韵） and dejected..Oj'y F dY J5v

Moreover, a message or a subject, when it goes(it goes变成going好了 避免主语重复) hand in hand with amusement, it is well received invariably by people.Sometimes a movie expressing a profound idea in an entertaining way may be more acceptable than in a serious way. When children watch a movie, they are prone to imitate the behaviour of their favourate character. Entertainment movies can be made to convey a good moral and thus incucate（确认一下拼写） a deep emotion in children in a right way. On the contary, when a serious movie is played to children, they are left confused and soporific. The noble moral borne by the characters in the movie is ignored.

[ 本帖最后由 gjw 于 2008-11-2 14:06 编辑 ]

gjwUID: 2512308

先学习～
lz的quantity of vocabulary 确实不同凡响
我给改的时候参考的字典是 牛6
如果有什么改错了 希望给我指出来；
还有觉得这个文章应该写一边倒和中立都没问题的
标准写作是题是agree of disagree ，采用 partly or totally agree 应该都没问题的!
最后问一下lz的年纪 还有是不是已经考过G了

Mer.UID: 2532485

批改的很满意的!