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[i习作temp] issue130 [FF小组]第二次作业---by 叫我浅浅 蜀道难,难于上青天 [复制链接]

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发表于 2008-11-5 22:29:23 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
TOPIC: ISSUE130 - "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."

WORDS: 265          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2008-11-5
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1.        Better society的定义是什么?如果是指更富裕的society的话,孩子的贡献大大少于成人。
2.        Socialization只是学习的一个方面,并且socialization如果是指和别人更高效的交流的话,有些工作有些人并不需要这样的socialization也一样为better society做了很大的贡献。
3.        Socialization是把双刃剑,家庭、学校、社会要做的就是引导孩子们正确的适应社会,融入社会,为这个better society而奋斗。

Children, as is known to us all, have been universally acknowledged as extremely important to the future of a country. However, although they are the promise of a better society, they are too inexperienced to shoulder the destiny of society.

In my opinion, if a better society means rich in material wealth, children do make little efforts on it. On the one hand, nowadays, most work are done by adults; therefore, they hold nearly all the money of the whole society. Looking around, only a few children are able to start their business to earn some money at an early age. Consequently, compared with adults, children are not capable of bringing about a better society with abundant money to enrich the material wealth. On the other hand, adults contribute nearly their entire energy to support the families, which provides children perfect environment to get self-development.

A child may learn numerous aspects from family, schools and our society, in which socialization is only one of them. On condition that socialization means a person can deal with others lofty, a socialized child definitely can handle certain work which require efficient communication much easier than others. But what about a work requires less cooperation with people and more dedication to the data, experiment etc., such as being a inventor, a researcher, or a scientist? Thomas Edison was considered an idiot by his teacher and threw out of the school merely after three months entering in it. Why? Maybe his teacher thought he was not one of those lively, smart, active, response quickly type of children, who played and enjoyed themselves with others happily. Edison minded only his own businesses, shy and quiet. Not sociable at all. However, since he invented more than 3000 articles, including the most important light bulb, which illuminating the way that human beings striding to the modern civilization, I assert most of Edison’s classmates, although three-month’s ones, anyway, have made much less contributions to the society, to our today’s better society.

Children’s socialization is a double-edged sword, which leads them to different destination. Some make the best of their sociable character to establish their own business, some others misuse these advantages to accept bribes etc.. In order to avoid children going into the wrong way, our government should take the responsibility to lead them; our schools should try their best to educate them; our families should spare no efforts to induct them. Commonweal speeches from society can ignite their hopes of striving for a better life; face-to-face communications with their teachers may detangle their hidden confusions about the future; heart-to-heart conversations with their parents may be the bud of a life-time appreciation and gratitude towards affection, friendship and love. Every child is born innocence. What we should do is to guide, instruct, lead them to the right path of being sociable.

All in all, children, as the future mainstay of the country, play an important role in the prosperous and progress of the community. Nevertheless, they are not the ultimate factor of the destiny of the society. We should try to build a comfortable environment for them to experience, to learn, to grow, and finally to shoulder the responsibility to work for a better future of the world.


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