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There are many stages in our lives,and in every one you could get reliable friends.When you come in to a dilemma in the way of your life,you could come to them and get help.(However,the issue that whose suggestion is more valuable to you,the ones which comes from the older friends or those of the friends of our own age is a meaningful and contentious since different people hold the different viewson it not only because of their respective backgrounds but also due to their alien understanding.)这句有点冗长,不如拆开一下。句子过长也不是一件好事。The complex issue promots me to consider it on a case-by-case basis.The reasons for my supportion opinion are presented as follows.寄托家园7c
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In one special situation, the advices from your same-age friends are premier ones to you since they may have a similar question like yours,and then you could listen to their point of view which you never think about.For instance, when you get confused in your study,you could turn to you classmates for help because you have the same class with divergent understanding.Their ideas may inspire the solution to your problem or you could disscuss it together.When you take their suggetions,there may be several benefits to you.One of them is that it could not only help you deal with the dilemma,but also enhance your friendship.留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA4p;k~L!yj
However,when you face a situation you have never meet in your daily life,I posit that it is sagacious to follow the advice of your older friends.The reasons for my propensity not only include that the friends who are older than you have much more experienct than you,but also contain that if you could get some suggestion from them you could make less mistake.When I entered the college in 2006,I am so confused about my future in the university.Fortuantly,a sophoemore gave me so many advices which make me more optimistic to my life.
In a nutshell,I think which side should you follow must be considered on the special circumustance.+d,vqq-[y-s3z_7\+_
楼主是不是已经考过g 了?
呵呵,总体都不错啊,结构思路什么的都没太大问题。小错误考试的时候注意下就好了。向你学习!!
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