【Dark-Tournament】Emma第三次作文作业- welcome ur comments.. tks

emmazhao777UID: 2111862

Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking) in class. Other students prefer classes where the students do some of the talking. Which type of class do you prefer? Give specific reasons and details to support your choice.

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Different teachers have different ways of teaching, some of them like to do all the talking , while some of them prefer to let students do some of the talking. I prefered

the latter way of teaching becuase in this way, teachers and students will have better interaction, which is benefit for both of them.

First, by having students to speak out their opinions in the class, teachers are actually provide a chance that enables student to take part in the class actively instead of

simply listen to the teacher passively. Speaking in the class on certain point regarding the lecture will create a certain connection between the talking students and the

class, students speakers are become one part of lecture, and in most cases, people are hard to ignore things that connected to them. So, having students do some of

the talking in class will usually catches more concentration of them and hence enhance teaching effects.

Besides, speaking in fronts of the whole class will normally create certain pressure on the speaker, since every one want to show their best in front of the public, so

having student to speak in the class may act like some kind of spur to push people try their best to present their best aspects. Under such circumstances, stuents in

talking-classes are natrually being better motivated and may performed better than pure lecture classes.

Moreover, teachers who willing to listen to students' opinions in their class are more likely to have better communications with students, because through the interactions,

they could get to know thoughts, opinions, feedback from their students directly from face to face, and they may give better instructions or comments on issues or problems

that concerned by students, which is of cource a much effective way to clear doubts and impart wisdom compared to simply lecturing.

To sum up, it will be much motivating and effective to create an open astomphere in class, that is to allow students talk about their opinions, becuase education is far

more than simply pass wisdom from textbook, better understanding students, having them take more initiatives in learning may much fundamental in terms of teaching.
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(Looking forward... ur comments, bloody and strong are especially welcom......tks:) ..)

mpromanusUID: 2565872

Different teachers have different ways of teaching: some of them like to do all the talking, while some of them prefer to let students do some of the talking. I prefered the latter way of teaching because in this way, teachers and students will have better interaction, which is beneficial for both all of them.

First, by having students to speak out their opinions in the class,teachers are actually providing a chance that enables students to take part in the class actively instead of to simply listen to the teachers passively (分句的使用造成单复数混乱，其实直接说 having students speak out in class enables students to...就可以了，最好的逻辑都是简单，直接，只说要点). Speaking in the class on certain points regarding the lecture will create a certain connection between the talking speakers students and the class (You said that the speaking was 'regarding the lecture', so by 'the class', do you mean 'the rest of the students in the same class' or 'the academic contents of the class'?), students speakers are become one part of lecture, and in most cases, people are hard to ignore (you're using the word 'hard' in the wrong context. It should be 'It's hard for people to ignore...'. Again, this is an example that simple words tend to be more difficult to use correctly than complex words) things that are connected (不明白这里的逻辑, 到底是什么跟什么connect?) to them. So,having students do some of the talking in class will usually catches  more concentration of them (I'm sorry to say but I actually laughed out loud when I read this..because what you wrote here literally translates to '以更高的密度捉到他们'. I guess you meant to write 'motivates them to stay more concentrated') and hence enhance teaching effects.

Besides,speaking in fronts of the whole class will normally create certain pressure on the speaker, since everyone wants to show their  his best in front of the public, so (since 和 so, because 和 so, 都是不能一起在同一个句子里前后出现的. 这里最好起新句子) having students to speak in the class may act like some kind of spur to push people to try their best to present with their best aspects. Under such circumstances, students in talking-classes (...'students who talk in classes') are naturally being better motivated and may performed better than in pure lecture classes.

Moreover, teachers who are willing to listen to students' opinions in their classes are more likely to have better communications with students, because through the interactions, they could get to know the thoughts, opinions, feedbacks from their students directly from face to face (重复directly，两个用一个就够了), and they may give better instructions or comments on issues or problems that concerned by students are concerned with, which (It's totally unclear what this 'which' is pointing at. You might as well start a new sentence here with 'This') is of course a much more effective way to clear doubts and impart wisdom to students compared to simple lecturing.

To sum up, it will be much more motivating and effective to create an open atmosphere (if you can't spell a word, don't. Use one you can spell) in class, that is, to allow students to talk about their opinions, becuase education is far more than simply passing wisdom from textbook to students. Better Understanding students better and, having them take more initiatives in learning may be much more fundamental in terms of teaching.

总结:

1. 拼字和基础的语法请注意，尤其是你所有需要用more的比较级都没有more..

2. 长句不严谨。建议一个长句不要写超过三个分句。如果主语换了就应该起新句子了，不要执著于写长句，写出很多错误的长句不如写正确的短句。

emmazhao777UID: 2111862

tks alot .......