COMEON作文小组------jackallen0714 11月16日作业1

jackallen0714UID: 2510951

The way I see it, the progress can lead to improvement in many aspects, as mistakes may be rectified, or merits be further developed. However, it is not necessarily true that it is always good to achieve progress in every field, especially when it comes to the area we do not fully understand.l%?L5z(d3e

The development of science and technology has always accompanied the progress of society.The achievement of utilizing electricity in industry is manifest, today the efficiency of production had been significantly improved. However, the improvement in this realm can not overcome the mistakes we have made to the nature. For example, people around the world spare no effort to build giant dams since dams are indispensable for generating electricity. However, such dams become the obstacle for many creatures to move through one area to another. Therefore, the food chain is disrupted and many animals become endangered. The nature can not easily get repaired or even worse, unable to achieve balance again.

Sometimes the effort we made is nearly blindness and aimless. Take the seeming progress we have achieved in medical science for example, today the life expectancy of average people has been prolonged. Many people contribute it to the progress in the invention of new drugs. I must point out that they only see the light face of the issue. Doctors now virtually have to use 3 or 5 times the dose of drugs to kill the virus in patients' blood. As the anti-drugs ability of virus continues to improve, larger dose of drugs must be injected into patients' body. This vicious cycle seems haven't be braked by increasing achievement in medical science realm.

Therefore, the need of supervision over the progress becomes urgent and obvious. Because ignoring the damage or the potential damage brought by the progress will exert harmful influence to the nature and our own. The success we made in one aspect can not compensate that we lose in other more important directions.

noramfaUID: 2571416

....有点不知道怎么改. 楼主的语句写的有些不通顺,个人认为.用这个方法论证很难展开论点,建议楼主看下戴云笔记

jackallen0714UID: 2510951

戴云笔记？哪有这个东西？

noramfaUID: 2571416

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论坛里也应该有的　就是帖子多可能满难找