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Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.|留学


When it comes to the issue about whether teacher should assign homework to students every day, some people might assert that homework as a primary method of helping students to master knowledge and skills comes being dispensable. However, I prefer to the assertion that assigning homework is necessary to every student who studies in school or university for the following reasons.

Firstly, assigning homework plays overwhelmingly significant role in keeping the high quality of educational levels in school and university. Since homework as a mechanism to serve students to master different kinds of knowledge they studied in classroom is still important for every school or university on present educational system, teacher should positively observe this normal regulation to assign homework, by which students also clearly ascertain their weakness in different courses for the base of further development and progress. For example, there are many types of homework in my university, which is not confined to the traditional pattern of homework. If the teacher wants to know the levels of knowledge and experience apprehended by student, he can devise a subject or simple test and require the students to participate this practical activity to measure their capability in one subject.

Although some people might hold that every student should have their own direction and opinion-- if imposing large amount of compulsory “works” on them, the stereotyped standard and pattern will produce a negative influence on their development and cannot broaden horizon of students for any subject they interest, I think assigning proper amount of homework will definitely not become a negative impact, but will play a paramount role in adjusting syllabus for teachers, since losing interest only will occur in a exceptional situation-- assigning excessive amount of homework. From what have been discussed, teacher should assign homework every day in regular way, but should not assign it in large amount frequently.


Homework is the one of most methods for teacher to supervise their quality of teaching and, more important, to help students themselves to guide their study or adjust their schedule. However, according to the old aphorism (and I paraphrase :) everything is a double-sword. Frequently large amount of homework will absolutely trigger the “negative switch” and hence turn the teaching way to wrong side; in such case, any teaching method is merely the effect of indolence.



写作水平严重退步!!!   这两周一定要多写两篇,找回自己考GRE-AW时候的感觉!!!~~~
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貌似,长难句又一大堆的样子~~~   怎么就这个不退步呢~~~  好奇怪。。。
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Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.| ` Ng/}G0HgBX0^t1|k$[When it comes to the issue about whether teacher should assign homework to students every day, some people might assert that homework as a primary method of helping students to master knowledge and skills comes being dispensable. However, I prefer to the assertion that assigning homework is necessary to every student who studies in school or university for the following reasons.寄托家园'S
Firstly, assigning homework plays overwhelmingly(以后我也学着用) significant role in keeping the high quality of educational levels in school and university. Since homework as a mechanism to serve students to master different kinds of knowledge they studied in classroom is still important for every school or university on present educational system, teacher should positively observe this normal regulation to assign homework, by which students also clearly ascertain their weakness(从这我就想断) in different courses for the base of further development and progress. (这句快把我憋死了)For example, there are many types of homework in my university, which is not confined to the traditional pattern of homework. If the teacher wants to know the levels of knowledge and experience apprehended by student, he can devise a subject or simple test and require the students to participate this practical activity to measure their capability in one subject.(test 貌似不是任何一种homework吧~)

Although some people might hold that every student should have their own direction and opinion-- if imposing large amount of compulsory “works” on them, the stereotyped standard and pattern will produce a negative influence on their development and cannot broaden horizon of students for any subject they interest,
(这里变句号吧,虽然是插入语里面) I think assigning proper amount of homework will definitely not become a negative impact, but will play a paramount role in adjusting syllabus for teachers, since losing interest only will occur in a exceptional situation--(我晕~一段话半段多插入语!!) assigning excessive amount of homework. From what have been discussed, teacher should assign homework every day in regular way, but should not assign it in large amount frequently.(h3`ku&Rabbs.gter.net        O!Uq1q\Homework is the one of most methods for teacher to supervise their quality of teaching and, more important, to help students themselves to guide their study or adjust their schedule.(这句我可以学~~但是不要俩however连用吧) However, according to the old aphorism (and I paraphrase everything is a double-sword. Frequently large amount of homework will absolutely trigger the “negative switch” and hence turn the teaching way to wrong side; in such case, any teaching method is merely the effect of indolence
总结~说实话~基本就当范文读的~~但是学起来好像不很好变为自己的~~还是谢谢范文了~~

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When it comes to the issue about whether teacher should assign homework to students every day, some people might assert that homework as a primary method of helping students to master knowledge and skills comes being (is becoming)dispensable. However, I prefer to the assertion that assigning homework is necessary to every student who studies in school or university for the following reasons.

Firstly, assigning homework plays overwhelmingly significant role in keeping the high quality of educational levels in school and university. Since homework as a mechanism to serve students to master different kinds of knowledge they studied in classroom is still important for every school or university on present educational system, teacher should positively observe this normal regulation to assign homework, by which students also clearly ascertain their weakness in different courses for the base of further development and progress. For example, there are many types of homework in my university, which is not confined to the traditional pattern of homework.(for example 的内容再扩充一下,前面说homework is benefical for students,下面在说明一下是怎么对你有益的,这样就可以在specific一点) If the teacher wants to know the levels of knowledge and experience apprehended by student, he can devise a subject or simple test and require the students to participate this practical activity to measure their capability in one subject.(这个句子支持了前面的not confined to the traditional pattern of homework 但是还是没有支持本段观点,是不是有点跑题了)

Although some people might hold that every student should have their own direction and opinion-- if imposing large amount of compulsory “works”(work,works 应该是作品的意思) on them, the stereotyped standard and pattern will produce a negative influence on their development and cannot broaden horizon of students for any subject they interest(are interested in), I think assigning proper amount of homework will definitely not become a negative impact, but will play a paramount role in adjusting syllabus for teachers, since losing interest only will occur in a exceptional situation-- assigning excessive amount of homework. From what have been discussed, teacher should assign homework every day in regular way, but should not assign it in large amount frequently.

Homework is the one of most methods (most method 是什么意思) for teacher to supervise their quality of teaching and, more important, to help students themselves to guide their study or adjust their schedule. However, according to the old aphorism (and I paraphrase  everything is a double-sword. Frequently large amount of homework will absolutely trigger the “negative switch” and hence turn the teaching way to wrong side; in such case, any teaching method is merely the effect of indolence.
总结:先学习了,lz的水平和词汇就不说了,再注意一下,切题应该没问题了。

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