【glamorousky草木也知愁candyrealm saavdro12-1月IBT综合备考大帖】之【口语】NO.2

glamorouskyUID：2459211

大帖中有05-08年11月的全部JJ（内含口语） https://bbs.gter.net/thread-897589-1-1.html（大家除完成口语作业外 参照机经练习）
口语作业以Delta为来源 两天发布一次

大家把自己的口语内容以录音或文本的形式发在楼里（这是一个互相促进的过程 不要担心自己的模板会被抄袭 因为也许你的模板并不完善 在修改他人的同时不断完善自己的模板 前人经验：在此过程中 收获远远大于付出。同时建议大家挂录音而不是文本，因为只有通过录音，大家的交流和点评才能真正的面对ibt speaking而不是纸上谈兵。可能有些版友抹不开面子，但是总有一天我们是要过这一关的，与其出去了要适应好几个月，在老外面前就脸红脖子粗得，还不如先在这里把底气和胆量练习出来，寄托给我们提供了这样的一个平台，那我们就利用，大家的水平没有多大的差距，所以没有人会嘲笑，我们来这里的目的只有一个就是相互督促共同进步）

由于一些朋友反应附件太大不方便上传 经过调整 采取以下具体互改形式：
一楼为本人所发题目以及各项其余简介要求等
二楼为本人的作业和本帖总结楼（内容及总结本帖中，大家作业的主要问题，已经需要强化或纠正的点，并且进行好的段子的推荐，鼓励，加分）
三楼开始完成作业的朋友把作业以邮件的形式发给上一楼和我  同时在本楼留下自己的邮箱地址 （上一楼人收到作业后在24小时内进行评点 并且发在自己的楼里）大家评点完后 我会做一最后总结


重点评点内容：
1 语法
2 内容
3 单词发音
4 整体语音语调
5 听者整体感受

第二次作业： 音频见附件 如没书 文本模式请大家在寄托或小马过河上自行下载
Delta（蓝） Speaking部分  QUIZ 2和QUIZ 4（question2.4）
交作业时间：12月7日晚10：00前

注意：请大家不要提前占楼
第一个发作业的朋友请直接把作业发给我278051038@qq.com
7日晚10：00前最后一个发作业的朋友请修改我的作业 我会在10：01发给你

请大家不要灌水~~

[ 本帖最后由 glamorousky 于 2008-12-6 12:34 编辑 ]

glamorouskyUID：2459211

总结楼

邮箱地址：278051038@qq.com

楼下作业点评：

泡面作业：

第一篇中有一处小错 all the cities--- whole city  see flowers blossomed---blooming flowers   修饰程度副词可以多样 actually indeed 可以总结一下:)  l例子稍显不足 其实第一篇景色交通可以再说的细一些   单词发音比较标准清晰  可以在适当的重点部分重读 语速控制得当 听起来令人很舒服

[ 本帖最后由 glamorousky 于 2008-12-7 22:41 编辑 ]

hyacinthUID：2184492

插下下队。。。

我记得你们除了口语还有一个作业的大帖。。。怎么找不到了。。。:(

aesrevoylfUID：2442700

:) :handshake
赞。。。

泡面UID：2513568

第二次作业已交

thank you!

邮箱：tena_1024@hotmail.com

aesrevoylfUID：2442700

StevenLee2009@hotmail.com

请原谅！欢迎拍砖！

泡面UID：2513568

拍下楼主的作业……
1，整个回答的都很流畅，用词亦很丰富，没有太多停顿，但是时间掌握的不够，2，3题超时，第四题还有十几秒没有讲，应该尽力填满空白，用总结的也可以。
2，语速很不错，但是有些部分似乎比其他部分快一点，应该尽量保持匀速
3，1，2题答的很好，内容和举证都很充分，第四题整体框架正确，但是有一些细节问题有误。比如，是对one group test 而不是two groups，但是影响不大
总体来说，值得我学习啊~呵呵

泡面UID：2513568

再拍下vet的口语作业

1，语音语调有点问题，需要经常跟读，模仿
2，前面两题例证给的不错，比较有说服力
3，最后一题中间停顿时间过长，就算没有话说，应该用well,i mean,that is to say之类的词填进去，千万不要空着
4，时间把握可以，语速也还可以，但是最好再稍微快一点点

aesrevoylfUID：2442700

拍下泡面的口语作业

第二次作业
track 3: the best place  to live
small a village...first of all, the climate (weather), and especially in spring you can see the beautiful flowers bloss, blossomed, all the city was decorated with colourful flowers,  on the other hand, as it is a small city there were not many crowded people and transportation, so it won't be contaminated...
   
  village: a. a settlement usually larger than a hamlet and smaller than a town
              b. an incorporated minor municipality
   city:     an inhabited place of greater size, population, or importance than a town or village
   唉，小村庄，和小城市，得稍微注意一下...
   
track 4: the long term exam or several short exam
  I prefer...the first of all, very usual (common), keep up with the class in time, secondly, make up with the knowledge you have missed or you do not understanding, ...

   选择一种观点，再提出了支持的两点原因，再有结尾的话，就更不错。
   So, that is why I choose to take several short examinations during the course for the reasons listed above.
  

track 39: sleep improve our ability to learn languae
  The prof. describes a study about the effects of sleep. Explain how the study support
s the connections between sleep and learning.
   
   while more group students...and another day, ...(最好在这强调一下晚上的睡眠)recover the memory greatly
  因为主题是睡眠和语言学习的关系，最好强调出12小时后的测试是因为，白天被测学生
  在获取其他信息或想其它事情，而遗忘，允许一晚上睡眠后，第二天记忆恢复提高的
  很快。 所以证明了睡眠对提高语言记忆力，甚至恢复遗忘的记忆是有明显作用的。
   一下是我个意见，不知合适否，欢迎拍砖，批评：
   In this lecture, the prof. gives new evidence that proved the theory that sleep can improve our ability to learn language.
   To reinforce this theory, the researchers performed an experiment on college students. On the morning, the students were
   trained to memory some difficult words. And then one group of students were tested after twelve hours in the evening,
   they lost most part of the words learned in the morning. However, the group students were allowed a good
   sleeping during the night. And they were retested in the next morning, Amazingly, their scores improved significantly. So,
   the researcher concludes that theory.


delta track 41： body language -----gesture and face (eye, smile)
a 总体来说，语言流畅，基本要点提出来了。
    但有些许不足：理解上有误差，
    例如原文是 This makes us the biggest communicators
    in the animal world, even without spoken language.
    你表达时说：Huaman beings can even communicate the animals
    without spoken language.
b  原文是smile is the most important, althouth lots of body languages
    are vary in different cultures, the meaning of smile is the same in
    every cultures.
    你转述and at last, smile is very necessary, although culture
    is vary from country to country, but smile has the similar..
c  开头没听懂，now is the materials we know that， 不知用In this lecture,
    the prof. explain to us that the body languate is very important in human
    being communication...
    不知怎样开头会好些...
d 此种类型题目不知，对应真题中，第几题，4或6? 请多指教。


   以上是我，不成熟的建议，如有冒犯还望见谅，从中我也获益匪浅...

   唉，大家加油吧，我还得向你多多学习！

aesrevoylfUID：2442700

值得收藏，研究...

我也是从版子里捞出来的

不知道版权在哪位了，感恩吧，呵呵...

泡面UID：2513568

非常感谢vet，点的很到位。
我觉得 自己一紧张，这个词就开始瞎用了……

aesrevoylfUID：2442700

拍下glamorousky的口语作业
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第二次作业

  3: the best place  to live
   
...my hometown Qingdao, a coastal city located in northern china, I think this is a good place to live, about what the climate there is molding enough for people adapting to it, secondly, the wind from the sea...take away the dust and other substances ... harm to ..., and make their fresh all the year around, finally, besides a large variety of vegetables, it produces sufficient sea food for local people, which has been approved to be kind of healthy food by nutritionist. That is why I think this a good place to live.    
   值得学习... 呵呵，楼主强，挑不出错误的了
   借来揣摩了...
   请教一下，不知楼主用来的形容“气候适宜居住”的词汇，是什么...唉，实在听不出来了

4: the long term exam or several short exam
  From my point of view,  I prefer several shorter tests through out the course. Firstly, most of us have kind of laziness when we
were persisting in our studies. The shorter tests stimulate students keep fixating on their studies, instead of craming for the final
exam in last few days of the term. And secondly, the short tests in （to）some ... extent offer the students a criteria wiil to adjust them
temp of learning, they confined the ... in their study progress and adjust them an effective way, through the shorter tests. That is why I think the several short tests is better than the one long exam in the end.
   仅有些小语法错误，时间超了5秒，其他挑不出来了...
    很值得学习！
39: sleep improve our ability to learn language

according to the materials perious of sleep between session so learning will help people retain what they learn, ...
the experiment was performed ... between two groups of the college students, the first group recognised the words in the morning,
and were tested 12 hours later, they lost most of they learning, the second group recognised at night, and retested after night sleep, they improved significantly, so.. it proves stance sleep can sandy memories, protecting them against later interferences were lost, any loss
appears to recover or restore memories (接上after a good night sleep是否会更好些）


   与听力原文的例子，有些许出入 one  goup of students was trained in the morning and tested 12 hours later, at night. During the 12hour period, the stu..s had lost much of their learning. The stu...s were allowed a night's sleep, and were retested the next morning, their
scores have improved significantly from the night before.
   把握主要观点较到位，例子准确，完整复述或转述还得多多加强...
   总体语言流畅，发音准确、清晰，值得我好好学习。

delta 41： body language -----gesture and face (eye, smile)
  总体感觉连贯，流畅，细节到位。但是说到，from different areas, (已到60秒)smile has the same meaning everywhere...
   需要加快速度，或者前面减少停顿时间，把后面的都说完。
  


[ 本帖最后由 aesrevoylf 于 2008-12-9 02:07 编辑 ]

glamorouskyUID：2459211

楼上修改的很认真啊 值得学习 :)
good place to live 这一篇不熟练 如果没办法即刻反应出一些句型 就作出固定模板 前两题基本模式是相同的 这样就可以节省许多思考时间 用来增加内容 这一篇history的例证不错 good sleep这一篇基本掌握要点  
41这篇是我没有下完整么:confused: 刚说到several reasons 中的first ...strange就停了
另外一篇实在是下不来 建议下次打包

整体说来 aesrevoylf (vet)语音语调有些口音 如果时间充裕的话建议多进行一些模仿练习  special english就可以 如果时间不够 那么尽量说的清楚就可以了 注意s和sh的发音 语速稍慢 想在短时间内覆盖尽可能多的内容建议加快语速

P.S 我第一篇中说的是mild enough

xlwxxyUID：2568970

还有没有啊啊  还想跟阿。。。

saavedroUID：2423190

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